Ren'Py - Love's Champion [v0.1.4.0 Public] [Grimaga]

  1. 4.00 star(s)

    praqueperguntas

    I'm leaving a review because the devs seem to read here. This is a review for version 0.5.0.

    The game is really good, but in a different way from, say, Lessons in Love or Ripples. It's not fantastically well written and it's not a serious dramatic story; rather, this is a self-aware, humorous game that, from the get-go, has an over-the-top goddess character straight up tell you "I'm gonna give you super powers so you can get a harem and make everyone happy. Also, this is a video-game". Literally.

    It's nice. Among all these games that just feel ridiculous with how the MC is some sort of chosen one or just for some reason someone that all women want (usually despite being an idiot with no redeeming qualities), it's cool to have a game that takes a humorous approach to it. In particular, it's nice to see an MC that isn't either an imbecile, a mindless pervert, and/or constantly giving life lessons that nobody asked for. The characters are also funny in a subdued way, without repetitive humor or excessively vulgar dialogue.

    There's no story to speak of, or if there is, the devs haven't introduced it yet. It's a character-based game, meaning each girl has her own sort of self-contained story, and the stories are always about the girl, not about some overarching plot. The girls are sufficiently different to stay interesting, while retaining that humorous touch that makes all their stories quite lighthearted. No "fun rooms" (Lessons in Love reference for those who haven't played it) to be found here, only actual funny rooms.

    Now, as for the sex scenes... They seem like the default honeyselect stuff. There isn't anything too crazy, and I couldn't tell if any of them were custom or not. The writing is to my tastes, and the scene styles are to my tastes, but if you're looking for the more hardcore/freaky stuff that goes on in this community, look elsewhere. The MC is not physically abusing or torturing anyone, no one's getting randomly pregnant for no apparent plot reason, no one's peeing on anyone else, and there's no massive pointless orgies or humiliation. If you're like me, are not into those things and kinda wishes the adult game community was a little less excessive, then definitely give it a go.

    One thing for the developers: as has been pointed out by others, there are some things you could do to improve the models. For example, Aria's eyes are too dark, and I can't help but think she's some sort of demon every time. Hers and Alaine's hair doesn't work in some types of light, especially in the very early scenes of the game. The girls' skin is sometimes a little off during certain scenes; maybe add a tiny bit of gloss to it? That always seems to make it a bit better for me in ILLUSION games. Also, some scenes cut off awkwardly, like having black bars at the top and bottom, or having climax last for a fraction of a second before cutting off to a different CG. You could try making them a little more expressive: while I actually think your game is better, I'd have a look at Corrupted World, since they actually got the Honeyselect facial expressions quite well. Another one to look at is the aforementioned Ripples, which also uses Honeyselect models and, especially during sex scenes, gets the facial expressions to work really well. These things aren't necessarily your fault; the Honeyselect models can be hard to work with and require some strange lighting effects to not look like dolls. But they're things that can be fixed with a few simple tricks (at least inside Honeyselect itself), and that's basically the only thing keeping me from bumping this review up to a 5 star.

    PS.: The stats seem like an abandoned feature to be honest, since they only really matter during the intro and can then be grinded up before actually starting the game proper. While I approve of trying to add actual gameplay to the game (unlike most VNs), you might want to rethink how it's done here.
  2. 2.00 star(s)

    Mushikrat

    GARBAGE. Ever escalating stat demand for dialogue options, basically forcing you into min-maxing stat points or not being able to choose any option other than the worst. Subpar story, mediocre background, good animations, at least it's not buggy. Too much talking, Idk couldn't get invested. -_- 2/5
  3. 2.00 star(s)

    Keizer19

    I get that this game is still on its early stages and maybe changes will come on its way. The story is.. okay in my opinion, not too bad but not good either. The characters don't really have any expression in their faces other than the moaning expression and the default expression.. It really hollows the attempted "intimate" scenes where the heroines try to open up and they look at you with that blank stare on their faces. Playing through this feels like watching a PowerPoint presentation..
  4. 3.00 star(s)

    altident08

    The models and animations are good and the ero scenes are very well put together with a lot of passion. However there's a lot of spelling errors and clunky dialogue which could definitely use some revision. The story feels very rushed, which if you're just in it for fap fodder you may see as a good thing, but I'd like to see a little more development in future updates.

    I'd give it 3.5 stars if I could, but if future updates come with a bit more polish, it'll be an easy 4-5 star.
  5. 4.00 star(s)

    faradhii

    Good first effort, I'll try to be constructive here.

    1) Aria's white hair needs a bit of fleshing out, it's mildly jarring in that it doesn't look like REAL hair (though that may be a honey select issue, take a look at Life Changing Choices/My Bully is my Lover for reference)

    2) The dynamic between the (currently) 2 LI's is very well done, especially how Lia goes a bit overboard on Aria and then feels terrible about it.

    3) As has been said in the forums, the choices are a bit one dimensional. Meaning most of the time there's an obvious "right" choice except for what personal stats you want to raise.

    4) I'd recommend a write up on how you want the stats (confidence, knowledge, etc.) to play out so people can steer themselves down the path they want.

    5) Sex scenes were well done and showed genuine passion with the text.

    I was torn between 3 and 4 stars, chose 4 due to it being a demo release with some good content.

    All in all, a nice first release, hope we can bang the Goddess of Love in the future :)
  6. 5.00 star(s)

    DiTo

    Version 0.1

    This game is a gem! Very well written story and dialog. The graphics are very good and the game play is smooth. The character design is very beautiful. The scenes are well thought out and well implemented. An awesome looking game over all. Looking forward to seeing it develop and progress further. Good luck to the dev. Extremely promising game.