VN Ren'Py Lust Island [Ch1fix] [AshrandGames]

[Ashrand]

Beginning to understand the 1 star review. For people who only do straight content, the misgendering dialogue would be off-putting. Think I'll skip a download until that part improves. (Assuming we ever see this game again)

Hi
I don't mind the review. I'm doing it for the love of art. The game is finished in Spanish. I'm dividing it into chapters because the translation takes time. Chapter 1, which you guys played, is something I made two years ago, hahaha.
As for the story, it's simple. I know. But I didn't expect to make something very complex. I'm not a screenwriter, nor do I try to be. XD
I'm making a corrected version of the flaws.
The same goes for the translation errors. I'm trying to correct what I can, but there will be some. I don't understand any English, and I use a translator who makes mistakes. XD
As for whether you'll see me around: My intention is yes. Translating the game takes time, and I, as I've already said, have a job in real life that takes up a lot of my time. But as long as I find some time to translate, I'll keep uploading.
Thanks for your kind words.

 

[sergerserj]

Buggy, peace of... game. Don't even completed translate by lazy dev... Finish translate or not publish it at all! And quality of translate, holy hell, even ai make it better. Or was it ai?
Wrong capitalizing in relations (dad/mom/sis), there are 3 simple rules for it.
UI just repulsive, strange colors, strange outlines, "thinking" instead of (), can't hide character info (too big)
Not much, but there is spaghetti coding.
Some renders just bad - yacht, for example.
Nope, just nope. Game not even in beta...

 

[shavone1]

Buggy, peace of... game. Don't even completed translate by lazy dev... Finish translate or not publish it at all! And quality of translate, holy hell, even ai make it better. Or was it ai?
Wrong capitalizing in relations (dad/mom/sis), there are 3 simple rules for it.
UI just repulsive, strange colors, strange outlines, "thinking" instead of (), can't hide character info (too big)
Not much, but there is spaghetti coding.
Some renders just bad - yacht, for example.
Nope, just nope. Game not even in beta...

Getting angry at a video game demo. ROFLMAO! pure entertainment in these forums....

 

[Ashrand]

Hello, good morning.
After reviewing the content of the first chapter, I've fixed the blank text issues and tried to improve some translation problems you mentioned.
I must mention again that English is not my native language, and I barely understand it. I use Google Translate to generate the translation and have noticed that it's quite inconsistent. Especially when it comes to genres, haha.
First of all, thank you for your feedback, for the constructive criticism, and above all, for your patience. This is a hobby for me. I don't intend to make a living from this, since I have a job outside of this world. I simply want to share what I do with others.
I also want to mention that I started the game two years ago and currently have it finished in Spanish, in its rough form. I haven't corrected anything. My idea of releasing it in chapters is because translating it is something that takes a lot of time for me, and with my job, it's not something I can dedicate all day to.
It also helps me hear your feedback and notice mistakes, so I can try to improve chapter by chapter.
Thank you.

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[Cajun Fox]

Thanks for the share

 

[idonthaveaname973]

Keep it bro it has potential. But do test your game before you upload.

 

[Ezekiel Jones]

Also... story plot "two siblings shipwrecked on a deserted island..." First question..."will there be NTR?" From what? A Monkey?

Well, if they stranded on Monkey Island, why not? However, I hope those little hairy bastards are better at English than the dev.

 

[Obsidion69]

Hello. Thanks for your comment.
My native language is Spanish, and the game is created in that language. I barely know any English, so for the translation I used Google Translate, which... Well... It makes those mistakes. I'm currently working on a version with those things patched. But unfortunately, there will be other things in the translation that are wrong.
Thanks for your patience, and I'll try to improve on that.

Flipped pronouns seems to be a problem with certain languages and online translation tools. With some languages I get it but I've occasionally wondered why it happens with Spanish given it's the 4th most spoken language in the world.

 

[Ashrand]

Flipped pronouns seems to be a problem with certain languages and online translation tools. With some languages I get it but I've occasionally wondered why it happens with Spanish given it's the 4th most spoken language in the world.

Hello. I think this happens because in Spanish the pronoun is neuter. And in English it isn't. So the translation tool tends to translate it as if it were masculine. This is a real headache, as it forces you to gender all the original sentences that have a pronoun. It also happens that the "she/he" in Spanish is almost always hidden. It's understood by context. And if the translator doesn't have it, they also tend to translate it as masculine. It's also a pain, having to add it to all the original sentences. Definitely, with the little time I have each day. It's not something worth it to me. I don't know if I'll end up doing it.
This forum requires the game to be in English. That's why I translated it.
If I see that it's too much effort, I'll leave it only in Spanish for the huge Spanish community on the forum, and so that they can download it from another site.
Thanks for your comment.

 

[JokerOfTorment]

I'm guessing based on the description on the first page and what's been said so far in posts it's going to be a multi protagonist game playing as either male or female so it should probably get that tag along with the female protagonist one since it seems a lot of other threads have it set up that way with all three tags.

 

[Jungles70]

Italian translation Click Here

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[Ghost'']

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[Woodstock_1983]

The game title says What's in picture 1 but the download says Demo? Is it still a Demo?

 

[Ashrand]

The game title says What's in picture 1 but the download says Demo? Is it still a Demo? View attachment 5280384 View attachment 5280385

It's a demo. You can find more content on my Patreon, and I'm finishing chapter 3, which will be up soon. When I publish chapter 3, chapter 2 will be here. And so on.
Best regards.

 

[Theo146]

Are there any other tags to come or just this