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TheHuds

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Overview:
In LifeStyle you follow the lifestyle of a working man, who goes through some troubles with his wife and her friend.​

Thread Updated: 2024-06-17
Release Date: 2024-06-17
Developer: HDSQ -
Censored: No
Version: 1.2
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac, Android
Language: English
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joryh

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Maybe you should try adding videos instead of still images... anyway, good luck on your new game! dont abandon it please
Should try to come up with a useful description. Cause all that vague thing is doing for me is acting as ignore-bait. Can't be assed to actually tell me what a game is about, acting like it's some pulitzer bait waiting to be discovered, and I can't be assed to waste my time with it. Plenty of other games out there actually telling me what they're about.
 

Trasher2018

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Aug 21, 2018
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Ok - there is nothing.

It is 100% kinetic - there are some other rooms but they only are there to offer a back button - you and the wife dont even have names.

The "UI" is not existent and the englisch is hard to follow (the MC has a problem when the James guy (others do have names) touches his wife (your wife in that case) - yeah englisch am I right?^^)

Sorry - this is just a Twine Test at best and nothing that you can try to build a patreon out of.

First the dev has to understand how CSS and HTML layouts work or basic images - and try to put in some effort. I mean ... rly? This is not much content and on your last page you get a mistake like "mensage" instead of "message" - and repeating text? And cant even bother to use a bit of editing to have a decent image?

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This would be fine if there wasnt already a patreon to grab money and this would be just a way to test twine and how to build a game with it ... but in this case the dev has to accept criticism for a rushed pile of images and strings of text.

This is so low effort ... its borderline offensive.
 

TheHuds

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Mar 8, 2021
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Ok - there is nothing.

It is 100% kinetic - there are some other rooms but they only are there to offer a back button - you and the wife dont even have names.

The "UI" is not existent and the englisch is hard to follow (the MC has a problem when the James guy (others do have names) touches his wife (your wife in that case) - yeah englisch am I right?^^)

Sorry - this is just a Twine Test at best and nothing that you can try to build a patreon out of.

First the dev has to understand how CSS and HTML layouts work or basic images - and try to put in some effort. I mean ... rly? This is not much content and on your last page you get a mistake like "mensage" instead of "message" - and repeating text? And cant even bother to use a bit of editing to have a decent image?

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This would be fine if there wasnt already a patreon to grab money and this would be just a way to test twine and how to build a game with it ... but in this case the dev has to accept criticism for a rushed pile of images and strings of text.

This is so low effort ... its borderline offensive.
Patreon is Free, the game is just testing a new tool. but thx for feedback.
 

stahalle

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Jul 11, 2018
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is the mc going to be a cuck that likes to see his wife getting fucked or are you planning to make a route where he is unaware of what is happening?
 
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Fapbert

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Should try to come up with a useful description. Cause all that vague thing is doing for me is acting as ignore-bait. Can't be assed to actually tell me what a game is about, acting like it's some pulitzer bait waiting to be discovered, and I can't be assed to waste my time with it. Plenty of other games out there actually telling me what they're about.
It's NTR, I already know what it's about.:LUL:
 

Trasher2018

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Aug 21, 2018
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Patreon is Free, the game is just testing a new tool. but thx for feedback.
Ok. I havent checked the page, just saw the link.

But my criticism is still valid - but at least now it is not offensive to show it ^^

You shouldnt put this out this early - this wont help you nor any player.

And be sure to control your release and try to avoid stuff like on that last page - that screams "I dont give a fuck!" to everyone. Some typo like with the "message" can happen, but especially with so few content its an issue that shouldnt happen if possible.
 

TheHuds

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Mar 8, 2021
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Ok. I havent checked the page, just saw the link.

But my criticism is still valid - but at least now it is not offensive to show it ^^

You shouldnt put this out this early - this wont help you nor any player.

And be sure to control your release and try to avoid stuff like on that last page - that screams "I dont give a fuck!" to everyone. Some typo like with the "message" can happen, but especially with so few content its an issue that shouldnt happen if possible.
By no means, I couldn't care less. Constructive feedback is always welcome, and I handle opinions very well. I've had a fast-food chain for a few years now, and I've recently started getting into games because it's something I really enjoy. I'm still learning things, which is normal. I don't let contrary thoughts affect me; it's normal for everyone to think differently.
 

TheHuds

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o mc vai ser um corno que gosta de ver a esposa sendo fodida ou você está planejando fazer um percurso onde ele não sabe o que está acontecendo?
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Ainda não sabemos se ele vai gostar ou não; de qualquer forma, a ideia seria você poder escolher com qual caminho você mais se identifica.
 
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