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RPGM Loser Hero [v1.4] [Mafia Muffin]
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I'll just patiently wait until the game is finished and got a decent translation ..which might take a while but I hate playing unfinished and badly translated stuff
I just subscribed to the creator's patreon and sent him the following message last night:
Hello my friend. I understand that you mainly speak Japanese, so I will try to use as simple language as possible. I assume you will be using a translator.
I played your game last night and it was excellent. I have played many games about female domination and this is one of the best. Thank you for giving me such a wonderful experience.
I usually don't like these games were you are fighting monsters such as slimes, orcs, trolls, and demons. I prefer games where the main character fights a dominant woman who is better at fighting than him and then losing to her over and over again. But I also like an experience that I feel is real. So I tried to make it at first as a hero. I lost to the slimes and then I lost to Lilia. I went back and fought some more slimes and even beat the orc on the first level of the Tower of Trials. Then I lost miserably again on Floor 2. That's when I got tired of the grinding for levels. I realized then that I just don't have what it takes to be the hero of this story. I realized that I would never be as determined as my Sister. I went into your game thinking that I would fight my hardest and probably lose to the women who were against me. I didn't think I would submit to them so quickly but I did. And it was excellent. I didn't realize how humiliating my life would become once I revoked my right to being the hero to my sister. I didn't realize just how far I would fall but I enjoyed it so much.
Now that you know how the story of my game went, I just want to give you 3-4 suggestions for how you could improve the game.
(1) I wanted more player choice on the submission route. Once I gave in and revoked my right to being the hero, I felt that the game became more of a visual novel than an actual RPG. Of course I still enjoyed that path. But I would have liked it more if I felt I had more choice. For example, I felt like I was forced to follow the orders of my leaders. I would have liked the option to refuse her orders and be punished again. Maybe there should be an option to defy Lilia or the other women and fight them again only to lose and be punished for it? I also would have liked an option to not do the chore or to buy the wrong potion and be punished for it. Maybe there could be a system that tracks your favor with each of the women in your party if you go the submission route, and that opens you up to seeing different scenes based on how much the women like you. Finally, I didn't like that I was forced to have Alicia do those chores since I was unable to do them myself. I wish I could have cleaned the women's shoes by myself without needing Alicia's help, and I wish that would have lead to a different outcome then the way the story was intended to go.
(2) A gameplay loop / progression system on the submissive path. I learned that Lilia starts as a Level 40, which is why I wasn't determined enough to beat her. But maybe the game can play so that you really need to be a Level 100 to beat the final boss. If you take the submissive path and do your chores right, maybe you can see Lilia and her party gain in levels until they are ready to take on the final boss. As they level up their dominance could grow and that's how they make you more and more their slave. As you become more submissive, your chores could become more difficult to complete, too. For example, maybe the girls will put you on a timer or give you more things to buy for them. And maybe there could be minigames or a combat system of its own on the submission path. Instead of fighting a female fighter, maybe I am now fighting Lilia's shoes in an attempt to clean it, with new special moves such as "lick" and "scrub" or something like that. It would be hot if the shoe could beat me in the minigame battle by making me too horny to keep doing my job, and that would come with consequences.
(3) I wanted to see more artwork and more scenes. The path I chose was great as it was with the dialogue and the way it was written. This was true even with the broken English in the current machine translation of the game. However I would have liked to see more visuals. I would have liked to see me cleaning the dirt from Lilia's shoes instead of just reading it in text. I would have liked to see certain things that I just wasn't able to see. And I would have liked more scenes in general. Why as a slave am I not kissing my hero's shoes before she leaves the house? Why am I not doing chores before bed or eventually getting put to sleep in the crate. I am not sure if your game is near the end of its development, but these are all things to consider.
LAST. AND MOST IMPORTANTLY!!! I have a lot of free time on my hands and would love to translate this game into English for you. I have a mastery of the English language and would be more than happy to make your game more readable for your English audience. Your game is incredibly erotic and I so greatly enjoyed it. The biggest drawback of your game for me by far though was that it took a lot of effort for me to realize what the women were telling me with the machine translation. So I would be more than happy to manually translate the whole game for you in its current state and do it for free. All you need to do is show me how!
Thank you for reading my long message!
(I post this on here as well as on his Patreon because I am curious to know if the game was abandoned, or if he interacts with the community more on here than on there. And I am curious to know if there is any way I would be able to access the files and work on properly translating his game without needing to consult with him directly. I think others in the community have done translations similar to that, but I am not sure exactly how I would start with going about that process. Thank you all!)
Hello my friend. I understand that you mainly speak Japanese, so I will try to use as simple language as possible. I assume you will be using a translator.
I played your game last night and it was excellent. I have played many games about female domination and this is one of the best. Thank you for giving me such a wonderful experience.
I usually don't like these games were you are fighting monsters such as slimes, orcs, trolls, and demons. I prefer games where the main character fights a dominant woman who is better at fighting than him and then losing to her over and over again. But I also like an experience that I feel is real. So I tried to make it at first as a hero. I lost to the slimes and then I lost to Lilia. I went back and fought some more slimes and even beat the orc on the first level of the Tower of Trials. Then I lost miserably again on Floor 2. That's when I got tired of the grinding for levels. I realized then that I just don't have what it takes to be the hero of this story. I realized that I would never be as determined as my Sister. I went into your game thinking that I would fight my hardest and probably lose to the women who were against me. I didn't think I would submit to them so quickly but I did. And it was excellent. I didn't realize how humiliating my life would become once I revoked my right to being the hero to my sister. I didn't realize just how far I would fall but I enjoyed it so much.
Now that you know how the story of my game went, I just want to give you 3-4 suggestions for how you could improve the game.
(1) I wanted more player choice on the submission route. Once I gave in and revoked my right to being the hero, I felt that the game became more of a visual novel than an actual RPG. Of course I still enjoyed that path. But I would have liked it more if I felt I had more choice. For example, I felt like I was forced to follow the orders of my leaders. I would have liked the option to refuse her orders and be punished again. Maybe there should be an option to defy Lilia or the other women and fight them again only to lose and be punished for it? I also would have liked an option to not do the chore or to buy the wrong potion and be punished for it. Maybe there could be a system that tracks your favor with each of the women in your party if you go the submission route, and that opens you up to seeing different scenes based on how much the women like you. Finally, I didn't like that I was forced to have Alicia do those chores since I was unable to do them myself. I wish I could have cleaned the women's shoes by myself without needing Alicia's help, and I wish that would have lead to a different outcome then the way the story was intended to go.
(2) A gameplay loop / progression system on the submissive path. I learned that Lilia starts as a Level 40, which is why I wasn't determined enough to beat her. But maybe the game can play so that you really need to be a Level 100 to beat the final boss. If you take the submissive path and do your chores right, maybe you can see Lilia and her party gain in levels until they are ready to take on the final boss. As they level up their dominance could grow and that's how they make you more and more their slave. As you become more submissive, your chores could become more difficult to complete, too. For example, maybe the girls will put you on a timer or give you more things to buy for them. And maybe there could be minigames or a combat system of its own on the submission path. Instead of fighting a female fighter, maybe I am now fighting Lilia's shoes in an attempt to clean it, with new special moves such as "lick" and "scrub" or something like that. It would be hot if the shoe could beat me in the minigame battle by making me too horny to keep doing my job, and that would come with consequences.
(3) I wanted to see more artwork and more scenes. The path I chose was great as it was with the dialogue and the way it was written. This was true even with the broken English in the current machine translation of the game. However I would have liked to see more visuals. I would have liked to see me cleaning the dirt from Lilia's shoes instead of just reading it in text. I would have liked to see certain things that I just wasn't able to see. And I would have liked more scenes in general. Why as a slave am I not kissing my hero's shoes before she leaves the house? Why am I not doing chores before bed or eventually getting put to sleep in the crate. I am not sure if your game is near the end of its development, but these are all things to consider.
LAST. AND MOST IMPORTANTLY!!! I have a lot of free time on my hands and would love to translate this game into English for you. I have a mastery of the English language and would be more than happy to make your game more readable for your English audience. Your game is incredibly erotic and I so greatly enjoyed it. The biggest drawback of your game for me by far though was that it took a lot of effort for me to realize what the women were telling me with the machine translation. So I would be more than happy to manually translate the whole game for you in its current state and do it for free. All you need to do is show me how!
Thank you for reading my long message!
(I post this on here as well as on his Patreon because I am curious to know if the game was abandoned, or if he interacts with the community more on here than on there. And I am curious to know if there is any way I would be able to access the files and work on properly translating his game without needing to consult with him directly. I think others in the community have done translations similar to that, but I am not sure exactly how I would start with going about that process. Thank you all!)
YogSothoth1982
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Is it possible to avoid femdom?I just subscribed to the creator's patreon and sent him the following message last night:
Hello my friend. I understand that you mainly speak Japanese, so I will try to use as simple language as possible. I assume you will be using a translator.
I played your game last night and it was excellent. I have played many games about female domination and this is one of the best. Thank you for giving me such a wonderful experience.
I usually don't like these games were you are fighting monsters such as slimes, orcs, trolls, and demons. I prefer games where the main character fights a dominant woman who is better at fighting than him and then losing to her over and over again. But I also like an experience that I feel is real. So I tried to make it at first as a hero. I lost to the slimes and then I lost to Lilia. I went back and fought some more slimes and even beat the orc on the first level of the Tower of Trials. Then I lost miserably again on Floor 2. That's when I got tired of the grinding for levels. I realized then that I just don't have what it takes to be the hero of this story. I realized that I would never be as determined as my Sister. I went into your game thinking that I would fight my hardest and probably lose to the women who were against me. I didn't think I would submit to them so quickly but I did. And it was excellent. I didn't realize how humiliating my life would become once I revoked my right to being the hero to my sister. I didn't realize just how far I would fall but I enjoyed it so much.
Now that you know how the story of my game went, I just want to give you 3-4 suggestions for how you could improve the game.
(1) I wanted more player choice on the submission route. Once I gave in and revoked my right to being the hero, I felt that the game became more of a visual novel than an actual RPG. Of course I still enjoyed that path. But I would have liked it more if I felt I had more choice. For example, I felt like I was forced to follow the orders of my leaders. I would have liked the option to refuse her orders and be punished again. Maybe there should be an option to defy Lilia or the other women and fight them again only to lose and be punished for it? I also would have liked an option to not do the chore or to buy the wrong potion and be punished for it. Maybe there could be a system that tracks your favor with each of the women in your party if you go the submission route, and that opens you up to seeing different scenes based on how much the women like you. Finally, I didn't like that I was forced to have Alicia do those chores since I was unable to do them myself. I wish I could have cleaned the women's shoes by myself without needing Alicia's help, and I wish that would have lead to a different outcome then the way the story was intended to go.
(2) A gameplay loop / progression system on the submissive path. I learned that Lilia starts as a Level 40, which is why I wasn't determined enough to beat her. But maybe the game can play so that you really need to be a Level 100 to beat the final boss. If you take the submissive path and do your chores right, maybe you can see Lilia and her party gain in levels until they are ready to take on the final boss. As they level up their dominance could grow and that's how they make you more and more their slave. As you become more submissive, your chores could become more difficult to complete, too. For example, maybe the girls will put you on a timer or give you more things to buy for them. And maybe there could be minigames or a combat system of its own on the submission path. Instead of fighting a female fighter, maybe I am now fighting Lilia's shoes in an attempt to clean it, with new special moves such as "lick" and "scrub" or something like that. It would be hot if the shoe could beat me in the minigame battle by making me too horny to keep doing my job, and that would come with consequences.
(3) I wanted to see more artwork and more scenes. The path I chose was great as it was with the dialogue and the way it was written. This was true even with the broken English in the current machine translation of the game. However I would have liked to see more visuals. I would have liked to see me cleaning the dirt from Lilia's shoes instead of just reading it in text. I would have liked to see certain things that I just wasn't able to see. And I would have liked more scenes in general. Why as a slave am I not kissing my hero's shoes before she leaves the house? Why am I not doing chores before bed or eventually getting put to sleep in the crate. I am not sure if your game is near the end of its development, but these are all things to consider.
LAST. AND MOST IMPORTANTLY!!! I have a lot of free time on my hands and would love to translate this game into English for you. I have a mastery of the English language and would be more than happy to make your game more readable for your English audience. Your game is incredibly erotic and I so greatly enjoyed it. The biggest drawback of your game for me by far though was that it took a lot of effort for me to realize what the women were telling me with the machine translation. So I would be more than happy to manually translate the whole game for you in its current state and do it for free. All you need to do is show me how!
Thank you for reading my long message!
(I post this on here as well as on his Patreon because I am curious to know if the game was abandoned, or if he interacts with the community more on here than on there. And I am curious to know if there is any way I would be able to access the files and work on properly translating his game without needing to consult with him directly. I think others in the community have done translations similar to that, but I am not sure exactly how I would start with going about that process. Thank you all!)
Hmmm. Tbh I am not sure. I only played it once and was quite the Loser Hero. I don't think it's possible to avoid Femdom. I think that if you really go the path of the fighter you will still lose and be humiliated (though you have to try for yourself for sure). I don't think there's any kind of maledom if you win, either, but again I am not entirely sure and only explored around 1/2 of the game.
YogSothoth1982
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I have no interest in changing femdom for maledom, I am simply interested in avoiding femdom.
Ah, okay. If I'm reading this right you are wondering if the game has basic vanilla sex? I doubt that it does. I think that if you lose a fight you will get a femdom outcome, and if you win, the outcome will be non-sexual. Assuming you play the game perfectly I'd imagine you could avoid most of the femdom. But if you managed to avoid it all, then I assume it would play like a standard RPG game without a sexual component at all (and again I suppose I am guessing here since I only played the heavy sub path).