VN Ren'Py Lost Freedom [v0.5] [Verde]

[Topmaniac]

not a bad start, beautiful girls, hope the game will be a success

 

[JEER0X]

someone translate the phone thanks.

 

[Lancaster Kingsman]

One thing that really pisses me off in some games are sex scenes in poorly lit environments and this update unfortunately had that (I don't remember if there were similar scenes in previous versions).

 

[Vlbc]

"strong character and somewhat spoiled"

Does it gonna change over time?
Or it will have at least a "male domination" path where the Mc train her into a more submissive girl?

 

[LWtbo]

I understand the Idea he doesn't want to tell her who he is because of what the grandmam has done.
But its also a seriously stupid reason aswell... like how the hell do's he think his daughter would react.
When she finds out her Dad has been lying in one way or another sinse the moment they met.
How she gonna feel when she finds out the man she may develope feelings for is her lying creepy Dad?.
And one that knew he was her dad the whole time since before their first real meeting even.
How do's the Dev imagine this story plot could ever possibly work out.
Just Curious.

 

[Boehser Onkel]

sooo

from the OP i get that the mc has no option to decline the "daughter" in terms of lewd stuff?
how are choices in general here?

thanks

 

[Bryan_Colt]

Here i hope this game will reach at least version 0.9 until then good luck, even if the renders look i will wait and see.

 

[LWtbo]

sooo

from the OP i get that the mc has no option to decline the "daughter" in terms of lewd stuff?
how are choices in general here?

thanks

Yes basically you can try and be good but He will internally lust after her while trying not to do anything,
But because of a lie MC tells her and his refusal to explain he's her Dad she won't let him she actually comes on to him.
On the Bad path ofcourse you lust after her as well but also chase/grope/molest ect... any chance you get.
And she still comes on to him all the while he's still liying to her and refuses to tell her he's her Dad.
Hope that helps.

 

[Boehser Onkel]

Yes basically you can try and be good but He will internally lust after her while trying not to do anything,
But because of a lie MC tells her and his refusal to explain he's her Dad she won't let him she actually comes on to him.
On the Bad path ofcourse you lust after her as well but also chase/grope/molest ect... any chance you get.
And she still comes on to him all the while he's still liying to her and refuses to tell her he's her Dad.
Hope that helps.

thank you

 

[Imez4it]

I like the start. I really hope this one keeps going and gets finished.

 

[Bobainox]

I like this game, but I would enjoy it even more if there were more content.

 

[Rayne]

I understand the Idea he doesn't want to tell her who he is because of what the grandmam has done.
But its also a seriously stupid reason aswell like how the hell do's he think his daughter would react.
When she finds out her Dad has been lieing in one way or another sinse the moment they met.
How she gonna feel when she finds out the man she may develope feelings for is her lying creepy Dad?.
And one that knew he was her dad the whole time since before their first real meeting even.
How do's the Dev imagine this story plot could ever possibly work out.
Just Curious.

I completely agree. The most correct decision would be to admit that he is the father and only then try to build a relationship (they are on an island, where would she go, they would have to interact with each other anyway). And so they will develop a relationship built on lies.

 

[Juerhullycin]

How do's the Dev imagine this story plot could ever possibly work out.
Just Curious.

You did invest more time thinking about how the plot will develop, writing out your last two posts here in this thread, then dev in total.

 

[LordWanze]

It was foreshadowed with the last update ending, but this is just bad.
The whole update can be summarized into: creep on your daughter yes/no, let her continue to rape you yes/no.

First half of the game is quite good, so seeing this deteriorate that fast is baffling.

Is this common with this dev or did they just hit their head really hard?

sooo

from the OP i get that the mc has no option to decline the "daughter" in terms of lewd stuff?
how are choices in general here?

thanks

You already get a unavoidable handjob from her, player can stop it halfway through. There's little chance the player will have agency over the content with her in the future.

 

[Boehser Onkel]

, let her continue to rape you yes/no.

she does WHAT

yeah best to avoid this game

 

[Juerhullycin]

Is this common with this dev or did they just hit their head really hard?

Yes.

 

[Noxstella]

the 1st chapter started off decently but the 2nd chapter is coming off very creepy...cringey... and borderline rapey....not exactly what i was expecting. i'm kind of disappointed in that. was hoping it would have gone a different direction instead of this sneaky way....just bleh. i'll be dropping this story

 

[Unexpected Error]

Well, maybe the MC is just meant to be a creepy lying piece of shit? *shrugs* Doesn't mean its a bad plot, it just means its not to some peoples liking, but totally intended. Asking if the dev has hit his head because of that, is just rude. You don't like it? well don't bother with it and move on, it's no reason to insult anyone just because they don't do you a fan service.

In the end, every dev should do what they want to do - every book author does it aswell. Imagine there would be no updates and just a instant finished product - people would still complain no matter what the plot is, and if the game was for free or not.

Try to make everyone happy and in the end nobody will be happy.
I encourage the dev to do what he is doing and ignore the "mimimi".

Edit: I bet half of the people complaining are not even supporters, but hey, beggars always try to be choosers. That's one of the reasons so many games will never be finished and why they get abandoned, because dev's lose motivation due to constant whining of some snowflakes.

Just my 2 cents.

 

[LWtbo]

The whole update can be summarized into: creep on your daughter yes/no, let her continue to rape you yes/no.

I Just rechecked just to be sure... and as i thought a hand job dos not constitute Rape just so you know.

 

[Unexpected Error]

I Just rechecked just to be sure... and as i thought a hand job dos not constitute Rape just so you know.

Wrong. MC is sleeping and can't give consent - thus its rape, just so you know.