Woo, 0.4~! PinkMochiDango never disappoints.
When Maya nabbed the hot-off-the-press
card pack, I really thought she was inadvertently handing Phoenix her own photo-shoot from the previous day. Will never say no to more Franziska though. 
Her reclining against Phoenix was extremely erotic, bravo! Though too high-and-mighty for a handy it seems; the position seemed to beg for it. I wonder what the "19" on her wall meant. The silhouette scene at Hawk's office was superb.
Making the tracker part of the frame was unavoidable I figure? A little annoying not being able to hide the dialogue box to see the tracker clearly, but nothing major.
The heater was very clever. Actually walking around with Maya for a bit was really nice touch; getting her side commentary on things was tremendously enjoyable.
"Hey you have that site bookmarked Nick!" and "Charley Jr." were absolute standouts.
Congratulations on release, hope the rest goes more smoothly.
I can't believe it's almost over.
