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Aesir Lust

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One thing I'll say is that the game definitely needs more commas. I noticed it several times in the intro, but it's especially obvious when the protagonist says "That hurt you psycho." That could be read as "That hurt, you psycho" or "That hurt you, psycho." As I always say, proper grammar is the difference between knowing your Master and knowing you're Master.

I feel like Reyes isn't supposed to be saying my character's name in all caps.

Uh... I also feel like Skylar wasn't supposed to be wearing lingerie as she greeted me and said "I was just on my way out" and left the house. Then the protagonist wonders if she was flirting with him but says nothing about her going outside in her underwear.

...Yeah, Sophia was definitely not supposed to call me MC.

An error occurs any time I try to open the menu by right-clicking while watching something in the gallery.

...You do realize that "continue" and "keep going" mean the same thing, right?

If I try to enter the women's bathroom at the college, it gives me an error saying the glory hole girl side quest is undefined.

Leaving Class 1-A takes you back to the main hall of the college instead of the hall just outside the class.

One of the options in the library event that feels like it should be giving me +2 "evil" points doesn't seem to give any points at all.

Choosing to talk to Helen in the living room just... does nothing? No dialogue happens and time just progresses to the night.
Thanks for all the stuff you wrote! We'll make our best to solve everything you said here and improve the grammar. About the grammar, probably mistakes were made while transcribing the script from the document to the actual code
 

odbpm

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Updated. Sorry it took so long, between work and family over for the holiday, I've been tied up a bit. I only added a bit of flavor text for the new Reyes content, so functionally it's not a major issue if you used the previous version.
download patch and it get flagged with Trojan:Script/Wacatac.B!ml
 

yoyomistro

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download patch and it get flagged with Trojan:Script/Wacatac.B!ml
Well, it's literally just the .rpy text files and the compiled .rpyc files which are derived from the text files, but I can reupload with just the .rpy text files if you think I put something in the .rpyc files, lol. Here's the for the patch with the .rpyc files.
 
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odbpm

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Well, it's literally just the .rpy text files and the compiled .rpyc files which are derived from the text files, but I can reupload with just the .rpy text files if you think I put something in the .rpyc files, lol. Here's the for the patch with the .rpyc files.
no was just pointing it out but downloaded it agian yesterday, and it didten get flagged the, so dont know what happend.
also would point out that 80% of the time mc and reyes calls helen by name and not title, same with mc to reyes, know that the game is in early stage and dont have much content, so atm it dont really matter.
 
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