Good first effort, I'll try to be constructive here.
1) Aria's white hair needs a bit of fleshing out, it's mildly jarring in that it doesn't look like REAL hair (though that may be a honey select issue, take a look at Life Changing Choices/My Bully is my Lover for reference)
2) The dynamic between the (currently) 2 LI's is very well done, especially how Lia goes a bit overboard on Aria and then feels terrible about it.
3) As has been said in the forums, the choices are a bit one dimensional. Meaning most of the time there's an obvious "right" choice except for what personal stats you want to raise.
4) I'd recommend a write up on how you want the stats (confidence, knowledge, etc.) to play out so people can steer themselves down the path they want.
5) Sex scenes were well done and showed genuine passion with the text.
I was torn between 3 and 4 stars, chose 4 due to it being a demo release with some good content.
All in all, a nice first release, hope we can bang the Goddess of Love in the future