Version: 0.5.3
Design
Nice artwork. I like the various attractive body types in the girls. Personally like Molly's design - hope to see more of her. However;
Janice and Lily's default drawings are
outlined too thick (in comparison with MC and Tara). And Tara's fighting pose
looks too confident for scenes where she obviously is upset.
The subtle
animations are a big plus. Janice's blowjob scene had a really good loop, I couldn't tell where it ended! But the drawing of her head looked
too flat and moved a bit too fake.
Content and flow
There is surprisingly a lot of content/events, however; nothing that gave me more than a brief stiffy. For now, the events consist of the MC getting into mildly suggestive scenarios with his family.
A lot of items to click on for trivia (that I wouldn't say necessarily push any intriguing narrative except for cute details) - makes me anticipate searching for items to progress the story in future builds.
The order in which events unfold is
jumbled. For example:
- Janice's character being in living room after an event of her going to work or her room.
- in Janice's bedroom; her character disappearing from the background when you interact with an item.
- when MC's phone is damaged from sinking in pool, it would be immersive for the phone icon in the HUD to not work as well - there was also no follow-up to that event as he never had to get the phone fixed.
There also appears to have some
drawings missing; like when MC and Lily go to mall; we don't get to see Lily's 'risqué string bikini'.
Events are limited to one unique animated drawing. There is obviously a lot of opportunities for more erotic images per event, such as when MC helps Lily move the desk; there was a good chance to show another image when MC was tugging Lily; to see MC's POV of Lily's ass or when they fall; see her sitting on his lap.
It would help a lot in making scenes actually fap-worthy but I guess that's where the issue with cost of drawings from an artist comes in.
Story
Story is pretty much the ongoing of the family living together and your typical family dynamics - bubbly sister, tsundere sister, sexually fustrated mother, and boring beta male protag. Choices made are inconsequential so it reads like a VN.
I don't have a problem with any of these story elements but if so then something needs to do the heavy lifting. That being the art and eroticism of the game which is
lacking in this one.
Interface and bugs
There are a number of mechanical issues and bugs that lower the overall quality of the game. I'll list them out in the discussion thread, in hope the dev can make use of it.
In conclusion, the art is nice and story/dialogue/plot is mediocre but cliché. Erotic scenes are short, frankly tame and lack enough art to savour the moment. Lastly, the game looks unpolished and behaves buggy.