- Thread starter Jas0nTon
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Good visuals, not good writing. Maybe in chinese its better, sadly I dont understand chinese so cant comment on it.
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*Sees title* triggers intense long forgotten vermintide 2 PTSD lol.
If you're playing on Android, it's a bug that's been fixed in the latest version.Damn straight. I haven't seen renders that looked this good since Iwara.tv, maybe the Chinese devs know something we don't. However with all that skill and then welcomed with a shitty user interfaceIt's killing me. But then again, graphic design is a whole 'nother rabbit hole so I'm not putting it against them.
The overview is umm.. very detailed, so I hope it will be as story rich as it looks.
The main character has a name, and you can also customize the name.
Harem game, no ntr.have mc sex scenes.
- May 31, 2022
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The visuals are a solid 7/10, pretty good but some way overdone fog, false dof, and random animations that don't really need to be there.
The story so far is a 4/10, it might be higher in chinese where it is more understandable, but the english version is poorly translated, and the story itself seems to rely a LOT on some very much chinese cultural things that don't translate well. The characters are quite one dimensional, the personalities are meh, and your MC is using his "Super Power" without the player ever actually being told what it is. The introduction is as rambling as this post and with a lot less actual information on the characters, environments, or even background. All the information that should be straightforward and concise is instead dropped on you with poetic nonsense that even Bollywood would be embarassed to use.
The story idea is good, but it needs some rewrites to make it come to life. Keep in mind I am a storyteller, not a storywriter so I know the difference and it seems to be the same here. Take a page from William Shatner, get a ghost writer, tell them the story and have someone who is better at writing write it for you.
The story so far is a 4/10, it might be higher in chinese where it is more understandable, but the english version is poorly translated, and the story itself seems to rely a LOT on some very much chinese cultural things that don't translate well. The characters are quite one dimensional, the personalities are meh, and your MC is using his "Super Power" without the player ever actually being told what it is. The introduction is as rambling as this post and with a lot less actual information on the characters, environments, or even background. All the information that should be straightforward and concise is instead dropped on you with poetic nonsense that even Bollywood would be embarassed to use.
The story idea is good, but it needs some rewrites to make it come to life. Keep in mind I am a storyteller, not a storywriter so I know the difference and it seems to be the same here. Take a page from William Shatner, get a ghost writer, tell them the story and have someone who is better at writing write it for you.
Thank you for your kind comments after the tour.
I will try to eliminate the cultural differences caused by the translation in the next version, and will reorganize my story outline.
I think your suggestions about the plot are very insightful and are points I need to keep in mind as I continue to develop the story in the future. Thank you for entering such a long comment after playing the game carefully.
The graphics... I was trying to express some of the character's characteristics visually, so I'm sorry if you don't like it. It's also part of my personal rendering style, and I'll probably improve it in further rendering studies.
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Am I the only one who sees this page in Chinese
what happened?The page changes language to English by itself
what happened?The page changes language to English by itself
Sorry for the bad experience, I have changed the default language to English in the latest version.
Sorry sorry sorry sorry!
If you need to change it, please find "英语" in "设置",Or download the newest version.
Initially I have been using the native image quality for rendering accuracy, I will improve it in the next version.
Footjob is inevitable in the version in front of you, if you are not satisfied with it I will change it to optional in the next version (I understand, it is my personal preference).
NTR is not going to appear in my game, and Femdom will have to be decided according to the future direction of the plot.