I deeply appreciate the Shania quote, it warms my heart, so much that it should keep me warm all through the long cold lonely night
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yeah, like i said the mc is a walking punching bag, every encounter ends with him on the floor
maybe the autor is using the typical korean/chinese narrative where every single mc has to be kicked in the balls by anyone he meets
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Yeah this was my issue with it too.
MC doesn't impress at all, you would expect him to be more of a badass or at least competent.
The story itself felt a little confusing at times but I loved the visuals, there was a lot of hours put into those and you can tell.
I would prefer an episodic game with H scenes.
Not the retarded Hgames that are already plentiful in China.
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I don't think it's anything that needs changing really, it's still early game so more a chance to show him grow as a character as the game goes on.
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+1
I don't want to miss this game.You're rarer than a panda.
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Replayed and enjoyed the latest translation. Nice to know what the actually plot is 
Due to translation, it is difficult to say is MC an idiot or not, for while the words do make sense a lot of content is lost in translation. Like, I don't understand why first characters are so polite only to insult each other right after. Is that normal in China? Then there was the elf-Queen, while I understood the conversation I also felt a lot of was again lost in translation.
Eitherway, the music and high-quality renders kept me interested. Definitely one of the best game in this forum.
Due to translation, it is difficult to say is MC an idiot or not, for while the words do make sense a lot of content is lost in translation. Like, I don't understand why first characters are so polite only to insult each other right after. Is that normal in China? Then there was the elf-Queen, while I understood the conversation I also felt a lot of was again lost in translation.
Eitherway, the music and high-quality renders kept me interested. Definitely one of the best game in this forum.
I think this is probably not a translation problem, but simply because I have too little experience in writing.Replayed and enjoyed the latest translation. Nice to know what the actually plot is
Due to translation, it is difficult to say is MC an idiot or not, for while the words do make sense a lot of content is lost in translation. Like, I don't understand why first characters are so polite only to insult each other right after. Is that normal in China? Then there was the elf-Queen, while I understood the conversation I also felt a lot of was again lost in translation.
Eitherway, the music and high-quality renders kept me interested. Definitely one of the best game in this forum.
I'll work on it, thanks for the advice!
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THIS!
Totally agreed, this MC feels kinda: too much talk, little to show, and some of the jokes are really meh.
But so far the plot looks promising and the Girls are good and beautiful.
I've always wanted to use this nagging (and trolling) character to show the character of a newcomer to society from Undertown. This may allow the player to feel his growth in future episodes...
But maybe I'm not experienced enough in writing, so some players will get bored with him. I apologize for that.
Dunno... I'm not sure about everything else, but I want the MC to improve and become powerful.
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Personally I find him frustrating right now, like others have said he is mostly all talk, when it comes to action he gets his ass handed to him but as long as he improves with the story I think it could be good way to showcase his growth as a character.
not only that, after the sex scene he has an internal monologue about how bad he is at sex and he had to use his powers to last longer, he acts like a beta even when hes thinking
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Well he was a virgin, makes sense to not have confidence there yet.
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I recommend getting a native English speaker who is fluent with Chinese in order to make conversation smooth. I don't mind cultural differences but delivering the message from one language to another is not easy, especially considering all the differences between English and Mandarin Chinese.
I also recommend dev to finnish the main game first before branching the plot into different endings, I think the elf ending would satisfy most of players. The problem of dividing the plot in the middle of the game is that the workload easily doubles, triples, and most of the players won't notice the effort for they follow a special ending. Ravager is a perfect example of this mistake: instead of finnishing the main plot the devs decided to follow the plotline of each girl, and now more after a year the main plot has not developed at all. It is much more difficult to finish the game with +10 different endings than one, but it is much more easier to expand the existing game towards the direction the players want.
I also recommend dev to finnish the main game first before branching the plot into different endings, I think the elf ending would satisfy most of players. The problem of dividing the plot in the middle of the game is that the workload easily doubles, triples, and most of the players won't notice the effort for they follow a special ending. Ravager is a perfect example of this mistake: instead of finnishing the main plot the devs decided to follow the plotline of each girl, and now more after a year the main plot has not developed at all. It is much more difficult to finish the game with +10 different endings than one, but it is much more easier to expand the existing game towards the direction the players want.