VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Lewd Story [v0.149a] [HornyMonster]

4 stars, just like the number of player styles:

• dominant, aka abusive piece of shit
• pervert, aka creepy piece of shit
• romantic, aka "I'm a good human being" (if sometimes corny)
• neutral, aka "I'm a complete person I don't need them bitches"

I really liked this (on top of graphics and the plot doing their decent job) but alas there are just so many paths with a placeholder and the game is abandoned.

Great Dev work, but sadly the game is lacking content. The game is well made and offers multiple paths and choices, the paths are clearly represented and explained, as well as offers a lot of replayability.
The problem is that sex scenes are not rewarding, the characters do not have any personality and there is no entangled story to be interested in the game, it is very bland and plain.

This game is difficult to vote. There is average amount of content. Bit old graphics and not always most attractive characters. Story is somewhere around average. So everything together, you get poor game, because you will not miss anything, if you will not play it.

Why remove the quick bar? That was fucking stupid.
Story is meh, Almost all of girls were Great.
Explain how the first guy you meet is Michael and hes more good looking and taller than the MC. Sorry but the MC should be that guy an not someone who looks like hes in middle school with a little shadow on his face and a fucked up haircut.
What is it with devs having MC's being short and wimpy looking?
You have The MC and Stive. 1st meeting your shorter and next your the same height WTF?

Theres alot missing in the game its not worth playing at the moment. Never seen a game where there so much self-dialogue. Someone needs to play Being A Dik and WVM to help flesh out this game. There was no reason to put a ending when there so much to add and fix.

Exciting like a Saturday night fuck with a wife after 10 years of marriage.
No hardcore
safe sex scenes
short and badly represented sex scenes

The impression is a lot of devs are not really interested in porn, X-rated content, they just try to put together some kind of game for making some sort of money.

Porn comes from passion, talent, education.

Sum up: very boring.

I just played it and must say that I am disappointed.

The models look good and the animations are also fine, but the story and characters are lame as hell imo.

I was intrigued with the different stats, of course I played dominant but the choices don't really matter. The outcome is mostly the same except one or two "hallucinations" which are ultimately pointless. I guess the dev wanted to throw in some erotic scenes just for the sake of it but for me it just destroyed the build up. Further, you are not dominant since no one really submits to you, you take just a little bit of lead and the woman loves and goes with it...

The corruption tag is pointless as well since everyone seems insta horny from the start. Your "influence" just decide in what kind of flavour you get some scenes, not even a real difference. Most of the time it seems like cheap porn.

I love dominance/corruption + mother but unfortunately she was the worse content. She (like your sister) sees your dick and is instantly horny, you have no build up or real influence how you get into her pants - it just happens...

If I only wanted stimulating visuals I would watch porn, but I have higher expectations from an erotic game.

Normally I would simply say it is just not a game for me but since these features were advertised and the tags promised something different I will rate this game.

2 Stars for models and animations but the rest drags it down.

Models look hot but in-game their proportion is quite a bit off. There are okay frames, but in a couple they're not good at all.

The gameplay and story progression has the Dominant/Romantic/Pervert paths but it just makes things a bit tedious since you have to keep replaying the game to get all possible paths. Personally, I really don't like that.

Overall, nothing here makes me want to play future updates, there's nothing really exciting about this game so far.

its good , i just think the dev should chill with all this routes since it may take time away from the real interesting routes like the mom or sister . i still appreciate the idea though. as for the stats i really love that. its a fresh way to play the game gives more replayability. dont be discouraged brother but do take some advice where it could benefit you from a headache . good luck

This is probably the most unecessarily complicated RenPy game ever and for a Porn game I wonder why the dev decided to make it so difficult. I won't repeat what's been said before about the gameplay and mechanics but it's not just bad, it's terrible. And yet the renders and animations as well as the models are really good. There is no real continuation in one's choices and it's just a mess. 1 star for the imaging.

This game tries way too hard. First it starts as a way to over complicated visual novel with a million different routes where you can hardly play two routes/girls at the same time, where one seemingly random choice (who do you fantasize about) turns the entire game upside down. Then it tries to be a very shitty sandbox game where you have to earn money i mean "units", all the while still having navigate probably the worst walkthrough (outdated by the way) ever. Oh and let's not forget all those dumb stats, all they do is lock you out of routes without you even realizing it.

The game aspect of the adult game is so very bad and convoluted. The dev should have just turned this into a full fledged sand box games where the dom, perv, romance stat don't lock you into routes but work more as checks. eg. if you want to choose this option you need to have at least 10 dominance.

Either that or it should be a straight up visual novel, without money earning bullshit, without choose what you want to do timegaps (do you want to game, go to dinner, call your mom), and where only certain choices, two or three decide which route you will follow. There is no reason to not allow the player to go after both mom, teacher, sis, sis friend etc up until the last moment where you make a choice for different endings.

If i game ever needed a straight up remake from the ground up, this would be it. I have been here since the very beginning, where the sister didn't even have an ending (only ending was with neighbor daughter) and the game was already over complicated back then. Now it's almost unplayable. Unless the dev WANTS us to spend more time skipping through text we already read multiple times just so we can play the game 100x making only one different choice each time.

Now the models are pretty good looking (apart from the male ones) and the animations are nothing crazy, but pretty good. The premise starts out interesting, but having to go through the same premise a thousand times would make even the best ones seem boring.

I am confused somehow: I played previous versions of the game and as far as I can remember, there has been MORE content than there is NOW. (The Hotfix fixed that.)

The different paths to take (corruption, dominance, love and some kind of creep) are nice to have and will definitely lead to different scenes. Like other critics already mentioned, the quality of the renders vary too much: There are bad, non-animated scenes and there are well-made, animated ones.
I can't really follow a common thread through the story, which is another thing to criticize.

Jessy is hot af, but everything around her (animations, story) has to improve a LOT to make this game worth recommending.

Well, this game is controversal for me. Quality of renders is very good, animations are perfectly made. Background music is ok. But where it's missing something, is story. It seems little bit chaotic - no gradation, just a carousel of random events. I like like the paths though. Story telling is also strange. Overall, for me is this game chaotic story with awesome viusal. 6/10. [v0.14].

This game is crap if i could give it a zero i would have

Plot 0/5 there is no plot whatsever i have not seen this thing in another game congratsulations
Sex 0/5 few sex scenes with no passion and the mc is not participating
Endings 0/5 There are no hints no walkthroughs you have to play this crap again and again

Walkthrough does not make any sense goodbye and good ridance

I cant find any real plot to the game, there is a whole bunch of stuff that is not explained but if its a plot i have no idea, the strange back story at the start? what happened in virgin-city? am i playing as the guy or as the horned woman through the guy, some kind of crystal?

The writing is quite poor, as i have said before subs cant write Dom stories and doms cant write good sub stories, this game is a perfect example: the way the game is written forces a sub moment before all the "choices" on how to react to the women, jessy the first thing she does to you is make you out to be a fool(you could have been given a Dom choice to avoid this or at least be angry with her after), the jeanine route is just as bad, you have an unmissable sub part(being drugged, blindfolded and led like a pet) before being given the "choice" on how the player reacts to jeanine

There is not much content in the current build(most things are dead ends) but enough to see if you like the game.

"Choices" don't do anything, example: if you reject the "choice" to go for a walk or watch a movie you still do anyway and no matter which route you take the MC is always a simp(usual cant stay mad at her, why the hell not creator?).
If you are going to do different routes then you should change the tone of the text(MCs thinking and attitude towards people) throughout the rest of the game, otherwise you are not changing the character you are just changing the scenes you get to see and the character is always a simp.

I get you want to keep some things as a surprise for the player but none of the characters telling MC where they are going or what they are doing and forcing the MC to always go makes the MC more of a pet than a person.

The only good things are the art and some very nice animations.

Plot 0/5
Characters 0/5
Sex 2/5
Choices 1/5
Kinks 1/5
Art 4/5

The game story starts at a breakneck pace and never slows down. Sometimes this can be a good thing, but usually, it is due to the dev/author not taking time to fully flesh out a story. In this case, it is the latter of the two. The story this game relates feels more like a story outline than an actual story, each plot point presented feels like an author's note to themself along the lines of "And then the MC moves, he's not happy about it." This results in half a chapter's worth of exposition condensed into one emotionless sentence.

The story we do get seems to overly encourage one of the paths available between path choices. As an example, the MC gets angry at a practical joke the blonde pulls and for a few lines of dialogue, you can clearly see the author's preference for the domination path in the general text. In a game with paths as specific as this game offers, the general dialogue should remain as neutral as possible without leading us from one choice to the next.

The graphics aren't bad exactly, but they do feel a bit lazy. The renders are top-notch, though recognizable from other games.

Interesting game, though it's still in the beginning stages with a lot of choices left unplayable. So you will have to go back to the beginning and play again if the next release(s) fill these choices in.

The models are good -- only the busty ones seem playable now though.

The H scenes are on a short loop, though I think they are well done. Most developers do a good jb with the physics of the body, but they forget details like the hair and necklaces. E.g., when the body is on top of the sex partner, they will get the breasts hanging properly, but the necklaces still clinging to the body. This one makes an effort to get the hair swinging properly when the body moves (it could be better, but at least they try).

I look forward to the next release.

I'm sorry but, "My review is not available in the currunt version "
Maybe I'll improve my review when choices are available.
I think this game has potential but for now it doesn't feel like you have much choices as they are all locked in future versions of the game. This is tiresome knowing that many options are unavailable. Truth be told it might be worth waiting around for, it might not. I'll change my mind once i can actually see more of the story and game.

I enjoyed the game quite a bit, for what it is I might add. It’s not trying to be a deep game with an intricate story. Characters are fairly shallow, but not terrible. They are your expected tropes and they do their jobs. It’s fine by me honestly. I’m not really expecting every porn game to be super complex in terms of story and I’m not really judging one if it’s not trying to be in the first place

That isn’t to say the game shows no signs of effort put into it. It’s actually ambitious in its endeavors. The Ethos system gives players 3 different paths and that is, coupled with the amount of girls in the game, a lot of promised content. Each girl is supposed to have at least content in one Ethos and some will have content in all 3 with multiple endings.

Each path panders to different tastes making the game feel diverse. It’s also made very transparent which choice goes with which path so you can avoid paths that might not be your thing.

It should be noted that game is pretty short. You spent the first week basically choosing your alignment and you spent the second week working towards your preferred ending. Harem options aren’t a thing apparently and you can work on two girls maximum.

There is also not a terrific amount of content in the game yet. Many choices are greyed out for now. I can at least give credit to the game for being transparent about what content is there and what is new. You won’t have to trial and error your way to find new scenes that way.

So far Jessie and Kira have some of their routes finished. There are a total of 6 endings yet. While, again, that’s not much, at the very least it means that some stories are actually done already. I played them and found them enjoyable and if the game follows up on its promises this game could become fairly solid with a lot of content and replay ability. But let’s not count our chicken before they hatched.

On a side note, there are many references to the events of a different game and they’re really confusing at times. Apparently there was a big orgy in MC’s hometown and I never knew what to make out of that.

So overall, I liked what I saw. I don’t really think it is a 4 stars game yet, but I like to give it that rating regardless in good faith Dev follows through. Naturally, my rating will change depending on whether he can do it or not.

After playing for less than 10 minutes I gave up on the game. Not enough choices are available for this sandbox game. It's definitely not a VN or kinetic novel in any way. Games like this with multiple endings are definitely ones that I stay away from. Pretty lame when the dev can't come up with a strong storyline that multiple endings are needed. Just a waste of time especially if you have to save constantly so you don't get multiple game overs or miss a bunch of content. Why have 4 different paths when one strong storyline could make this a pretty decent game. Maybe in another 6 months if the storyline gets a major overhaul I might try the game again. Until then, there are a lot of really good VN's with great character depth and storylines to make you keep playing.

Good luck to the dev to make people more interested in the game.

Its not worth your time if you wanna try out this game,there are so many bad things that i dont even know where to start but i'll give it a try :
1) incomplete routes (there are bits and pieces all over the game but nothing worth while)
2) boring story
3) forced content (you're on a date with the main LI aka your sister and out of nowhere she runs off to the bathroom not to relieve herself but to have a quickie with another girl and guess what you cant do anything about it except chose not to see it)
4) characters are simply made out of cardboard lifeless and most of the time you dont feel like you're talking to someone alive but to some sort of robot
I could go on and on but you get the idea,it might be worth checking after a year or so if it doesnt get abandoned and gets more content and ofcourse CHOICES which imo are the most important in a game.