naughtyroad With every update, I fall for Macy that much more. To see her fully embrace her feelings and just go for it was extremely gratifying, as well as frickin hot.
You've done an amazing job of writing a father's fears and regrets for the MC, especially with regards to his perceived failure to protect his children from their hurts. That sense of duty to protect is so key to his whole personality. That dream sequence where he's
chided for focussing on getting intimate with Denise instead of protecting her was so on point for him.
I also loved how you did Denise's Anxiety Scene. As my radio keeps informing me, a lot of us are dealing with anxiety and depression, and this scene visualized that feeling that I've personally had very well. Almost too well. I actually stopped and had to take a breather. I hope that the feel of that scene isn't coming from personal experience, but if it is I hope you're doing better.
With the work crew wrapped up, and the progress we've made on the homefront, it feels like we are close to the end of our story (especially with how this update ended). All I can tell you is that I am eagerly but patiently awaiting the next update.
Sweet angel Denise, you lewd mastermind, your plan is almost complete.
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