Serraxas
Newbie
- Nov 30, 2019
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I know I'm parroting a lot of other folks on this thread, but it still needs to be said. I love the concept and genre of this game to bits, but holy mother of Moses, please tidy up your text.
A text-based game HAS to be able to stand on the quality of its writing, and hitting typo after typo every paragraph just grates so much that it makes the prospect of sticking with it for more than a couple of hours a daunting task at best. Which frankly just seems like a goddamned shame more than anything, because I've been looking for a title covering this kind of matter (romance-heavy impreg harem where you actually get to see your kids grow up) for donkey's years.
A text-based game HAS to be able to stand on the quality of its writing, and hitting typo after typo every paragraph just grates so much that it makes the prospect of sticking with it for more than a couple of hours a daunting task at best. Which frankly just seems like a goddamned shame more than anything, because I've been looking for a title covering this kind of matter (romance-heavy impreg harem where you actually get to see your kids grow up) for donkey's years.