VN Ren'Py Long Road Home [v10 Part 4 Beta Update 1] [OBDGames]

[PapaPhat]

I actually concerned splitting the roles. The DJ would be female and the bouncer would be a male. I wanted an old army buddy as security for a couple of reasons that I don't want to reveal. The rub would be putting male in the middle of your harem. Historically, the only men that were allowed to be in a harem were eunuchs!

I'm not a fan of letting another male into the Fox Box either. I figured any male friends MC had from their Army days would be more likely to be recruited by the Rogues. The role call is rather light at present, unless you have a few other Rogue chapters in other cities up your sleeve... I like the idea of a female bouncer. It would give cause for some good comedy for the first few assholes that try her and get embarrassed to hell when she face plants them on the pavement out front! Hahaha That would serve to cement her rep as a badass and make other would be ruffians less likely to cause a ruckus...

By making her a master with either Judo, Aikido or both, she would know full well how to use any opponents own force and mass against them. Redirecting the energy of an opponent against them is the key to both of those martial arts. You need not be a large or powerful individual, just masterful and determined. A woman would easily excel at both arts.

Prospect the men into the Rogues. They really NEED the body count! Also... who said it had to be only ONE woman... why not two? You could make the second a Latino spitfire like Michelle Rodriguez. Ms. Rodriguez is one sexy badass chica!

Let our resident Stacy Dash model DJ and HERE'S your badass bouncer!


Adventure ever on my friend, Phat

 

[PapaPhat]

I think there is a lot of truth in what you say, Phat. But elite units (Seals, Rangers, Force Recon, SAS, etc) tend to be more exceptional just like 1% clubs. MC was supposed to have been part of some sort of special forces unit. These type units are also the most likely place to find women in combat roles, believe it or not. For a LOT of other reasons I agree we do NOT need a male bouncer and I also agree with your choice of (what looked to be) Dimitri's first instinct - the Stacy Dash look-a-like. In fact I think a majority here and by extension any polls will choose her or the second model in group two. I think there may be an additional waitress, as well. Personally, I hope he adds a female bouncer AND a female DJ. MC is the only male needed to watch over the all-female Fox Box IMHO.

Oooooo... maybe that flasher chick from the burger joint can come wait tables! Nice!

 

[motseer]

I'm not a fan of letting another male into the Fox Box either. I figured any male friends MC had from their Army days would be more likely to be recruited by the Rogues. The role call is rather light at present, unless you have a few other Rogue chapters in other cities up your sleeve... I like the idea of a female bouncer. It would give cause for some good comedy for the first few assholes that try her and get embarrassed to hell when she face plants them on the pavement out front! Hahaha That would serve to cement her rep as a badass and make other would be ruffians less likely to cause a ruckus...

By making her a master with either Judo, Aikido or both, she would know full well how to use any opponents own force and mass against them. Redirecting the energy of an opponent against them is the key to both of those martial arts. You need not be a large or powerful individual, just masterful and determined. A woman would easily excel at both arts.

Prospect the men into the Rogues. They really NEED the body count! Also... who said it had to be only ONE woman... why not two? You could make the second a Latino spitfire like Michelle Rodriguez. Ms. Rodriguez is one sexy badass chica!

Let our resident Stacy Dash model DJ and HERE'S your badass bouncer!
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Adventure ever on my friend, Phat

Yeah, and just because a bunch of new chicks get added to the Fox Box doesn't mean we have to fuck 'em all... wait... nah, we have to fuck 'em all! I think krav maga is the latest rage for military martial arts. (Developed by the Israeli's and improved upon by nearly everybody who ever wrote a close combat scene) I agree there will need to be new prospects for the Rogues and that's where those who want some bromance can get their fix with no worries about territorial respect and adding a presence of protection to back up the new bouncer(s). Hell, Dimitri, we've practically got Book II written for ya.

 

[Horny Toad]

Can't agree here, friend. I was figuring that MC would invite any of his male army buddies to join the Rogues, not work at the Fox Box. The Rogues MC is in desperate need of fresh blood. Thus far we only know of a small handful of remaining members... Stan, club president and walking wounded/injured reserve; Jaybird, Sgt at Arms currently incarcerated for an unknown period of time; Sluggo, Enforcer and current acting Sgt at Arms, truly a force to be reckoned with; Mickey Finn, Tech Specialist known more for for his technical prowess than his fighting ability but still a fair hand in a fight; Grandpa Gunner, former Navy shipmate to MC's dad, Master Wrench and all round great gear head, a straight shooter and loyal Rogue to the core, he may be old but he's still tough as nails and then we have MC, the prospect on the rise with military expertise that has come in handy taking care of both Rogues and Fox Box business. So, that is a grand total of six Rogues... not much of a biker club considering that only four of them are actually fully combat ready... (Stan's Leonidas/kamikaze plan aside.)

Women cannot join the Rogues as members so it makes sense that MC's badass female army buddy assume duty at the Fox Box while any remaining male army friends would be more likely candidates to prospect for the Rogues, following MC's example. Oh... and to address your comment on "male bouncer would be someone MC can trust to not "disturb" the harem" there's a long standing saying among military compadres... "Trust me with your life but not your money or your wife." This is always said half jokingly but there is truth to that. One of your buddies catches your wife/lover/girlfriend a little too buzzed and lonely one night while you are deployed and he is still there on base and we find the reason that "Jody's got your girl, that's right!" is part of so many different marching and running cadence calls. Friends who are former military associates are the LAST ones I would let anywhere near my harem! Well, introductions, dinner and drinks WHILE I am present, sure. But, I'd be keeping a close watch... a very close watch indeed!

Adventure ever on friend, Phat
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Just was wondering how many Minions there are (of course I'm thinking thousands because of those little yellow guys). Going by my fuzzy memory, there was one at the strip joint that Angel was located near, the two that we saw at the beginning, Willie, Bad Bob, Quack or whatever his name is (now fertilizer) and the one that was beaten to death by Jaybird. Plus I guess there were some that were guarding the Minion's strippers, like Rin.
I assume there is more, so getting the army buddies in might help.

 

[cxx]

Statistical analyses show Katy will be getting preggo in 98.85% of games played.

well their lineage must continue so ................

 

[Horny Toad]

Was also wondering/hoping that something bad happens to the guy that Bad Bob wants to take Angel to. Whoever this wealthy guy is, he needs to be taken care of immediately. Maybe the MC heard some rumours regarding this and decides to check it out.
Would be nice to see the MC slowly walking away (maybe with a woman or two who he rescued) from a burning mansion (explosions included).

 

[motseer]

Was also wondering/hoping that something bad happens to the guy that Bad Bob wants to take Angel to. Whoever this wealthy guy is, he needs to be taken care of immediately. Maybe the MC heard some rumours regarding this and decides to check it out.
Would be nice to see the MC slowly walking away (maybe with a woman or two who he rescued) from a burning mansion (explosions included).
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You have just been promoted to assistant writer and your first assignment is to make a new minions "costume". It should definitely be yellow.

 

[cxx]

You have just been promoted to assistant writer and your first assignment is to make a new minions "costume". It should definitely be yellow.

wrong, it should be pink.

 

[motseer]

wrong, it should be pink.

 

[ditto6876]

wow,just finished a re-run and the update,simply wow. great job devs, your doing
a fantastic job.

 

[Green Isosceles]

Great update. I still couldn't do it to Jaybird.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

Great update. I still couldn't do it to Jaybird.

Well obviously, he's not really the MC's type. Candi on the other hand...

 

[robrize2169]

Great update. I still couldn't do it to Jaybird.

well..you may not be able to do that to Jaybird..but Candi needs some lovin..and i am stepping up to support her in every way she needs..so yeah, i will fuck her brains out at every opportunity..

 

[LWtbo]

I can think of quite a few people that won't like this or will take it the wrong way but anywho here go's

Well despite some rather Jaded view's it seem to me that there are still actually quite a few millitary service men with both standards and moral's.
Who do actually believe that being a friend means protecting both you and your loved one's.
And not just that protecting you keeps them safe too and then fucking your loved ones behind your back is fair game.
Because their not really your friends their just your colleagues.

But I can't speak for the US military as I don't really know anyone that served in the US armed forces.
Except on here and I don't know you personally well enough to judge.
I can honestly only go by what films show and sadly as Phat sort of said most film's like to portray the american millitary as thinking with their little brain whenever there's a female near.
Be she married, engaged, single it don't really matter.
If she's around they want in her pants even if the have to do it when still under fire.

And I wouldn't dream of saying anything against the US armed servises personally.
I find it impossible to believe that about all us service men even if thats kinda what Phat's hinting at.
Most of them must have more moral backbone than that.

Anyway all I'm saying is why do's this friend of the MC need to be happly married or Gay.
Why can't they just be a true friend it can't be that hard to believe.
It do's happen you know even IRL there are still such things as true friends out there.

Just Sayin.

 

[HiHaHo]

Anyway all I'm saying is why do's this friend of the MC need to be happly married or Gay.
Why can't they just be a true friend it can't be that hard to believe.
It do's happen you know even IRL there are still such things as true friends out there.

Just Sayin.

well the point that started the discussion that many harem fanboy's don't like to see competition and the dev doesn't want to trigger that by introducing potential competition to that
i am sure that he agrees whit you that he doesn't have to be married (highly doubt he'd go whit a gay person)

most off the things going in here are fans saying their perspective and ideas about it
i think the dev should go whit his own idea but the fans ideas might improve on that

 

[Takitashino]

The story is excellent, I really enjoy it so far.

 

[motseer]

I can think of quite a few people that won't like this or will take it the wrong way but anywho here go's

Well despite some rather Jaded view's it seem to me that there are still actually quite a few millitary service men with both standards and moral's.
Who do actually believe that being a friend means protecting both you and your loved one's.
And not just that protecting you keeps them safe too and then fucking your loved ones behind your back is fair game.
Because their not really your friends their just your colleagues.

But I can't speak for the US military as I don't really know anyone that served in the US armed forces.
Except on here and I don't know you personally well enough to judge.
I can honestly only go by what films show and sadly as Phat sort of said most film's like to portray the american millitary as thinking with their little brain whenever there's a female near.
Be she married, engaged, single it don't really matter.
If she's around they want in her pants even if the have to do it when still under fire.

And I wouldn't dream of saying anything against the US armed servises personally.
I find it impossible to believe that about all us service men even if thats kinda what Phat's hinting at.
Most of them must have more moral backbone than that.

Anyway all I'm saying is why do's this friend of the MC need to be happly married or Gay.
Why can't they just be a true friend it can't be that hard to believe.
It do's happen you know even IRL there are still such things as true friends out there.

Just Sayin.

Well, there you go. Intelligent, sensitive and well reasoned. What the HELL is wrong with you. soldier! Ummm... just kiddin', obviously. I really do appreciate your comment. I was a part of the US military when servicemen were not respected and were, in fact, often disrespected. But a close knit group of those I served with were among the finest, most trustworthy and memorable people I have ever known. So, again, thanks a lot.

 

[robrize2169]

i don't mind having male characters in the gang. they will be taught the error of their ways if they ever try to break into the mc's harem. esp once they find out how mc deals with not so Bad Bob who is currently trying to get with Jess. that will not end well for Bobby Boy that's fer dam sure..

 

[Runner17]

A lot of good opinions, but whatever you do OBD, stick to what you would like to design and don't put it to a vote. The story is hitting on all cylinders without us windbags.

One more thought, that Barb scene, avoided it like the plague, Barb and asshole really! (Really do need to practice my punctuation)

(64 flavors of ice cream and people still want to order only vanilla.)

 

[LWtbo]

well the point that started the discussion that many harem fanboy's don't like to see competition and the dev doesn't want to trigger that by introducing potential competition to that
i am sure that he agrees whit you that he doesn't have to be married (highly doubt he'd go whit a gay person)

most off the things going in here are fans saying their perspective and ideas about it
i think the dev should go whit his own idea but the fans ideas might improve on that

You say competition and I'd argue the Key word is actually a Rival they don't like.
They only object to competition if it's unwinnable.
Thats the thing No sane harem fan objects to another male or two in the story.
What they odject to is a Rival, another cock after their women (harem).
Competition can and is tolerated by most is as long as its a fair fight and easy to do the fuck you buddy.
And completely block them each and every time.
Friends however are acceptable if they are true friends or good friends you can trust with your women.
Examples: Gary and Brutus from TripleEX first EX-Military second one still supossed to be serving I think.
Although In Brutus's case he will lie to you if he's conviced it's in your best interest's but neither would chase your girl's.
Now I admit I quite often dislike most the cast including the MC of that one but I do love the plot.
Also you have Dion in Limetless he will be pissed if he finds out your banging both his Sister's and his Mom.
But he's not inerested in or after any of your's.
There is a couple of other's but its been a while since I played the updates so I have forgoten them.
But the point is other males in a story are exceptable aslong as they arn't or ever will be Rival's.
Its entirly down to how the Dev desides to write them.

But that's of corse just my opinion and OBD no doubt has his own excelent Ideas for how the new characters will be anway.

Just sayin.