Changelog 28.10:
Added  
Scions of the Divine to B,for now
Had a lot of words to say before I got a headache,so,quickly:
As of technical aspects:
Writing, didn't see any crucial mistakes or something,just a few minor typos,like here
Doesn't really matter,but I would replace all "pupil" with student instead in profiles and some lines.
Regarding visuals,not the best ones I've ever seen,but they are fine.Also,it seems like posing and scenes get a bit better every new chapter.
Animations are custom,but look weak so far,moves need to be a bit smoother,otherwise,they look too plastic. And about smoothness ,I think it's the same for transitions between scenes.For example,let's take a scene with Layla's shopping,the mc says go,you got black screen with a caption,and in a next render they both already stand in the shop.You could show the shop for example first,and then characters entering it. Sometimes,it really useful to skip unnecessary parts,but I think it happens too often here
About the plot,at first,you actually got a wimp mc who annoys you with every line he says.And as it was said here before,didn't like a thing that there is always someone to solve his problems
-Can't afford paying rent - here's Layla's father
-Don't know what to do with your magic? - Suddenly,all the girls surrounding him know everything about magic or are the scions/mages themselves
Introduction of Layla's family was a bit too fairy,all these "sweetheart",etc,like they are talking to 10 y.o. kid,not 21 y.o. girl.I see how dev wanted to show how sweet they are,but I think it's a bit too much.
Sadly,I can't see affection points for Rayne,does it mean she's a side girl? 

And still yet,I don't really get what made her open to mc,all they had are 2 sparring sessions that showed he's stronger than her,was it enough?
As of good sides,you actually got an explanation why mc was like that and he actually shows his growth. Mc from the beginning and mc from the ending are 2 different people.Now he actuallly uses his brain
Btw,it took me 4 hours to finish it and the first chapter is mostly about world building.
So,overall,if you didn't play it yet,I would recommend to wait till episode 2,because this is where we will get an action. However,if you want to find out about the plot,go ahead