- Sep 28, 2018
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For whatever it's worth, the update was good but I also thought the dialog & some of the scenes dragged on too much.
Sometimes it was just innuendo after innuendo or they seemed to talk in circles too much.
Innuendo and things like that can be good to have, but if you add too much of it the overall quality of the writing goes down. To the point where the dialog isn't advancing, just finding different ways to say (or imply) the same thing over and over again.
Sometimes it was just innuendo after innuendo or they seemed to talk in circles too much.
Innuendo and things like that can be good to have, but if you add too much of it the overall quality of the writing goes down. To the point where the dialog isn't advancing, just finding different ways to say (or imply) the same thing over and over again.