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is there a reason why you go on to every game and just say "thx"?
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Grabbed it, tyvm
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That was the renpy of all time.
If anything, props for actually being able to compile and publish this. Regardless of quality, you did manage to submit something tangleble and that should be commended for any aspiring game developer.
I think other people have bashed the game for understandable reasons so instead, I'll give some constructive criticism on where to go next or how to proceed.
You should always design/write for a game with an end point or goal in mind. It's fine if you don't have a clear vision right now but as long as you have something cool or interesting you want to express, try and execute on it. The problem here is that the story has no direction. It's just a basic corruption outline but we don't know how we got here or why.
Obviously having a proper story outline will do wonders, regardless of whether or not you or AI are writing it. Personally, I'd try to keep the story and characters as in line with the original source material as possible. That does add a lot of flavor and legitimacy to these fan-fiction type games.
As for art, honestly, I'd prefer if you had a real artist do it. The AI is "fine" but there are some serious consistency issues.
Overall, it's fine if you want to abandon the game. No one's forcing you to make it, but make sure to take some of these lessons to heart if you plan on making and publishing more content.
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That’s the 2nd time that a dev tried to very fast delete their game thread.
not sure if they‘re all new to the internet.
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..was busy....We already got rKnight and xmilteach, only lerd0 left to make the holly trinity of bots
...fun dum dum times.....
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it wasn't made for you, instead of crying about that fact you could just move along with your life and do something else.
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I appreciated what was said. Now I know I don't want to mess with this game, for now at least. I and others like me can skip this game until it's been reworked adequately.
#MKBHDDidNothingWrong
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I'm sorry, did you actually play it? I did. It isn't made for anybody. Again, even if exhibitionism is your one and only specific kink, there is nothing here for you. It so completely misses the fundamentals of the kink, it doesn't understand how basic clothing works. It's writing is sub-par by the standards of Nigerian Prince scam emails; you know, the ones purposefully created with incredibly poor grammar so that said scammers don't waste their precious scamming time on people intelligent enough to be put off by bad grammar.
So maybe take your own advice and try to do something more constructive than whinge at someone for sharing their opinion?
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