Why does the sister have crutches? She wasn't shot in the leg. If they thought she might be unsteady on her feet they might give her a walker but definitely not crutches. Crutches also take far more energy to use than a walker and, thus, are not likely to be used by someone who is generally weak.
"superior measuremt system"? First off, the typo. Second, the metric system is no more superior to the Imperial/American system than a digital watch is to an analog one: they're just simpler for simple minds.
"I advice you to stay home" - advise.
"I should provide them with every information I have" - should be either "every bit of information" or "all the information".
"Go for a run in either afternoon or evening" - with no way to tell what time of day it is, nor any way to advance time increments, how in the Hell do you do this?
A "closet" is a small room with a door, not a shelving unit or whatever that is by the entrance.
It's still a good story and the renders are great but the whole "one event per day" thing is rather lame and the interface is total crap. It needs a time-of-day indicator and some way to advance a single period of time instead of the "nap" thing, which always seems to last until night & time to go to bed. Navigation is still quite unwieldy and a real PITA.
See you next year, I guess.