VN Ren'Py Makima's Exposure [v0.1] [hippopotimus86]

Swallows999

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I definitely agree with the sentiment here that if you make a game you should at least try to make an effort at polishing the front-facing end, especially with the scrutiny AI art receives. The very first thing I look for is 6 fingers and when that's literally the first image, it can be disappointing. Word processing is free (GoogleDocs is a very accessible one) and it will find any obvious errors in punctuation/capitalization/misspellings, etc. Art consistency is also important: she's yoked out of her mind in the first and fourth picture with rock hard abs, but in the second she's normal.

I do love ENF/exhibitionism though (not so much women that are ripped lol) so I hope the dev takes advice from this thread to heart and builds back better!
 

consey

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No one had said this in the thread but, Is it possible that Makima controlled this dev to give her a big boobs and big ass and abs?
Tbh makima with abs looks horrible af, and some of the images just terrible coloring or styles. Also I wanna point out that how did her pants fall off when it went through 3 changes?
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Suggestion: Never use AI art
 
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cloudstrife

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Apart from the extra fingers and weird eyes she's actually a smokin hot redhead, if you can sort out those issues and maybe come up with a different reason for the exhibitionism..... say like she's just got out of the shower and a pizza guy knocks on her apartment door, when she goes to give him the money her towel falls open and onto the floor, she's embarrassed and quickly closes the door after taking the pizza but realizes that it turned her on a bit. Something like that maybe
 

faptasm

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There's so much going on here, in the same way there's a lot going on when you lose a game of Jenga. Absolutely none of this thing was built to work anywhere but the creator's head. There's the traditional AI mishaps that everybody and their grandma knows about, there's the healthy dose of mispellings, there's the lack of continuity in art style (i.e. the magic disappearing abs), there's the brief attempt by the author to take this tech demo and throw it in the trash, and there's even a level beyond the typical "nobody making parody porn cares about the material" going on here, where basically every last thing about Makima, physical and social alike, is completely inverted because Stable Diffusion doesn't understand the concept of hot women with no curves, if not the creator.

Every AI game I see on here just makes it more clear to me that, if I ever comission AI for porn, that it should never ever in a thousand years leave my hard drive if I don't want to be bullied
 

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I definitely agree with the sentiment here that if you make a game you should at least try to make an effort at polishing the front-facing end, especially with the scrutiny AI art receives. The very first thing I look for is 6 fingers and when that's literally the first image, it can be disappointing. Word processing is free (GoogleDocs is a very accessible one) and it will find any obvious errors in punctuation/capitalization/misspellings, etc. Art consistency is also important: she's yoked out of her mind in the first and fourth picture with rock hard abs, but in the second she's normal.
Nothing new starts out perfect. AI is going to evolve. It's inevitable.

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faptasm

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Nothing new starts out perfect. AI is going to evolve. It's inevitable.
Just because it's gonna evolve and grow doesn't mean it's gonna be good. Mother Nature makes shortsighted and dumb decisions all the time, and if we're pretending technological progress works the same way, you'd better be ready for something about as elegantly designed as rabbits having to eat their own shit to overcome their poor digestive system.
 
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Saint Blackmoor

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Mother Nature makes shortsighted and dumb decisions all the time.
Your right about that, faptasm. :ROFLMAO:

And why are you saying "Mother Nature" like it's a real thing? It's called EVOLUTION.
And you're equating nature, evolution, or, more acutely, natural process with man-made intelligence. (Artificial Intelligence)
Fun Fact: AI is here and will never go away. Just like cell phones and the internet, this world could not and will not function without it in any meaningful way moving forward.

rabbits having to eat their own shit to overcome their poor digestive system.
Coprophagia occurs when feces is consumed. The mere thought of this type of behavior is rather unsettling to most people, but some animals, such as rabbits, actually eat their own feces for a very good reason. Coprophagia is a normal, healthy behavior in rabbits. Similar to cows chewing their cud.
Fun fact: Fap-ass-man. There is a medical treatment in which medically treated feces are reintroduced into the human digestive system to correct gut bio imbalances.

I imagine this is a lot of information for you to digest.:ROFLMAO:
 

Ronia

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Nothing new starts out perfect. AI is going to evolve. It's inevitable.
No kidding? Plastic surgery evolved as well; that does not make the horrifying hairplugs and insane balloon tits of the 80ies and 90ies suddenly look good. That something might be good in the future has exactly zero relevance to its quality in the present.
 
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EvolutionKills

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No kidding? Plastic surgery evolved as well; that does not make the horrifying hairplugs and insane balloon tits of the 80ies and 90ies suddenly look good. That something might be good in the future has exactly zero relevance to its quality in the present.
Plus, we replace bad systems with worse ones all of the time. We replaced a bad system of jobs and bosses with a worse system of gigs and on-demand labor. 'Newer' is not synonymous with 'better'.

And that's ignoring the specific elephant in the room with generative AI, in that they're fueled by Venture Capitalist Ghouls, built off of the remains of globe-spanning theft; and serve zero purpose outside of hype-based enrichment of shareholders and the worsening of both the internet and the environment by the creation of a metric fuck-ton of spam, scams, and CO2.

This anti-human, fake futurism bullshit needs to go die in a fire...
 

faptasm

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Plus, we replace bad systems with worse ones all of the time. We replaced a bad system of jobs and bosses with a worse system of gigs and on-demand labor. 'Newer' is not synonymous with 'better'.

And that's ignoring the specific elephant in the room with generative AI, in that they're fueled by Venture Capitalist Ghouls, built off of the remains of globe-spanning theft; and serve zero purpose outside of hype-based enrichment of shareholders and the worsening of both the internet and the environment by the creation of a metric fuck-ton of spam, scams, and CO2.

This anti-human, fake futurism bullshit needs to go die in a fire...
And as the one who decided to kick the most prolific AI defender on the forum in the shin, there's an even more practical, material problem on the horizon besides slapfights about art:

We're projected to have a lithium shortage within the next decade.

Technology isn't made from nothing, and we have willfully chosen to replace old, bulky, but easy to source/recycle sodium-ion batteries (which can still be recharged), with something slimmer, non-renewable, and also has a non-zero chance to explode if you stab it. The rare earth metals are also a big deal long-term, but if you need one specific metal to rally behind a few years earlier than mainstream news coverage, lithium is probably the most likely way the economics of computer hardware goes to shit, and the fact we're making big boxes with the stuff in service of making good guesses from data marked by modern day slaves is not helping.

I am writing this on a fucking porn forum, and this discussion is somehow less disconcerting to me than writing anything horny. Uhhhhhhhh if anybody knows porn games that actually give a shit about women's pleasure please let me know, there's only so long I can look at Cloud Meadow and almost nothing else
 
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