VN Ren'Py Live in Dreams [Ch. 1 Bugfix] [JackieLiD]

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You will have a role of a man who has lost everything before, But now he's ready to reclaim everything that once belonged to him. It's about a world that has many races with powers. The plot and story will change depending on your choice. Fate and the future is in your hands now.​

Thread Updated: 2023-11-23
Release Date: 2023-10-16
Developer: JackieLiD
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Censored: No
Version: Chapter 1 Bugfix
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac, Android
Language: English
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Quite short, in general it could be interesting but there really isn't much story to know what's going on, and I guess we will have to see if the dev lurks around f95 to tell us the planned tags

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Thanks, good luck.
 
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Chimba said:
Quite short, in general it could be interesting but there really isn't much story to know what's going on, and I guess we will have to see if the dev lurks around f95 to tell us the planned tags

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Thanks, good luck.
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hehehe, oh god, what the fuck?

thanks for sharing!
 
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As a huge lover of 3d food art...

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This has got to be the least appetizing burger I've seen in my life. It looks like one of those frozen burgers you find at wal-mart that costs a dollar that you put in the microwave!
 
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This has got to be one of the slowest games I've ever played, and the thing is that I feel like it'd be like 10 minutes long if there wasn't a 3-5 second transistion every 1-5 lines. Who is this for?

The first 2 scenes were kinda ironically funny, which was what I was looking for...and then it just got boring once burger girl left.
 
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As I said in my review:

Pros:
-The mos hilariously unappetizing burger I've ever seen. As a lover of 3D Food art, this was shocking!
-I love pale people, and everyone's pale.
-The still shots of people fighting looked cool.

Cons:
-Probably the slowest visual novel I've ever read due to there being a 3-5 second transistion every 1-5 lines. I feel like this prologue would have just taken me 10 minutes
-Really bad engrish, and I feel like the creator is mostly just saying a bunch of nonsense, making up a bunch of rules for this world that I doubt they're willing to stick to.
-After the burger girl left, this went from hilariously terrible to just slow and boring.
-No music outside of the title screen.

Anyways, as for some constructive criticism:
Actually think about what you want the game to say. Don't put out your first release when you have nothing to grab our attention, and actually put music in your game.
 
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TheimmortalP said:
As a huge lover of 3d food art...

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This has got to be the least appetizing burger I've seen in my life. It looks like one of those frozen burgers you find at wal-mart that costs a dollar that you put in the microwave!
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Don't talk shit about my dinner!

I mean, I'm eating good food... duck... and caviar...
 
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edit99 said:
You're the first person I see that cares about how food looks like in a porn game.
I usually just turn off music and transitions in these games.
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Yeah, I just really like looking at food in video games, I find it to be pretty cool. this game in general looks pretty cheap, so naturally the food does too.

Good music and transistions can really draw me into games. Visual novels are video games, I expect a soundtrack.
 
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