VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Make Love Not Waagh! [La Cucaracha Studios]

Great story. I give it a 4/5. Not because the story was lacking, but because I had my heart set on seeing Zanna's pregnant naked self, and was severely disappointed by the story ending without that. I'd give it a 4.5/5 if that was an option.

I'm a sucker for romance and this has it in spades. You got an average guy getting together with a hot orc and they make a fantastic couple.

There are no choices to be made but it's still worth a read.

My only wish is it was either longer or part of a series. Would love to see them a couple of years later after the twins were born and grown a bit.

This was a great story. incredible smut that I wanted and then just slid right into a beautiful love story that wrenched my heart. incredible, I Loved it!

The art is good and the call to D&D was adorable. I didn't look at this for a great love story but I got one. Hopefully others will enjoy this
as much as I have

the art is great( check the screenshots), the dialouge is well done and its pretty short so its defenetly worth a try. and its geting straight to the point without any anoying story stuff or minigames

my rating (12/50) poor game

for quick review
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story(4/10)
drawing(5/10)
animations(0/10)
sex scenes(3/10)
decisions(0/10)
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total (12/50)


for detailed review
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playtime: 2 hours

story(4/10)
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i didn't like the story that much most of the story boring for me
-quality (2/5) -duration(2/5) short story
total(4/10)

drawing(5/10)
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don't expect perfect drawing it's just good nothing more
i don't really like hentai based game because of the amount of CG not enough for me
-quality (3/5) -quantity/amount (2/5)
the ratio between text:images about 5:1
total:(5/10)

animation(0/10)
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the game doesn't contain any animation
-quality(0/5) -amount of animation(0/5)
total:(0/10)

sex scenes(3/10)
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not many sex scenes and not detailed sex scene (every scene contain about 2-3 images only)
but the sound effect like (slap sound-fucking sound) make the sex scenes more alive
-quality (2/5) -quantity/amount of sex scenes (1/5)
total (3/10)

decisions(0/10)
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this game doesn't contain any decisions (consider yourself watching a comic)
-quality of decisions (0/5) -amount of decisions(0/5)
total:(0/10)

note:
#this is an adult game more than just porn game
#this game contain (no decisions)(no animation)
#this game contain pregnancy
#despite the rating but you should give it a try (it deserve it)


my rating system
(41-50/50) excellent
(31-40/50) good
(21-30/50) average
(11-20/50) poor
(0-10/50) terrible

That is some cute fucking game right there. I usually like large, tall, cute kind of girls, so this game is great for me. It is very vanilla and the story goes where you expect it to go however there are some pros and cons.

Pros: This game is linear without any choices which I consider to be a good thing as in most choice based game, even though you try and make all the right decisions, unless you have made all decisions with crystal clear accuracy you probably won't get the good end you were looking for. So I think it is smart that this game is linear.

This game also has some cute art although that may very well be subjective. It for me however does that job as it is clear, cheerful and curvy.

Cons: There are not a lot of sex scenes which makes sense, but for me I need enough content for more the 30 minutes so that I can get off which I was not able to in this game.

That is pretty much what I can say for this game.

This game is awesome for anyone who likes romance but also likes BDSM and roleplay.

Pros:
+ Beautiful art
+ Realistic Dominant/Submissive roleplay
+ Short game but with a good story, perfection
+ Well-written
+ Likable characters
+ Believable plot
+ Good MC and awesome main girl

Cons:
- Completely linear


Honestly the incing on the cake has to be the subtle references to modern society and how people are stupid. The grandma is always screaming about how humans oppressed orcs in the past and how they shouldn't get along in the present. She's delusional, because it doesn't matter which race you are, "you" were a scumbag in the past. That's why the world changed so people could have equal right and freedom. Divorce rates between orcs/humans are much lower than orcs/orcs, violence and rape is much lower than people think, among many other privileges that EVERYONE has. No one is a victim anymore, but for some weird reason, people want to be victims forever. Sounds familiar to you?

Maybe I'm overthinking this, but if I'm not, the dev/writer deserves all my respect. This is much more than a game.

I started this expecting some form of dating sim. Instead I found myself drawn into a very cute, if linear, love story.

Story offers no branches, art is what you would expect from the samples given, but overall the story is fun and heartfelt. I enjoyed it very much.

If you like vanilla kinetic novels with some kinks here an there this is definitely something you should try. The characters and premise are a nice change from the usual inserts and the "game" itself is honestly quite nice. It's not too long, has a good tone of humor, and the art style is very endearing.

the story is very well written not going to far but still realistic and the art was still pleasing to look at but it didn't look awful.But no choices so your gonna either like it or hate with no way to change the story. but i loved it

Really good art and story. Interesting premise which won me over very quickly. The only two complaints would be the lack of choice (meaningful or not), though this minor thanks to the high level of engagement I found with the plot. The second would be the length, it is a little short and so would definitely would like to see more like this.

Quite an cute story, but quite short and no choices, not fake ones that make no difference. Still an game I would recommend to everyone who doesn't has an problem with light sub/dom roleplay and of course orcs.

Cute story and characters, the fantasy setting didn't really go anywhere, had zero choices and a meh ending (no preggo sex). One minor annyance is how you could replace the orks with any other fantasy race and it would have been the same story.

Pretty decent visual novel (not game, since there are no decisions). Actually, this "Make Love not waagh" is a weird mix between a convencional but pretty sweet and funny romance story between a black girl and a white boy... I mean... between an orc girl and a human boy, and a really kinky and perverted story about BDSM. Again, a weird mix, but it works just fine.

Strong Points:
- The writing is pretty good, including the spanish translation.
- The sense of humor.
- Over all, the really kinky scenes of BDSM.

Weak points:
- The art could be more sexy and a bit less cartoonish.
- The male MC could be a bit more charismatic in order of not to contrast too much with the female MC.
- Too short. It seems that the devs wanted to finish the story as soon as possible and the ending seems too hasty to me.

Actually, I don´t know why the devs don't "milk" this story and characters. This could be one of those "slice of life" stories without an ending. If the characters were a bit more elaborated in order of making them a bit more charismatic and physically appealing, and the devs were able to expand their world and to write an adventure of them every month, they could make the equivalent of a tv series or one of those ancient feuilletons or serial novels that newspapers used to include. I'm pretty sure people would bond really fast with the characters and would pay good money in Patreon for that product.

Awsome storyline. Really emotional at times.
Recommended to all who love romance novels.
This is in my opinion the best short story about romance i have ever read.
Also going through a big part about problems with racism through times.