oof, this game can't get a break in the review score, even though the quality is there among top tier - carefully crafted backgrounds(just a bit too much filters , to obfuscate familiar assets I guess), characters(Rachel looked very unique, Chubs and Feio faces as well), story clearly inspired by 80s era movies, like "Once upon a time in America", sex scenes with some elbow grease put into it, what with different angles, fluids(Dana's drip is crazy
), expressions and writing, and a bit of storytelling flair, like "Jacky's world effect".
Overall, it's pretty solid package, that suffered from a bit of slowburn in storytelling, and from big timeskip that cut a game into 2 separate parts, alienating those who loved the prologue with bit more romantic and teenager drama, and those that liked more "player reigns, so here's a bit of power fantasy" present part, but were annoyed that prologue is currently majority of the content.
So main fault would be only unfinished state(because I'd wager there's plenty of room to insert some side stories and flashbacks that were happening while MC was conquering his London's seat Mafia 3 style), which is the reality we have to deal with in this mostly crowdfunded industry - would love to see this in complete form some day.
. Maybe adapting seasonal / book release format would appease some people? Idk
And a bit of excessive description -dev should have confidence in his renders - once it's established for players that facial expressions and background detail are there for a reason, not by accident or some stock asset placeholders, you can just draw attention to them by creating movement that attracts the eye with transition between frames.
Anyway, I hope dev doesn't completely abandon work on adult projects, he clearly has passion and aptitude for it, just maybe not the planning-marketing part(which can be said for majority of devs, but worth pointing out when it's the ONLY thing lacking).