I kinda wished I had waited a bit longer before checking this out, simply because what is here is good, but there simply isn't that much. However, I do have some suggestions for improvement:
- Don't open the story with Hana/Rina's backstory. It's weird for the player to know that stuff (honestly was concerned that the mc would be the shitty husband/dad). It makes a lot more sense for the player to discover the details of how they got in there situation from interacting with them, not just by being handed it through opening exposition. Also, I feel like the player's decision to help the two of them should be the player's decision, and it feels like you've really attempted to persuade the player into picking the option you want them to, by giving the backstory prematurely.
- Don't lock content behind other characters (I understand that it makes sense that you need to progress Hana/Rina to help you progress with the other--it makes sense because of their dynamic, but having Hana's content being locked because I needed to progress with Lily was quite annoying (I literally only decided to try progressing with Lily, because I had assumed I had exhausted Hana's content)),
- The journal for tracking content is broken, or my game is, idk. At one point the journal told me "keep using her tail" for Rina, but I have never been able to use her tail, and it randomly disappeared later on (perhaps this hint was attempting to say to keep using Hana's tail?(to unlock the Rina footjob scene) but that's not what it said). Additionally, despite the fact that I am 99% sure that I have completed all content currently in the game, Hana's page says, "spend more time with her" and Lily's says, "spend time talking to her in her home". However, I have tried to do both of these things at every available time slot during the week to no avail, and have maxed every stat that can currently be progressed to 20, so I have no idea if there is some super secret way to continue, or if the journal is just lying to me.