Agree with You Mate,Atlast It's All Upto Palegrass he's the One to decide!and Plus Paul being a side Content...doesn't bother me Much or to the Story As Far I Know,the Main Storyline Palegrass already planned out and Not Much we Can Divert ...i think he has A Strong outline How the Story moves forward!
Just a moment in your comment you all say yes and we can't change anythingHey Zuhl,Hope we will definitely see Something more exciting than I Mentioned ...i m just helping in the Brainstorming session...Palegrass would Definitely Have something more creative and Erotic ,as in every Brainstorm session you just need A Spark To set the Fire blazin up higher and Higher!i m glad To be The Part Of the spark!!
Ok Another idea/spark Came To me!!
What If Paul is Makin Sure She wears A Red Bright Lipstick before the Start Of The session only sure to make the Cocks glistening with it Later!!
Also to Constrain Her moaning,Her buttplug being inserted into her mouth while He pounds her really Hard!
I don't know how Many have foot fetish!,when Lisa shows her Vixen/Bikini model scenes or in another situation with Paul and Friends really would be Great to see Lisa in High inch Heels strippers wear usually!!while the Heels staying on even during the session!!!
big and now ind then comment. Do you write that you actively support the brainstorming.
Not that I noticed that PaleGrass needs some brainstorming support^^
I only know that you were generally dissatisfied with the blackmail from Pau.
So all in all it affects me that you try to bring your imagination with you because it makes more sense for you and on the emist comments I also expressed my concerns about it and also that some ideas are interesting but Palegrass should be careful that he doesn't let himself be influenced by it too much and or seems to change the idents as an alternative scene there would also be a compromise but as I said you can't pack everything into one game. And how do you say too much cooking spoils the broth in the country? And I'm absolutely not a fan of foot fetishc but it doesn't matter what I'm a fan of^^I Can Definitely see How Hard you are trying to cater to everyone!!
I can see that Paul's Blackmail actually didn't made sense ...if you are in the Sharing route,But if you are in only cheating ...it would make some sense the Guilt driven Lisa!
But still I can clearly see it was not upto your writing...and it was kinda Forcely Fitted....since u mentioned u didnt have An interest in it and plus it's kind a side event it didn't bother me much as respect to the Main Story line!
As said one of the main benefitors of guilt driven Lisa would definitely be Paul,He can Capitulatize to his own benefit if he is using his Cards right!
And If he Finds Evidence that she is Cheating other than Danny...he can see through the Guilt and can Give Her do some nasty things and make his obedient slut...or it could be one of the plot points Of introducing Paul's friends who gets to see lIsa with other men than Danny..and when he gets to know Lisa is his friends sister...i think you know how to do some Nasty Things!!
Or
Paul Gets to know Her kinky desires through her Laptop or diary ...and Uses that to his advantages!!u know how Calvin acted with the sharing route in MMFF scene...but Paul is kinda more cruel and Sadist In Nature...with his Friends similar Characteristics...(but i think a lesser than Duncan and his buddies(i don't know how cruel you have designed them to be))
Paul's Blackmail route straight away Blowjob and Material to do That didn't sit well though!!I hope there will be Good scene in future though!
I hope not. I know thatHey Zuhl,Hope we will definitely see Something more exciting than I Mentioned