Even with Mtl and no Dlc this game was an 8/10. With proper translation I cannot rank it anywhere below 9/10.
Art - 9/10 the artsyle is unique and hot, the entire game is custom assets which is very welcome.
Scenes - 7.5/10 a bit hard to get at first and some scenes feel like they take a tad too much time but it the scenes themselves are very great, hot and varied.
Story - 8/10 as a sequel for the previous game it more than delivers, the plot is good but not overbearing which is all that I can ask for in a hentai game. There is enough to sink your teeth into and get you invested but sparse enough to let you ignore it if you want to.
Gameplay - 7/10 While the management part is definitely a miss for as it takes WAY too long after the first few times you can automate it so its fine. The pachinko style minigame is actually really fun and innovative in my opinion. It can feel a bit hard at first but once you get the hang of it it really gets going.
Sound - 6/10 good enough
Overall, it is great game and a step up from the previous one, you should really try it, you won't regret it.