Good stuff.
Especially enjoyable Protagonist. I wasn’t sure I’d have much interest in “being” a female but her demeanor and ascension is handled significantly well. As is design (and dialogue) of those around her; able to play her role off of and therefore I don’t feel any kinda icky way at all (nor apathy).
One critique might be some of the suddenness in her sexual interaction/mentality with Danny early on (I’ve only reached the “drunk” scene). So much care and consideration has been spent cultivating her somewhat careful personality that I just didn’t buy she would become so forthright in her own verbiage there, and in the forest earlier. I chose the Loyalty/Shared path and I’m aware the “hotwife” concept is about female empowerment - while also boldly succumbing to the secret slut within - but her ownership of that in the dialogue just didn’t play all that legit. Some minor tweaking there where she’s more apt to utter out loud, “TELL me I’m a sensational slut” as opposed to announcing that sort of thing herself. Or, “Danny? Am I a dirty gurl?/Oh YES you are, most definitely.” Followed by the thrill of absorbing that within herself, consciously. Might play a bit better. (Did that make sense? Less bold in her own announcements there, to summarize. I enjoyed it plenty, situationally. A little more finesse there might be worthy of her, however).
But beyond that I’m sold on her authenticity completely.
Game mechanics are thorough while not overwhelming. The pacing is surprisingly strong and methodical, pairing up with the good stuff spectacularly well. I love the tone of the entire thing. Again, carefully constructed and dynamically supportive of her character. And she is sublime, superb; presented ever-so-artfully. It can afford to simply be named “Lisa” cuz she’s all that and a box of chocolates. Plenty to be proud of there from a Developer standpoint and I look forward to discovering every advancing thought she might have left for me to devour.
I give it an A, just short of a plus. With a cumshot on top for encouragement tho ; )