Reviewing this game has been a bit tricky, as it didn't quite match my initial expectations. The storyline itself is charming, and I particularly enjoyed the writing style. The characters are rememberable and nicely showcased by the developer. However, there was a slight issue of excess. It felt like preparing a delicious dinner, only to overcook it.
I found some parts of the story that needed to be read to progress to the next level of actions to be somewhat like fillers. While I wouldn't have minded it if they were more interesting, they seemed to follow a repetitive pattern, making it feel like a bit of a chore. In a good book, even the slower parts keep you engaged, but this game didn't quite hit the mark in that regard.
Overall, the story is interesting, but I'd rate the game as fairly average for now. There's potential, but the game seems to be struggling with an excess of less engaging content, preventing it from reaching its full potential.
Update 2 Stars:
I kept on reading, hoping things would get better, but by the time I hit chapter 6, I had to give up. It felt like the game was just going around in circles, repeating the same stuff over and over again.
All my senses told me to skip some of the text at one point but I forced myself to read. The scenes were not good in this game either, thanks to the developer's puzzling choice of adding a blur effect to still images in an attempt to create depth of field. It ended up giving me a slight headache. Adding to the disappointment, there isn't much sexy content in this game and most were quite bad, with weird distances and poses.
But the real problem, at least for me, was how much the game repeated itself. Yeah, the story and characters had their moments, but they were overshadowed by this never-ending cycle of monotony.