Fantabulous

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Another one, this is more subtle and bordering nitpicking if you will.

In the picnic area, Angel struggles to tell she loves you. If you follow the romance path, her reaction is to switch to her default evil grin face. I say this is wrong and she should turn to a surprised, much more emotional expression instead, otherwise it looks like she's taking for granted you loved her too. I can't speak for others but this ruined that special moment for me.
 

Juerhullycin

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When asked if she had those braids under the hat she literally says "Yes, I've been growing my hair out ever since I was discharged". The "Yes" part should be removed because it's impossible that those long braids fit under the cap, AND the introduction should be amended too to say "Some time later..." to be consistent.
you know she is talking about being discharged from the military? has absolutely nothing to do with how the time flows in those two days but the months/years? since she left the military and/or saw Ryker the last time.

cant/wont argue with your second post tho
 

HornyyPussy

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Apr 26, 2020
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Too quiet. I know he was or still is pissed cause the mods, but we still here and I do hope that we won't go away. So despite those circumstance I do hope he will come back to this thread.
At least he made a post (answer to a comment) on Patreon yesterday so he's not completely radio silent :)
 
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motseer

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motseer, ohhiimfox any news from the old man?

Miss my usual banter with him.:cry: And the usual preview pics he shares.:sneaky:
I did talk to him a while back and I asked about this... Well... mostly, I just said what you just said and let him know we would sure like to hear from him again on this thread. He did say he will likely be back... eventually. I think he may be even more stubborn than me... and that's sayin' somethin'. :cool:
 

killazap

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I probably have a very unpopular opinion here. Why does it force you to sleep with Angie? Does she play a main plot in the story? Can I kick her to the curb later on? I really don't want anything to do with her. I just don't like her. She fucking sucks in all the bad ways My unwanted opinion. clearly.
 

D Dog

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I did talk to him a while back and I asked about this... Well... mostly, I just said what you just said and let him know we would sure like to hear from him again on this thread. He did say he will likely be back... eventually. I think he may be even more stubborn than me... and that's sayin' somethin'. :cool:
I do miss him being here and reading his stories and opinions on motorcycles. Yup, he may be more stubborn then a Marine.
 

HornyyPussy

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I probably have a very unpopular opinion here. Why does it force you to sleep with Angie? Does she play a main plot in the story? Can I kick her to the curb later on? I really don't want anything to do with her. I just don't like her. She fucking sucks in all the bad ways My unwanted opinion. clearly.
She's only in it until we leave that podunk town for Berdoo (she may be back later but we'll see).
 
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