VN Ren'Py Love at First Sight [v0.1] [Nightowl Creation]

[JennaJJ]

... Thx 4 the share ...

 

[Peri3481]

Polygon Mafia appears still to be reviewing his own game. Maybe he can tell us straight up whether we're going to get an incest harem, or not. (And then maybe delete his review).

 

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks for the share

 

[Anaktorness]

Another dead mother because of Patreon kkk ,just for that I'd rather pass.

They kill their mothers so as not to risk incest and thus please Patreon, soon they'll start killing their sisters too kkk

 

[Jack-ish]

So, incest and necro patch then?

MCs mom died of cancer...

The patch changes relationships. Did you really think it couldn't change the story as well?

 

[Punto]

 

[donkiszu]

Nice

 

[Faptime]

Where is everyone getting the impression that the MC of this one is short?

In every preview pic he is taller than the girls, except for the one where the MILF is standing on her tippy toes to kiss him, and the one where he's picking up the other girl by the butt (need to show the hands sinking into that flesh, though).

 

[Citlaly]

Seems like Xenorav (creator of Heart Problems) is the developer of this game, everything looks very similar, don't you think? Even their reports on Patreon.

 

[Grim1966]

The story is not original, but considering that complex and deep stories are not really interesting for anyone, it is understandable that developers do not try to deviate from usual simple stories. Best wishes for the developer.

compared to all the bullshit garbage that is prevalent in the new stuff every day and I mean really garbage this is fantastic.

 

[Grim1966]

Seems like Xenorav (creator of Heart Problems) is the developer of this game, everything looks very similar, don't you think? Even their reports on Patreon.

It could be Super Alex and updates come to his games once a year screwing his patrons at every turn.

 

[Grim1966]

It could be Super Alex and updates come to his games once a year screwing his patrons at every turn even as good as theu are it isn't worth it...

 

[paginou]

 

[anon280]

0.1 review

A kinetic novel where MC returns to his childhood home full of thick supermodels that live in that default glass penthouse

Writing

• somewhat generic plot, mostly with MC going to a family's home after a long while thus the dialogue about this is a chore to read
  • the dead mom, isn't as used as the dead dad so it's fair
  • the aunt whose husband is emotionally unavailable trope, also is boring but i guess you want to be realistic with her being a love interest
• prevalent name error in script for MC (someone uploaded a fix on the first page of this thread)

Renders

• the lighting is nice but seems to remain the same brightness and angle majority of the time, it's safer than inconsistent lighting though
• most of the female models are generic - I've seen them (Laura, Hannah, Sara) in other DAZ-VNs. Emily has the least generic look
• faces are relaxed (i.e. not doll like) but their line of sight is off at times

Erotic content

• the women all got that thick body, it looks good, not blown up
• the short makeout with Hannah was good pacing, a lot of shots to progress the intimate lust building but the music didn't change, lowered the heat of the moment

Other

Weird developing choice:​

• MC working as a janitor in a stereotypical prison uniform
• when mc is walking to his new him, having it be called "towards the aunt's house"

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Typos​

sara, hannah in lowercase​

a wonder full woman (wonderful)​

solf hands (soft)​

Once the plot doesn't sink too heavy into its trope roots and focuses on the intimate scenes, it should be a good enough story. The generic faces could have been modified by blending different faces together to get more uniqueness going. I hope that one music track won't be the only one used in future updates.

 

[billybob2010]

Looks Promising, like it so far.

 

[Xxrizz]

The download just detected a virus take care of this

 

[Nightowl Creations]

0.1 review

A kinetic novel where MC returns to his childhood home full of thick supermodels that live in that default glass penthouse

Writing

• somewhat generic plot, mostly with MC going to a family's home after a long while thus the dialogue about this is a chore to read
  • the dead mom, isn't as used as the dead dad so it's fair
  • the aunt whose husband is emotionally unavailable trope, also is boring but i guess you want to be realistic with her being a love interest
• prevalent name error in script for MC (someone uploaded a fix on the first page of this thread)

Renders

• the lighting is nice but seems to remain the same brightness and angle majority of the time, it's safer than inconsistent lighting though
• most of the female models are generic - I've seen them (Laura, Hannah, Sara) in other DAZ-VNs. Emily has the least generic look
• faces are relaxed (i.e. not doll like) but their line of sight is off at times

Erotic content

• the women all got that thick body, it looks good, not blown up
• the short makeout with Hannah was good pacing, a lot of shots to progress the intimate lust building but the music didn't change, lowered the heat of the moment

Other

Weird developing choice:​

• MC working as a janitor in a stereotypical prison uniform
• when mc is walking to his new him, having it be called "towards the aunt's house"

​

Typos​

sara, hannah in lowercase​

a wonder full woman (wonderful)​

solf hands (soft)​

Once the plot doesn't sink too heavy into its trope roots and focuses on the intimate scenes, it should be a good enough story. The generic faces could have been modified by blending different faces together to get more uniqueness going. I hope that one music track won't be the only one used in future updates.

Thank you so much for your honest feedback! I’m still new to both Daz and Ren'Py, and I’ve done my best with this version. I know there’s still a lot to learn, and I truly appreciate your support and patience. I’ll make sure to improve and address the mistakes in the next Patreon update, which will be released in a day or two.

 

[Nightowl Creations]

The download just detected a virus take care of this

Try patreon Link

 

[fpsgamer]

What can i say, i like a lot what i see in this one.

 

[fpsgamer]

Did you spend all your money on a single character model? lol

Immersion my boi, your offspring do look alike you. In this case they took after their mom, and thank the gods for that because the dad looks like prick.