Pros:
-The mos hilariously unappetizing burger I've ever seen. As a lover of 3D Food art, this was shocking!
-I love pale people, and everyone's pale.
-The still shots of people fighting looked cool.
Cons:
-Probably the slowest visual novel I've ever read due to there being a 3-5 second transistion every 1-5 lines. I feel like this prologue would have just taken me 10 minutes
-Really bad engrish, and I feel like the creator is mostly just saying a bunch of nonsense, making up a bunch of rules for this world that I doubt they're willing to stick to.
-After the burger girl left, this went from hilariously terrible to just slow and boring.
-No music outside of the title screen.
Anyways, as for some constructive criticism:
Actually think about what you want the game to say. Don't put out a your first release when you have nothing to grab our attention, and actually put music in your game.
-The mos hilariously unappetizing burger I've ever seen. As a lover of 3D Food art, this was shocking!
-I love pale people, and everyone's pale.
-The still shots of people fighting looked cool.
Cons:
-Probably the slowest visual novel I've ever read due to there being a 3-5 second transistion every 1-5 lines. I feel like this prologue would have just taken me 10 minutes
-Really bad engrish, and I feel like the creator is mostly just saying a bunch of nonsense, making up a bunch of rules for this world that I doubt they're willing to stick to.
-After the burger girl left, this went from hilariously terrible to just slow and boring.
-No music outside of the title screen.
Anyways, as for some constructive criticism:
Actually think about what you want the game to say. Don't put out a your first release when you have nothing to grab our attention, and actually put music in your game.