Ren'Py Master's Keep [v0.01] [Moxie]

[blergh123]

Hey guys, I'm sorry to multitag you like this but I would like to ask for your preference. There is a draft on the MC look direction to vote for.
Please note: the designs are not necessarily final and are drafts ready for further iteration if needed. Also, main elements can mix and match.

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i dont know why but all those faces look way too feminine

 

[moxie morose]

i dont know why but all those faces look way too feminine

Thanks for your feedback.
I mainly wanted to go slightly different direction than other games having either a cute anime boy, or a young guy looking similar.

so how far are we going?
bald Uther, tweaked obi wan or just reducing feminine traits step by step?

 

[Bingoogus]

I definitely want to punch 4, the others vary but 4 stands out to me...

Glad to see this game isn't dead.

 

[Uchiha Sasuke]

Hey guys, I'm sorry to multitag you like this but I would like to ask for your preference. There is a draft on the MC look direction to vote for.
Please note: the designs are not necessarily final and are drafts ready for further iteration if needed. Also, main elements can mix and match.


EDIT - also be sure to check the rest of this thread for more info

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thank you!

Unfortunate that #3 is losing, it looks simple and good TwT

 

[Seewolf]

Hey guys, I'm sorry to multitag you like this but I would like to ask for your preference. There is a draft on the MC look direction to vote for.
Please note: the designs are not necessarily final and are drafts ready for further iteration if needed. Also, main elements can mix and match.


EDIT - also be sure to check the rest of this thread for more info

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thank you!

Longer hair is more "medieval style", but too long looks odd. In my opinion: 1, 6 or 7 would be best.

 

[Anonymous fapper98]

7, 8 and 1 looked fine to me good to see 7 and 1 are at the top of the poles! Either way, ain't here to stare at the lad's face are we? We want lassies to look fine. Anywho, best of luck dev

 

[harem.king]

Hey guys, I'm sorry to multitag you like this but I would like to ask for your preference. There is a draft on the MC look direction to vote for.
Please note: the designs are not necessarily final and are drafts ready for further iteration if needed. Also, main elements can mix and match.


EDIT - also be sure to check the rest of this thread for more info

You must be registered to see the links

thank you!

These images differ on haircut, beard, and cheekbones.
I like the beard on 7 but dislike his cheekbones and haircuts.
for 5 I like the haircut and cheekbones the most, but there are better beards out there. (not that he is bad mind you)

Initially I was going to vote for 7 but something felt off and it took me some time to consciously register why, the different cheekbones.

 

[moxie morose]

mixed a bit between the parts that won and tweaked details to go for less feminine. Its still up for edits and feedback if you want to voice your preference.
Otherwise thank you for the feedback provided, you certainly helped me with the direction!

Lets focus on the lassies next - if you want a specific look, design, archetype be sure to tell me!

see you soon

 

[Madfire8]

Ahah, eager to see the lassies.
But I think the different design that appeard on your cover are already goods.
i look forward to encounter each one of these charming ladies.

 

[Seewolf]

Lets focus on the lassies next - if you want a specific look, design, archetype be sure to tell me!

see you soon

Archetypes of my preference:

• Blonde Nordic type, with blue eyes, big naturals, and feminine curves.
• Celtic/Irish redhead type with green eyes and also big or medium-sized naturals and feminine curves.

I'm really not into flat chests and skinny types.

Please don't be one of those artists who draw breasts in a medieval-style world to look like ugly modern-day silicone implants. There is actually a big difference between natural-looking breasts and fake ones.

 

[moxie morose]

Archetypes of my preference:

• Blonde Nordic type, with blue eyes, big naturals, and feminine curves.
• Celtic/Irish redhead type with green eyes and also big or medium-sized naturals and feminine curves.

I'm really not into flat chests and skinny types.

Please don't be one of those artists who draw breasts in a medieval-style world to look like ugly modern-day silicone implants. There is actually a big difference between natural-looking breasts and fake ones.

Youre in luck with your preference. I actually plan to get close to what you mentioned, just not this early.