VN Ren'Py Life in Windvale [v0.1] [Vol_games]

[SpyderArachnid]

Honestly, it's not all that bad. Pretty decent start. Will spoiler the rest of my thoughts.

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Otherwise, it's good. Simple NTS slice of life. I thought the early ending was funny "And they lived happily ever after. The end.". Like, why play an NTS game if you don't want NTS? Either way, good job on this. I had my little issues with a couple things, but overall, it's a good start.

Thanks, and best of luck with your game.

 

[GamingSavant]

As generic AI slop goes, this wasn't terrible. I might check out future updates. Swinging branches are extremely complex and few do them just right, so that's the big hurdle with all these dialogue choices being put out at the start.

 

[LksLight]

Yet another AI slop... I swear these seem to be made by the same person.

 

[Grimrosenberg 27]

Im getting this and seeing the script thats halfway through the game, seems really promising even if I experianced half the chapter xD

 

[Fapbert]

A simple search with tags and filters reveals there are almost 1200 games here with the "ai cg" tag. Around 120 of those also have the "netorare" tag. Only 10% of AI games are NTR. It's like you whiners specifically search those tags only so you can lie and misrepresent every AI game as NTR. Pathetic really. Never mind the fact all of you constantly use the same "AI slop" phrasing in all your posts. I'm thinking perhaps YOU are AI (Or AU-Artificial Unintelligence in this case)?

Edited "over 1200" to "almost 1200"

 

[4ZeR0]

am i misunderstanding something? i thought netoraSe is the mc stealing the girl away from other people, and netoraRe is other people sleeping with the mc's girl. the very first scene is some hard netoraRe, but the intro post here says it's netoraSe that's unavoidable?

In general terms, NTR = MC gets cheated on, NTS = MC lets his girl sleep with other people and enjoys it. The first thing you described is generally referred to as Netori where MC is the one sleeping with girls who are in relationships

 

[Equirah]

am i misunderstanding something? i thought netoraSe is the mc stealing the girl away from other people, and netoraRe is other people sleeping with the mc's girl. the very first scene is some hard netoraRe, but the intro post here says it's netoraSe that's unavoidable?

NetoraRe - MC's girl gets taken away from him
NetoraSe - MC shares girl with others (how open varies)
NetoRI - MC steals other's girls

 

[GamingSavant]

The concept is focused around sharing and loaning. Dialogue implies there's ground rules that can be set like joining in for threesomes/foursomes and swinging, but we'll have to see.

 

[Claudio83]

Good start for a netorase novel, beautiful AI graphics and animations... there is a couple of bugs (error: 'name mcinterestedinotherwomen is not definited').
I'm eager to see more in the future, so good luck with your project Dev!

 

[yenidena]

am i misunderstanding something? i thought netoraSe is the mc stealing the girl away from other people, and netoraRe is other people sleeping with the mc's girl. the very first scene is some hard netoraRe, but the intro post here says it's netoraSe that's unavoidable?

nope nts is where mc is encouraging the fmc or female to fuck around, close to swinging or sharing

 

[Cavalo 23]

Gg

 

[Ozygator]

good start with a BANG!

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MC should also join the party

Wouldn't be a cuck centered game if he did... And that would defeat this one, and all the other AI generated games on here in the past 3 months.

 

[Ozygator]

am i misunderstanding something? i thought netoraSe is the mc stealing the girl away from other people, and netoraRe is other people sleeping with the mc's girl. the very first scene is some hard netoraRe, but the intro post here says it's netoraSe that's unavoidable?

No, Netorase (NTS) is the MC being a willing cuck. Netorare (NTR) is the MC being an unwilling cuck.

Netorori (sp?) is the MC fucking all the other women, and his wife/gf NOT fucking everything with a dick.

 

[Flamersx]

We have a comedian as a developer; Those who read without omitting know what I speak

 

[Ozygator]

Honestly, it's not all that bad. Pretty decent start. Will spoiler the rest of my thoughts.

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Otherwise, it's good. Simple NTS slice of life. I thought the early ending was funny "And they lived happily ever after. The end.". Like, why play an NTS game if you don't want NTS? Either way, good job on this. I had my little issues with a couple things, but overall, it's a good start.

Thanks, and best of luck with your game.

Nice summary, but just pointing out that you wouldn't really have the NTS or NTR fetish, as depicted in 99% of those type stories/games, if the MC didn't have a shrimp dick.

Almost ALL the NTS and NTR games/stories have the shrimp dick MC and all the other guys hung like porn stars because otherwise why would the MC want to see or have his wife/GF fuck rando dudes in order for her to feel 'fulFILLed"? It's a self-justification (for the MC's who even try to justify it) that the MC feels inadequate and that's why it's 'ok' for the wife/GF to fuck around, because he's lacking and can't give her what she 'needs'.

Without the MC having a shrimp dick, and all the other guys being porn dicks then the 'logic' that the wife/GF prefers sex with them would go out the window. It might also alienate those who self-insert the shrimp dick MC, never know on that one.

In short, if you got rid of the shrimp dick MC you'd kill a good part of why these stories are made.

 

[Ozygator]

I like netorase, so I making this game. But I understand, this is a niche within a niche. There will be a future standalone version with no netorase and swinging content.

If you actually do make this version, make it the Netorori (?) version, give the MC the porn dick and all the other guys the 'normal' ones. That way all the other women would love the MC for his giant dick too. Would be a justification of the reverse NTS/NTR trope you've done in this version.

 

[Artist271]

Yet another AI slop... I swear these seem to be made by the same person.

There's a feature to exclude tags, put "Ai cg" and you saved yourself one less reason to complain.

 

[SpyderArachnid]

Nice summary, but just pointing out that you wouldn't really have the NTS or NTR fetish, as depicted in 99% of those type stories/games, if the MC didn't have a shrimp dick.

Almost ALL the NTS and NTR games/stories have the shrimp dick MC and all the other guys hung like porn stars because otherwise why would the MC want to see or have his wife/GF fuck rando dudes in order for her to feel 'fulFILLed"? It's a self-justification (for the MC's who even try to justify it) that the MC feels inadequate and that's why it's 'ok' for the wife/GF to fuck around, because he's lacking and can't give her what she 'needs'.

Without the MC having a shrimp dick, and all the other guys being porn dicks then the 'logic' that the wife/GF prefers sex with them would go out the window. It might also alienate those who self-insert the shrimp dick MC, never know on that one.

In short, if you got rid of the shrimp dick MC you'd kill a good part of why these stories are made.

Not always. The MC doesn't have to have a tiny dick for NTS to make sense.

Look at something like College of Mysteria. MC has a big dick but just has a fetish for sharing. An MC can have a big dick and still have a fetish for sharing (seeing his girl get fucked by another man). The MC doesn't have to have a small dick for it. Some get off on the idea of "reclaiming" their girl afterwards.

As for the woman side of it, again, the MC doesn't need to have a tiny dick. MC could have a massive dick compared to the other guy she is having sex with. It's the thrill of having sex with someone that isn't their partner. Regardless of dick size. Or just their man watching them get taken by another man.

The tiny dick protagonist and massive dick antagonist is mostly an NTR trope, because they can't come up with anything else. So, they just have the girl get addicted to big dick because her boyfriend has a tiny one and can't satisfy her. Pretty much every single NTR story that lacks creativity.

It's entirely possible to have a big dick MC with a big dick antagonist. Because then it is no longer about typical girl gets addicted to big cock, and ends up being more about the person, the situations they are in, and the cheating as a whole. It makes a better story than "durhur big dick gib me moar" lol.

 

[deuae]

Joiplay this error.

 

[vol_games]

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It is not going to work currently. I am doing a proper port for android.
Some assets need to be renamed, which is why this is happening. Sorry.