sillyrobot
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A couple of minor errors:
Palla's employer Prodigal is providing 4 points of professionalism (or whatever her tally is called) instead of 2.4.
When playing pool with Lexi:
"But she seems to take fare more pleasure in leaning on the table in whatever provocative pose she can pull off."
should be
"But she seems to take far more pleasure in leaning on the table in whatever provocative pose she can pull off."
Palla's employer Prodigal is providing 4 points of professionalism (or whatever her tally is called) instead of 2.4.
When playing pool with Lexi:
"But she seems to take fare more pleasure in leaning on the table in whatever provocative pose she can pull off."
should be
"But she seems to take far more pleasure in leaning on the table in whatever provocative pose she can pull off."