1.50 star(s) 6 Votes

Fapbert

Newbie
Jun 7, 2020
71
220
Don't use "Ty" instead of "Thank you" when the characters are actually speaking to each other. It's annoying. Especially when one of the characters is called Tyrone.
 
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SupremeAI

Newbie
Game Developer
Apr 20, 2024
91
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Actually, the problem seems to lie not just in the fact that this game feels more like a demo, but also in the presence of text errors.

I didn't mean to offend with my comment, and I genuinely hope the developer succeeds in improving the game.
 

wolves132

New Member
Feb 3, 2018
1
0
There is usually a separate like for mobile downloads but i dont see one here even though it has the mobile game tag
 

Micktrinus

Newbie
Oct 1, 2017
37
46
Needs "kinetic novel" tag because there is no game at all, it's just "Click to see the next part of the story." Also, in future updates, probably going to need a NTR tag, cause that's how it feels like it's going.
 

stahalle

Engaged Member
Jul 11, 2018
2,170
3,907
Needs "kinetic novel" tag because there is no game at all, it's just "Click to see the next part of the story." Also, in future updates, probably going to need a NTR tag, cause that's how it feels like it's going.
i agree it needs the kinetic tag but it already has the netorare tag.
 

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xanoss

Member
Game Developer
Jun 6, 2020
248
1,034
feedback:
Maybe color code dialog between people. I would look into make <div> for characters, if you download my last 2 games you can see how I did that in my twine stylesheet

also run your dialog through chatgpt or somthing to help with your grammer and sentence structure, i feel like the english is a little broken at times
 
May 27, 2017
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Not even a game yet
It's just:
"Click this one blue text 50 times" (literally only one choice), with no branches, yet not even the main path is finished.
Should make the version 0.2 instead of 1.2
 

xanoss

Member
Game Developer
Jun 6, 2020
248
1,034
Not even a game yet
It's just:
"Click this one blue text 50 times" (literally only one choice), with no branches, yet not even the main path is finished.
Should make the version 0.2 instead of 1.2
yea but also not all games are "games" some are more vn's which is fine, because even vn's usually just give you an illusion of choice, and if you pick the wrong choice it will just skip a sex scene so most people go one path anyway
 

zweistein

Newbie
Dec 6, 2017
82
21
I don't like the direction of this game... but the most important thing is to observe 3w ie. pay VERY CAREFUL attention to the letter size of folders and files!!!
 
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Tyrranus

Well-Known Member
May 4, 2017
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needs kinetic tag and some actual content. Seems as its going its just gonna be nothing but a blacked cuckold game with amateurish writing
 
May 27, 2017
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yea but also not all games are "games" some are more vn's which is fine, because even vn's usually just give you an illusion of choice, and if you pick the wrong choice it will just skip a sex scene so most people go one path anyway
There is a difference between a novel with choices, that actually do something, even if that something is just missing out on a scene or two
Vs
A bunch of images pulled off the internet and hastily thrown together, with not a single choice at all, with it all leading nowhere as the path isn't even remotely finished yet, despite having a "1.2" as the version number
 
1.50 star(s) 6 Votes