Guess it depends on your definition of "quite a bit", but 2 velma sex scenes, an animated Daphne scene, new costumes, and voice acting is quite a bit for a monthly update release imo.
Ren'Py Let's Split Up Gang [v3] [Hentaku Studios]
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Seeing as I've established the Western NTR mega thread, I'll come in an leave my two cents after giving this a little run.
Scenes
7/10
The art is good and we've got animation going on. It's not my favorite art style, but it is definitely above average.
Story
3/10
Didn't even pay attention to it. The game was set up in which I could click things and make sex happen.
One of the main draws of NTR is the build up into the corruption. There's no tangible relationship with Fred and Daphne. Daphne talks about it, but there's no build up with it. All I had to do was cycle a few clicks 6-7 times and I had her naked. I honestly view this game as more of a "trainer" than a NTR. I didn't get an NTR vibe off this at all.
Disappointed that Velma is a slut right off the rip. She's ripe for corruption gameplay. F in the chat for that development decision. Shaggy and Scooby feel like they don't even exist. I saw shaggy once to buy a butt plug. I didn't even know he ran a shop. lol The music for Daphne's dancing scenes about made me throw my headset off. Not only is it terrible, but it's fucking loud. Also, the pubes on Daphne's face post blowjob, fucking gross. That's a weird Eastern NTR thing... don't... please don't...
All in all, the story feels super hollow. I recommend the dev go and play a bunch of the highly reviewed NTR's on F95. Get a feel for their story telling and how the've made corruption play out. If you want to stick with this trainer method, go look at Akaburs games. His trainer games are in the hall of legends. However, they're not NTR, so it'll only give you a great example of trainer method. For HIGHLY detailed NTR story telling, look at Seeds of Chaos. For just good overall NTR/Love route styled pacing and storytelling, go look at Nikraria's Night Lessons.
Overall, 5/10. I'd play it over some of the absolute JUNK people have made on here, but there's definitely better.
Scenes
7/10
The art is good and we've got animation going on. It's not my favorite art style, but it is definitely above average.
Story
3/10
Didn't even pay attention to it. The game was set up in which I could click things and make sex happen.
One of the main draws of NTR is the build up into the corruption. There's no tangible relationship with Fred and Daphne. Daphne talks about it, but there's no build up with it. All I had to do was cycle a few clicks 6-7 times and I had her naked. I honestly view this game as more of a "trainer" than a NTR. I didn't get an NTR vibe off this at all.
Disappointed that Velma is a slut right off the rip. She's ripe for corruption gameplay. F in the chat for that development decision. Shaggy and Scooby feel like they don't even exist. I saw shaggy once to buy a butt plug. I didn't even know he ran a shop. lol The music for Daphne's dancing scenes about made me throw my headset off. Not only is it terrible, but it's fucking loud. Also, the pubes on Daphne's face post blowjob, fucking gross. That's a weird Eastern NTR thing... don't... please don't...
All in all, the story feels super hollow. I recommend the dev go and play a bunch of the highly reviewed NTR's on F95. Get a feel for their story telling and how the've made corruption play out. If you want to stick with this trainer method, go look at Akaburs games. His trainer games are in the hall of legends. However, they're not NTR, so it'll only give you a great example of trainer method. For HIGHLY detailed NTR story telling, look at Seeds of Chaos. For just good overall NTR/Love route styled pacing and storytelling, go look at Nikraria's Night Lessons.
Overall, 5/10. I'd play it over some of the absolute JUNK people have made on here, but there's definitely better.
Thank you for the detailed review, I'll be sure to take all this into consideration (That being said, I've probably played 90% of NTR games on this site, I'm just not a good writer lol)
A lot the relationship is kinda baked in in my mind. Like, the player already *knows* Daphne and Fred, so I didn't think to spend much time establishing that, but the game should be made in a way that a non-fan of SD would be able to enjoy it too, so I'll try to flesh out the relationship at some point.
Shaggy is not in the game a lot right now, as I am focusing on Red, but Shaggy has some scenes drawn up already, I just haven't figured out when to put them in. Scooby is basically never going to show up, just to be extra sure of patreons rules.
Finally, about the music, I really tried to audio balance that song, but that is something I've never done, so I must have messed it up. (I'll probably eventually remove it entirely. Right now, it is basically just a reference song)
Daphne having sex is the climax (pun intended) I'm building towards in the game. It'll probably be a few updates before that happens, although I do have the art done for it and it is an amazing animated scene, so... keep an eye out.
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(This is so you can change how Daphne calls each, so she can go from saying "Vagina" to "Pussy" or "Snatch", that kinda stuff.)
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Bug Report: You can buy the Velma Pup Named Scooby Doo outfit: 50 snacks twice (I haven't seen if it actually needs to be bought twice as of yet or if there are 2 outfits by that name if you buy both but I will check the bought 1 and report it immediately... You can equip Velma Pup Named Scooby Doo outfit with only 1 bought... With each purchase of Velma Pup Named Scooby Doo outfit it costs 50 (6 tried for the 300 snacks I had) afterwards in the room with Red and Velma there is only 1 listed which I only tested for verification purposes.
I tried both those codes 3 or 4 times with the "That's like, wrong." result on both every time.
AND as a final note I got corruption to 96 and love to 69 and nothing I can find will drop her love any lower. Did I bypass something this time through?
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Well eww
AND at this time...
The character Red is clearly an alpha and would not ever eat his own creampie work.
Fred is a DUMB beta (like Forest Gumps dumber brother) and completely unaware of any sexual activity between Red and well... anyone.
Daphne is presently a vaginal virgin at end of content (I may have missed something but the notes I read say this will take a while yet)
Velma and Daphne have a lesbian scene but no pictures or animations exist for it AND Red doesn't show up until the middle of the scene so no one would be creampied at that point.
So long story short... Not yet if it does happen.
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Good catch, I had missed an if statement on the display of the button to buy that one.
RuhRoh is no longer the code, there was an actual thing for patrons this time, so I did not publicly release the code.
Not sure about the love thing, any sex act with Red should drop love and sex with Fred should raise it.
Looking into the code to double check, there was one training where love was set to "love -+ 1" instead of "love -= 1" so just changed that now, but everything else seems correct for removing love.
Thanks for the bug report
No, and there probably will not be. I really don't like cuck stuff where they turn the guy gay. Maybe like the other comment suggested Velma could eat cum out of Daphne or vice versa, but Fred will not be.
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another stellar update by mr ntr critic! i wanna give him a big wet kiss for all his hard work MWAH