VN Ren'Py Love or Power [v0.3.2-Bugfix] [Sihirbaz_arttzz]

[Sihirbaz_arttzz]

By golly, look at the size of that word vomit!



Considering the only screenshot with dialogue having no punctuation either, I think that is a safe bet.

I'm really sorry for my mistakes, but I couldn't hire an interpreter because my English is not good and I don't expect any financial income from this game, so spelling and punctuation rules were not followed, I apologize to everyone.

 

[Sihirbaz_arttzz]

Özeti anlamakta zorlanan (benim gibi) insanlar için çeviri:

"Bir zamanlar dünyada her şey yolundayken, daha fazla güce aç insanlar "Eldonlar"ı yarattılar. Eldonlar genetiği değiştirilmiş askerlerdi, duyguları olmayan ve savaşmayı bilen bir birlikti. Sahip olduğu devlete sayısız zaferler getirdiler. ama onlar gücünün farkındaydılar.Bağımsız olmak isteyen Eldonlar bir isyan başlatmaya karar verdiler, ancak Eldonlar büyük saldırıda öldürüldü, sadece bir düzinesi kaçtı, savaşçılardan başka kimse nerede olduklarını bilmiyor (?) Hala korkulan kim."

Daha sonra teşekkür ederim (ingilizce bilmediğim için bir sorun olabilir)

Geliştiricinin çeviriyi kontrol etmesi için gerçekten birine ihtiyacı var...
[/ALINTI]
Gerçekten üzgünüm bu oyundan herhangi bir maddi gelir beklemiyorum ve bu yüzden tercüman tutamadım, hepinizden özür dilerim.

 

[YadenYu]

Spanish Patch V0.3.2

 

[loto_ortega]

I'm really sorry for my mistakes, but I couldn't hire an interpreter because my English is not good and I don't expect any financial income from this game, so spelling and punctuation rules were not followed, I apologize to everyone.

If you asked people on this thread, it's possible that there is someone who likes your game enough to proofread for you. After all. Someone already made a patch to translate it to Spanish.

 

[Sihirbaz_arttzz]

Just an idea. Please include a language preference before we can do anything else, since it took me a good minute to find what the Turkish for "Preferences" was.. Then I had to find the English button.

I'm really sorry about this, you can be sure that I will try to fix it as much as I can

 

[Sihirbaz_arttzz]

So what are future tags any chance for a harem?

I'm not quite sure what you mean but are you asking if the harem can come?

 

[Sihirbaz_arttzz]

Sorry, I can't play this game, the grammar is all over the place/non existant, the spelling I think is Google translated, the options at the start make absolutely no sense...

(This option below by the way.. if you click top one, they cheer because you want to play the game. The second option SURPRISE IT'S A PORN GAME closes you back to the menu.)
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And going from your Developer notes and the advertisement at the start of the game, you're only doing this for "quick money" at least that's the impression I got from it.

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You have to try and figure out what the translations are to even get into the game or find the preferences to get into English text. Then you're asked IN the game again, but up until that point most of the text is a combination of both English AND Turkish.

hello, I couldn't work with a translator because I didn't want to earn any financial income from this game, so I had to use google translate and that's why the punctuation marks were not followed I'm really sorry I'll try and fix it as much as I can

 

[rahkshi01]

I'm not quite sure what you mean but are you asking if the harem can come?

I mean will there be a harem route where you can end up with all the girls?

 

[Sihirbaz_arttzz]

I mean will there be a harem route where you can end up with all the girls?

Yes it will happen

 

[Sihirbaz_arttzz]

school environment...I wish good luck to the developer just

hello, thank you, but I would like to inform you that the school environment will not be the main place where the game will take place, it is only a linking factor for the characters.

 

[shiton32]

Interesting

 

[Yogri]

its great bro, more anime girls please

 

[The Pie Rat]

Picking the second option tells you that you have no business playing the game and forces you to the main menu lel.

(It's the first option in the game, you haven't even met the MC yet.)

 

[Sihirbaz_arttzz]

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Picking the second option tells you that you have no business playing the game and forces you to the main menu lel.

(It's the first option in the game, you haven't even met the MC yet.)

Hello, this is actually a small message. Even if the game contains +18 scenes, there will be a lot of focus on the story.

 

[The Pie Rat]

Hello, this is actually a small message. Even if the game contains +18 scenes, there will be a lot of focus on the story.

I just don't understand the need for this option at all, most AVN's have a focus on the story.

You need a proofreader, desperately.

 

[Sihirbaz_arttzz]

I just don't understand the need for this option at all, most AVN's have a focus on the story.

You need a proofreader, desperately.

Is it still as bad as the first version?

 

[The Pie Rat]

Is it still as bad as the first version?

It's still pretty bad, I can do it if I manage to find the time for it, you tend to use male pronouns for everyone, and the ending of the current update was badly timed (it literally ends right after a choice, the choice doesn't even do anything)

(Also I'm getting heavy beta vibes from this MC, everyone orders him around and he just submits to it)

 

[lahif]

Lookin' good, basarilar.

 

[Robo_luchador]

So I'll be keeping an eye on this one great models, good animation, and interesting if small story. My two pieces of advice one add a Gallery and two ditch that optional part to the Haram tag. All in all, I'm very curious to see where this goes, and good job with having a least one scene in this short intro I don't know how many games are at v0.9, more than 2 hours of gameplay, and still don't have anything more than teasing

 

[incest lover m/s]

will there be incest in this game in other updates?