VN Ren'Py Light and Dark [v0.2] [Neko-Hime]

[bamachine]

...You know, that actually makes a lot of sense. Or, well, at least it would, were it not for the fact that Maou-Sama, Neko-Hime's other currently active project, still has decent enough writing... Maybe what we are seeing in this game is equal to a "rough draft" and isn't intended to be more than a really crappy placeholder?

-Mal

Maybe the other game has a paid writer or proofreader but they wanted to try and do this one on the 'cheap'.

 

[jphoto802]

Every single sample photo set to "artificial, absolutely flat lighting regardless of location" is an automatic no from me.

 

[rambo455]

so i gotta ask when why does the mc when first time you see them talk look like a 12 year old yet talks like its barely 2 ?

 

[Evil-Neko]

so i gotta ask when why does the mc when first time you see them talk look like a 12 year old yet talks like its barely 2 ?

Because he knows how to get in his Mom's pants ^^

 

[MalLiz]

so i gotta ask when why does the mc when first time you see them talk look like a 12 year old yet talks like its barely 2 ?

Well... The game has some insanely bad writing overall, so I guess we can all just blame that. I still don't get it myself though... None of the dev's other games were this poorly written.

-Mal

 

[Dragon1982]

so i gotta ask when why does the mc when first time you see them talk look like a 12 year old yet talks like its barely 2 ?

Actually, the MC said within his own head he realizes his family (especially his mom) like listening to him talk like that and notices things work in his favor that way so he knowingly keeps doing it to make them and himself happy. Plus he looks 12 because he most likely is 12, hence the need for the flower patch as well as the fact if this was on Patreon, it would get banned faster than i can count to 3.

 

[AlBetGam]

Well... The game has some insanely bad writing overall, so I guess we can all just blame that. I still don't get it myself though... None of the dev's other games were this poorly written.

I dunno, I remember trying out Maou-Sama way back when and giving up after maybe an hour because the writing was pretty trash.

Granted I didn't make it anywhere near an hour in this game so I guess you could be right in the sense that this game is more poorly-written than the dev's other poorly-written games. But I don't think writing has ever really been his strong suit.