Edit 2: I tried to just proofread everything but the script is so fundamentally garbage that only a complete rewrite from someone who isn't retarded could save it.
I mean, wow. I remember it just being shitty grammar and spelling but it's not. It's like it was written by someone who is cringe incarnate and doesn't have a good understanding of English.
Poor grammar and spelling. Images of some obnoxious weeabo keep popping into my head whenever I try to read the dialogue. Are you writing a story or are you talking to people online?
Nothing in this game makes sense.
The renders make this game look like it's going to be a lot better than it actually is. Imagine getting a gift for free. This gift is in an immaculate, mahogany box wrapped in extravagant, gold wrapping paper then you look inside and find ... a turd. The people that would be all happy about the packaging while completely ignoring that they just opened a box to a wet turd are the people that would give this game 5 stars.
Edit: You have to understand that the renders are so fucking great and crisp but everything else is so awful that the stark contrast gives me a feeling of great revulsion.
I mean, wow. I remember it just being shitty grammar and spelling but it's not. It's like it was written by someone who is cringe incarnate and doesn't have a good understanding of English.
Poor grammar and spelling. Images of some obnoxious weeabo keep popping into my head whenever I try to read the dialogue. Are you writing a story or are you talking to people online?
- A mix between way too formal and internet slang no one would use in real conversation or even say in their heads.
- That's really bad for something that's supposed to be a visual novel.
- Learn how people talk, dude. No one says "WTF" in real life. Also, it's not "cashes". It's just "cash". Get a proofreader. I'm calling bs on that "professional writer" you got.
- There's actually not a lot of scenes so I think they're seriously thinking of having the story carry the game
Nothing in this game makes sense.
- I got the gist of the story but I actually can't sit through any dialogue without cringing at how terrible it is so I just speed through. Then at some point, I find that I can't even roll back.
- A lot of times, I'll look back through the log because I feel like I missed important context but I actually didn't. The characters just start talking about something like I should know about it.
- I don't know what working out even does, nothing was explained.
- Bugs everywhere - message notifications when there aren't any more messages, weird screen blinks, can't even get to some places in free roam without the fast-travel UI, etc.
The renders make this game look like it's going to be a lot better than it actually is. Imagine getting a gift for free. This gift is in an immaculate, mahogany box wrapped in extravagant, gold wrapping paper then you look inside and find ... a turd. The people that would be all happy about the packaging while completely ignoring that they just opened a box to a wet turd are the people that would give this game 5 stars.
Edit: You have to understand that the renders are so fucking great and crisp but everything else is so awful that the stark contrast gives me a feeling of great revulsion.