motseer
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motseer
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I think I remember part of that script/conversation in my last game save, although it got about as far as mentioning Rin and how she felt, I think it actually ended with telling Stan she wanted to get out and move to the FoxBox.
At least I believe that's how I remember it, been a minute since I played, and I'm trying to not touch it again until the next version is out. don't wanna spoil myself with the story and get upset that it stops lol
The only thing that gave me pause was the rainbow saddle blanket strapped to his handlebars.Tbh mine was a jokeI think short hair is easier to render but I'm not against long hair either.
Not hating or judging. I just wasn't planning on taking the story there...
Reniere
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If you can base the MC on Sam Elliott, than I have no complaints! Well motseer I am a war monger, saving Rin is like getting the cake but I want the icing to. So removing Bob is my icing. Maybe a bike accident, maybe his partner in the desert is lonely?
My question is, when do the feds become involved? Is OBD going to bring this story line in? Use to be where a club is, feds are not that far behind. Has it changed?
This story can go in so many directions, got to love it!
is my icing. Maybe a bike accident, maybe his partner in the desert is lonely?My question is, when do the feds become involved? Is OBD going to bring this story line in? Use to be where a club is, feds are not that far behind. Has it changed?
This story can go in so many directions, got to love it!
motseer
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No to the Feds. No to the Revenuers. Let the Rebel Yell roll!!If you can base the MC on Sam Elliott, than I have no complaints! Well motseer I am a war monger, saving Rin is like getting the cake but I want the icing to. So removing Bob
My question is, when do the feds become involved? Is OBD going to bring this story line in? Use to be where a club is, feds are not that far behind. Has it changed?
This story can go in so many directions, got to love it!
LWtbo
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Personally and since i'm weired I imagin the MC as more of a John Wick
on a motorbike
on a motorbike
motseer
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Wick is good! Lots of agro, no talkin' 'bout it. Elliot has the voice, hands down. Eastwood is a classic. Momoa for the scowl. But that pretty boy doesn't make the cut. Sorry, Ragnar.
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"that the" simple fix before you publish
. Now I have an excuse to do another play through. Even though I have enough saves to go back and see any given point in the story haha. Always nice to get that organic feel on a fresh run. Shit, I might need an intervention at this rate.
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I agree with FlameEmperor on needing to repair that one small error in the script prior to publication...
The line currently reads...
della "She may have a valid concern. It's rumored that the Bob's girls are virtually slaves to the club."
However, it should NOT have "the" in front of "Bob's girls." It should read...
della "She may have a valid concern. It's rumored that Bob's girls are virtually slaves to the club."
It's a tiny nit pick kind of item but does need a quick edit all the same. It would be a shame to litter what might be the greatest AVN of all time with little errors like that.
Adventure ever on my friend, Phat
PS: I am still willing and able to proofread and correct all the spelling and grammar errors in the whole game.
Easy fix. I haven't run the script through grammar and spell check yet. I typically don't do that until I'm done with the entire episode. I make mistakes like that when I'm composing on the fly and quickly make a change after reading the sentence. That one I inserted "Bob's" in the sentence. It first read, "It's rumored that the girls are virtually slaves to the club."I agree with FlameEmperor on needing to repair that one small error in the script prior to publication...
The line currently reads...
della "She may have a valid concern. It's rumored that the Bob's girls are virtually slaves to the club."
However, it should NOT have "the" in front of "Bob's girls." It should read...
della "She may have a valid concern. It's rumored that Bob's girls are virtually slaves to the club."
It's a tiny nit pick kind of item but does need a quick edit all the same. It would be a shame to litter what might be the greatest AVN of all time with little errors like that.
Adventure ever on my friend, Phat
PS: I am still willing and able to proofread and correct all the spelling and grammar errors in the whole game.
The "that the" is still there. It's split about 50/50 if it is correct grammar or not from what I've seen. I'm a lot of things , but a master of English composition is not one of them. I will defer to others if it is proper or not.
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This is why I'm weird and actually go back through and ignore most of the sex and read the dialogue carefully.I agree with FlameEmperor on needing to repair that one small error in the script prior to publication...
The line currently reads...
della "She may have a valid concern. It's rumored that the Bob's girls are virtually slaves to the club."
However, it should NOT have "the" in front of "Bob's girls." It should read...
della "She may have a valid concern. It's rumored that Bob's girls are virtually slaves to the club."
It's a tiny nit pick kind of item but does need a quick edit all the same. It would be a shame to litter what might be the greatest AVN of all time with little errors like that.
Adventure ever on my friend, Phat
PS: I am still willing and able to proofread and correct all the spelling and grammar errors in the whole game.
Miss so much because of the sex and women, oh wait stupid, it is a porn game. Can't believe I'm arguing with myself.
motseer
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So....as I mentioned earlier, I'm bored tonight. I tossed a little barb about giving you a one star review earlier and it made me decide to actually go read the reviews. First, my apologies, dev, 'cause I could have sworn I gave this VN a rave review months ago but, I must have imagined it. Honestly, I probably figured a story as good as this one didn't need my help. After reading all 60 reviews I have realized I could never do what you do. There is no way this VN deserves anything below a 4 star rating and that would only apply back when you were first starting out. The improvement in graphics, animation, writing, story telling in addition to the consistency of updates puts this in the top 3 VN's currently being published on this site and I currently have over 30 very good ones on my hard drive. The very few low ratings I saw didn't demonstrate logical evaluation but, unsubstantiated prejudice or preference. Sorry again, for getting complacent and being lazy. Here is your 5 star rating.
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Best adult game i ever play. Developer really knows about biker culture. Great story, characters and development.
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Avaron1974
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She's already made it very clear she won't have sex with anyone behind her husbands back.
I'm assuming if he dies then the MC will probably take care of her but while Stan is around, it aint happening.
Canto Forte
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Get her in that intro from the patriarch .. she will come around.
from the same club, to the point that nuckle head came demanding she be his,
so grooming MC to take up the reigns for his beloved is not ruled out and should not be ruled out.
We are not talking action, just the fact she be taken care of and not ler in the winds
like that hottie in the tattoo parlor and the nut cases from her former gang.
For some reason, the hottie from the tattoo parlor was expected to take up another nut case
from the same club, to the point that nuckle head came demanding she be his,
so grooming MC to take up the reigns for his beloved is not ruled out and should not be ruled out.
We are not talking action, just the fact she be taken care of and not ler in the winds
like that hottie in the tattoo parlor and the nut cases from her former gang.