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Strained though it may be, it still feels as though the Mom dislikes Emma more than she dislikes her husband and given recent events, would therefore be more inclined to believe her husband than Emma. It's a risk for him, sure, but it also feels like the strained relationship is one-sided with the Dad being completely oblivious to any problems between them so why would he not think his wife would take his side?It’s pretty much been established by now that the mom and dad have a strained relationship, so whilst Emma and Mia may not have any proof of what happened, the accusation enough is alone to cast doubt on his fidelity. So why take the risk when all he has to do is let Mia go out for the night?
As for the stuff that happened in the second act, I wasn’t on the team yet for that. I’ve only written the last four updates which is why I went down the route of developing things with the dad. It seemed to be going in that direction anyway seeing as how she’d flirted with him several times and even blew him once. So I figured sex would just be the natural progression.
On your last point about the romance aspect, over the last year and a half that game was in development before I came on, it had pretty much been defined that Mia and the MC had a strictly sexual relationship, not a romantic one. It would be inconsistent of their personalities and thereby pretty jarring for it to all of a sudden become lovey dovey.
Anyway, I appreciate your opinion nonetheless. It’s always helpful to hear what people think when it comes time to write the next update.
Well, if it were possible, perhaps some parts of the previous acts could be revisited because some of the writing didn't feel as solid as it does now. I know that things were developing in this direction with the Dad, I just hope it doesn't become a regular thing because it feels, for me, a little more out of place than the bro/sis, Mom/son relationships.
In the earlier acts it did seem like Mia and the MC had an antagonistic relationship that evolved into a kind of "sex friends" arrangement, but lately (I guess due to your writing) it feels like Mia is warming up a lot more to the MC and accepting him as more than just a sexual partner. They even kissed on the lips in this update which is, I think, the first time that's ever happened.
Farbeit from me to tell you guys what to do, I'm just voicing an opinion and it's your game to do with what you like, but if it were me I'd have it so that Mia and her Dad just have sex once with him never realising it was her. Mia would say to Emma it was good, but not as good as with her brother because her Dad is too aggressive (something we've seen her say before). The MC would find out what Mia did with their Dad and feel angry and jealous (hypocritical of him, of course, given what he did with their Mom) and say that he's done with the videos. Emma would tell Mia they can do it without him by doing more Dad stuff but Mia doesn't want to. Emma would then angrily confront the MC who'd say that he'll only do it again if she does Sam on camera for the site and agrees to not make Mia fuck any other guys. Meanwhile the Dad, feeling guilty about cheating, would feel that he really needs to have sex with his wife and he asks but she refuses so he angrily forces himself on her in a dominating way which, it turns out, she likes and gets off on. This helps to rekindle their sex life taking, at least, the Dad off the board because he's less sexually frustrated.