The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs...
(01/10/2018 - Original Review - Demo)
This visual novel/game shows a lot of promise...
The visuals of the characters are spot on, even though I could swear I've seen the girls face in some other visual novels... The backdrops although well done, look super clean and bit too orderly to feel real... Especially when you see the items on the food markets shelves...
The script is well done so far, with no spelling/grammar errors that I noticed... The plot is basically the male protagonists old college buddy has asked him to host his daughter in his apartment/condo while she attends music classes in the city... From there it is pretty much how their lives proceed living together... This visual novel/game thus far seems to be leaning towards a love/romance story... She calls him uncle, due to how close the college buddies were, but they don't really have any blood relation... There is hint at a possible twist, with the girls father having an affair in the city each weekend, when he plans to come into the city to check up on his daughter, each time... How that will effect things or play out is unknown, if anything...
Overall, I like how the dialogue/monologue, as well as overall story has played out so far in this Demo version... Not sure if this is a demo in the sense of being an introduction, or if this is just a public version of a game that is already further into development? In any case, I enjoyed what little content this demo had... I'm intrigued to know more about this story, and hope any future content continues to have a deep and meaningful story... It's also a breath of fresh air that this story is not another family sex theme, but instead shows a lot of promise towards being a meaningful love/romance story between two non-related adults... Only time will tell how this story will actually progress, but I'm hopeful, based off what I've seen thus far...
(02/09/2018 - Review Update - v0.05)
Not a bunch more content added between the Demo version and this release... There is more character development and choices available between the protagonist and Mary... The choices seem to be leading in two directions, either the protagonist is a gentleman and the love/romance part of the story seems to advance a small bit, or the protagonist can be indifferent and a tiny bit mean towards Mary which gets a more negative response from Mary...
There are a few more erotic themed scenes, but not a bunch, mostly just accidental walk-ins... I still like the feel of this turning into a nice love/romance story, and feel there is some decent character development and meaningful character interaction happening... Which makes it feel like a very good visual novel thus far... The attention to detail with the story and character visuals is still really good...
Overall, even though this update didn't add a huge amount of more content from the Demo version I played before, I still think it shows a lot of promise, and I look forward to keeping up with this obvious love/romance story, because that is right up my ally... Keep up the great work...
(03/25/2018 - Review Update - v0.10)
New content is pretty well on par with prior content... Only big events included the introduction of Mary's friend and co-worker who seems to see a spark between Mary and the protagonist that Mary is, so far, unwilling to openly admit... Mary's mother also comes into the story, and it looks like she may or may not become a problem with Mary's growing infatuation with the protagonist...
The only issues I ran into were a few spelling errors... As well as wondering why the protagonist appears to be a little distant in the growing relationship... You don't get very much inner monologue about his feelings towards her until the moments before he goes to sleep usually... So it is really unclear as you select choices related to building a love/romantic based relationship, if the protagonist is actually having any genuine feeling towards her or is just acknowledging what he perceives as her building feelings... It's just not really clear from his perspective, for the moment... Mary, though, is definitely falling in love for the protagonist, as you make that line of choices for the protagonist... Based off her behaviors and looks...
All in all, it's still going strong... It is definitely a slow building relationship, at least from the protagonists side of the equation... I look forward to future content... This go around I'll give it a bit more time for a few content releases before checking back, to give it time to grow some more...