VN - Others - Long Story Short [v0.9a] [TTrickGames]

fukken excelent, cant wait for more content for this ! Amazing renders, and story, even for me who just holds CTRL i pretty much get what happenenig anyways. Built in walkthrough as a toggle would be a nice addition. work perfectly, i know these thing take time to make, but make it faster, many faps await XD

Best quality stuff, nice story, many options. Keep up the good work! Avoidable NTR, that is great. Forcing stuff can kill stories really fast, this one is nice.
I was wondering is there anything changes if you like all of the instagram pictures? If I comment some simple in the instagram profile is it matter?

Love those renders and Awesome game. Definitely go for it if you like NETORI games . This is also one of my favourite VN games on this site.

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It has been almost a year since I first experienced Long Story Short and was very excited to drive back into this fantastic AVN. I'm happy to see TTrick has continued to expand and build on all the different paths for the lovely ladies of LSS. I personally enjoy the multiple pathing and how the characters develop and interact differently given your choices. Yeah, it is a pain from a development process to track everything but I certainly appreciate the effort and I feel it has paid off and will continue to do so. I love the fact we are starting to engage with the other LI's and looking forward to seeing how they develop and interact with the others.

Additionally, with the move to the new engine, TTrick has taken the opportunity to change a few things up as well as do some enhancements throughout the game (yes rollback). And even some of the earlier renders got some additional love; going from wow to hell yeah!!!

And speaking of renders, since day one TTrick's rendering skills have been fantastic. DAZ is a crazy beast but the environments, compositions, effects, and of course, the ladies themselves are all top tier. His experience is evident and enhances the story even further. I'm excited to see where LSS goes next and strongly recommend trying it out!

a great game with photo and story~but look like not too famous and too long time not update . i love how the characters are written, i'm excited for what comes next. anyways, good shit good shit ,support creator

Not a dull moment in this one. All the girls are top tier. Smart writing which isn't bogged down by obsession with cuckolding even though one girl is quite lascivious . Every character is likable. You'll enjoy this one greatly. Hopefully it's not abandoned.

First I’ll talk about the things I like about this game. The UI is solid and the renders are nice also. The choices are fantastic but unfortunately, there is more to a good game. The corruption arc sucks. It does not explore sexual fantasies at all and seems to destroy the entire personality of the character. Maybe my expectations were too high. The characters also look like blow up dolls.

Really good arts (models and production values), very professionally made game. However, I did not find the story interesting or engaging at all.

I only went for the "love" path or however it is called (I am not interested in NTR and luckily this can be avoided; and being an asshole in general can be avoided as well). Maybe the other paths are more interesting. But in this path:

The story (at least as long s I followed it) does not offer any conflicts or problems that have to be overcome; it is basically "guy sits in his room for 19 years, goes out once and meets a really sweet girl who immediately falls for him." The only "problem" is that, while she wants to have sex at some stage, she does not feel ready for it at the first or second meeting. So the choice seems basically to be "rape her" or "wait a bit". I did not develop any sympathy for the MC whatsoever. The LIs are OK but not really very interesting.

pretty great game. Renders are beautiful, paths for every taste whether it’s love/ corruption/blackmail/ ntr, and they’re all really well done. Vanessa is a really well done character with a great story line. I usually don’t play unity games, but this is a very well made one.

Good game with lots of possibilities including NTR.
The pacing is a bit too quick but the characters and situations are interestings.
Each female has multiple routes and the final game should have a good replayability.

This is a solid game! I don't play too many Unity titles, but I gave this one a shot and I am not disappointed! The renders are beautiful, the animation is great and the storyline flows along nicely.

If I had any quibbles it would be two: The MC is supposed to be a loser who spends an entire year living at home without a job and playing computer games, but after one conversation with his friend is just knee-deep in pussy, despite doing nothing but leave the house. I probably wouldn't notice except the best friend's storyline involves him spending a year working out and changing his life. It's by no-means a big deal breaker, it just was in the back of my mind while I played. The second issue is timing. Things happen too fast. People change their entire lives/outlooks in less than 24 hours in major ways. I think if dev would let a few days/weeks go by between events it would help with the story. But again, this was not a deal breaker.

TL;DR : Play this beautiful game with great animations and solid story!

Started out interesting but completely falls apart.

The idea that to corrupt Ann you need to sexually assault her is disgusting. You don't get enough points to do that path just by words and suggestions you need to force your dick in her mouth and sleep naked and then laugh it off. I'm fine with and in fact loved rape/nonconsent play but the idea that it pushes her down this path when she barely knows you at all is laughable. Corruption should be a slow burn not face raping a girl you've known for two days.

And even the corruption path itself is disgusting and just lame. A corruption path should be about a sexual corruption and it should be about her finding herself and exploring her sexuality. Not her changing her entire personality and changing her entire life so that she goes in one week from wanting to be a doctor to wanting to do porn. Jesus christ dude. Make the acting plotline part of the sharing/ntr path not the corruption path.

Only redeeming thing about this is the renders and character models are good. But even then the lewd scenes fall apart because their like 3 frames max. The outdoor sex was pants down ->penetration ->ejaculation. I'm fine with no animations but jesus add some extra renders there or just loop them a few times.

The writing problems are so baked into the story that I doubt any future updates will fix it so for me at least I wouldn't recommend playing or following this novel.

A excellent game, look really realistic with textures in the skin's model, no like others games where the model look equal and doll's skin , a good interface , a excellent phone's interactions with social media , good story and diverse with many different decisions with repercussion, avoidable ntr ,
a really good game

All I can really say from the jump is: WOW!
I generally don't play games in unity, mainly because how the games are structured, but holy shit!
Long Story Short is one of very few games on here that are the 1, 2, 3 punch of amazing writing, amazing dialog and amazing renders.
It is also a rare occasion that the moment I play a game here on F95, I immediately start supporting the developer! Great work Kamo! Looking forward to all your work.

[As of v0.7a1 ]


The Good:
- Good Render
- Girls are nice
- Choice matters
- Lewd Scenes are alright


The Bad:
- Not sure what the story is about
- Lewd Scenes are too short
- Not enough animation
- For some reason i cannot scroll up for previous shot & choices


Conclusion:
A short but replayable game (to unlock scenes/path).
Could be a great game if there are more animation and longer lewd scenes.
The Girls are nice, don't waste such potential.
3.5/5.

Game had a ton of hype. Id browse the forum and see all the signatures. For months Id see the Unity Engine and the gorgeous renders and say PASS. Mainly because for whatever reason its rare for a game with awesome renders to get to the good stuff. Its normally a ton of groping and non-sensical cock teasing you have to skip through just to get a handjob scene. Well, this game delivers. For the most part...

PROS
- Every girl in this game is a hottie and while thats not very immersive WHO CARES its porn. They dev has somehow managed to achieve this youthful look and personality with the girls without them looking like photoshopped minors which for me would be an immediate turn-off. They are all cute with well developed sexy bodies. Petite woman porn the right way. Bubble butts, curvaceous hips, some even with huge tits but not in a comical way.
- Smooth sex scenes and the abundance of sex scenes
- Lead up to the sex scenes
- Dialogue in the Sex scenes
- Getting to bang the best girls in the sex scenes as opposed to filler side characters like other games would do.
- Bimbofication/Corruption
- MC is not the only penis in the universe. You have the sharing option but its completely your choice as it should be.
- Vanessa is such a fun sexy little slut
- Sneaky sex. The best kind of NTR there is
- Competing for the girls and if you dont take care of them or treat them badly they find someone else
- No wrong choice or Game Over scene
- Made me give Unity a chance after many failed attempts previously. Not as bad as RPGM and a ton of the features in this game are cloned directly from RenPy which is smart.
- Best 3-way on this site ever. Done perfectly. The one involving a camera and a drunk buddy. Mouth inadvertently comes so close to the penis...Other guy doesnt seem to notice. Absolutely brilliant writing.

CONS
- All of the stupid sandbox point and click moments. Needs to be even more skippable then it already is
- Unity. As mentioned before it works but there is no rollback feature and only recently we got a skip feature
- Creepy date rape drugging element in one scene
- Pacing is not a snail pace by any means but definitely can speed up a bit for my taste. Alot of girls are being introduced and teased but the plot is basically friends hanging out and banging out. Typical horny college-esqe kids screwing like rabbits. We need more screwing especially at this point in the development cycle (A year plus as of this review). Cant wait for a prospect of Super Slutty version of Ana and Vanessa getting banged in front of Joey.

Unity and RPGM sucks but give this game a try. Breaks all of the typical tropes that you get from other games with stellar renders and also runs surprisingly well on a crappy engine.

This is an excellent offering worth checking out. My only criticism is the routes get pretty convoluted to the point where they might be better as separate games. It's like the developer is making 4+ stories at once and that's obviously going to make it take a lot longer to produce.

English is not my first language, I will try to minimize grammatical mistakes.
This game is so great that I contribute my first review on f95zone. I think this game does a great job in the following content:

• The UI design of the game is excellent, it looks like some great AAA games
• The design of ntr elements is very clever, you can choose active or passive, depending on your choice , which gives people a great mental excitement. (I LOVE NTR !!!)
• The 3D modeling of the characters is very delicate, although there is some uncoordinated movement in the animation
• Fuck a friend's slut girlfriend? Who can resist such thing!

Exceptional writing and CGs. Great corruption (especially the Ann path) with lots of routes. There isn't much to criticize here. Also, the latest update (v0.7a1) is fire. Definitely deserving of love on Patreon.

Long story short, I'm bored.

The developper obviously worked very hard on it but it's not for me.

Sure the UI is exceptionnal and very unique but that's not why I play those game. It's a nice bonus but that's all this is, a bonus.

Characters are also unique but unfortunately, they aren't attractive. They are very well done, don't get me wrong, it's just that the 2 girls I saw so far aren't very pretty. And I have to chose between them?
The girl in the menu is a beauty but she didn't appear in the story when I stopped playing.

The story is bland. And for a game, the story is important. It has to be EXCITING even if it isn't Shakespear. Make the MC go to college, have an interesting job or something. Him being a shut-in who meets new people doesn't make me want to know more.