- Thread starter RenGames69
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- Apr 17, 2017
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Art is what makes this game fall short. if you can't hire someone as you said, you can only get better yourself I guess.
- Jun 14, 2020
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I don't mind the art, it's ok for me, but everything is happening way too fast, without proper (character) development.
For instance when Sarah moves in with Alice. Already the first evening Alice "has a sudden urge to get intimate with Sarah".
Come on, please, let things develop more slowly and naturally.
More constructive criticism:
- The english isn't that great, but it's not gamebreaking.
- As has been mentioned before by others, I fear there are already too many branching choices early in the game. It won't be easy to keep track of everything.
- Instead why don't you add more dialogue choices, which don't have a great impact on the story, but help define character and relations (right now I have zero connection with the characters, because they aren't developed and don't have a personality).
Still I'm rooting for this one. Keep it up!
For instance when Sarah moves in with Alice. Already the first evening Alice "has a sudden urge to get intimate with Sarah".
Come on, please, let things develop more slowly and naturally.
More constructive criticism:
- The english isn't that great, but it's not gamebreaking.
- As has been mentioned before by others, I fear there are already too many branching choices early in the game. It won't be easy to keep track of everything.
- Instead why don't you add more dialogue choices, which don't have a great impact on the story, but help define character and relations (right now I have zero connection with the characters, because they aren't developed and don't have a personality).
Still I'm rooting for this one. Keep it up!
Finally i found an artist and will start again with this game. For now I have my protagonist first sprites.
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- Aug 3, 2017
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I posted it yesterday, but there's no new page.
https://f95zone.to/threads/lost-in-lust_prologue_alpha.81988/
- Sep 17, 2020
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There's a new version on the way, with better drawings.
- Sep 17, 2020
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I already made request thread but it looks like nobody checks it
https://f95zone.to/threads/lost-in-lust_prologue_alpha.81988/
https://f95zone.to/threads/lost-in-lust_prologue_alpha.81988/
Wrong thread I think because this one is about first version (abandoned) but thanks for sharing
- Jun 4, 2020
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Hi RenGames69, can you please update the download links with the correct version for this thread? Thanks!!
Hi you mean the old one? I don't think I have it honestly. I think you can find it on some other similar sites.