VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Measuring My Cum [Ch. 4 v4.0c] [Suzinak]

Review of CH2

If you've read the OP, this game is basically a Ren'Py / 3D port of a free erotic novel. If you read the novel, you know what you're getting.

The models are nice, the environments are nice, the lighting is nice, the clothes are extra nice most of the time.

This is a rather erotic porn game with porn logic. If you're into that, it's great. The mom is hot and domineering for those that are into that, it's an extra perk.

Each chapter is rather short, I expect that all of them to be around the 15 minute mark, but if the game does get up to chapter 10, as the dev stated he intents, that's still two and a half hours. Not bad, the pacing is quick. This is not a game that will be out for 15 updates over a year and a half with no actual sex outside of a dream sequence. Not pointing any fingers, but you know what I'm talking about.

The chapters are coming out quick, there's no choices to be made, it's already written. It's all about getting assets and rendering the scenes. Content delivery is on point.

All of that being said, the writing is what you expect of a free online novel. It's bad. Full of "I said hesitantly", and "She replied with determination". You know, pure amateur shit. This is how I write, and I avoid writing like it were the devil.

It's ok, maybe even rather good. It seems to be developing at a good pace and I like it. 4 stars.

I've read so many good reviews so I've played it and it's been a disappointment.

My 3 stars are becuase of the amazing renders, the great model of the mother, and that it's well wirtten. But the plot is so simple, so cliche.
There is no story, just sexual scenes. They are well writes, that's true, but if you are looking for a good mother/son story, this is not a game that I'd recommend.

Good start. The MILF mom is quite hot looking. I see a lot of potential in how this story could develop. The dialog is a bit simple, but has no problems. I hope to see more character development for the mom and son, to see why they are the way they are.

Amazing game! Loved the visual and the story. Curious to see what will be coming up in the upcoming chapters. Hopefully updates will be relatively quick and frequent. Keep up the good work Dev! All the best to you.

Review for Chapter 1 Update 2.

I don't usually review games this early in development, but I really like the setup for this one. The 5 star rating is based on where this seems to be going since there's not a lot of content here yet.

But what's here currently is high quality. The visuals are all good, but it's the story and writing that make this standout.

Good animations & models and a pretty engaging take on a well-worn genre. The only criticism I have for such an early release is that the Mum wasn't exactly reluctant to get involved...so perhaps that could have been worked out a bit more? That is...unless she's a total cum whore and has been waiting for an opportunity like this to come up. We'll have to wait and see

**Update for 0.2**
Update took a while (about 2 months?) but game is progressing nicely, small amount of content (took about 10 to 20 min. to play new section) but the (new?) animations are beautiful and super smooth! Honestly this game is getting better and better! Only complaint would be update time, but of course developer cant really control that. rating stays the same!

**Review for Ch. 1 Update 1**

Really good start to an incest oriented game! Renders look beautiful and although it is pretty short it already has some nice action in it as well!
Love the concept / trope of "mom has to help you cum" hopefully she is drinking it from that measuring glass soon

5 stars for a good start but definitely needs frequent updates to make it truly a 5 star game.

Good writing, animations and a sexy AF female interest... I'm looking very forward to the next updates. This explores one of my favorite fetishes that is severly lacking in content. It reminded me of a Cece Belle video on PH.

Absolutely recommended for mom/son lovers.
Mom looks so hot.
Demo looks short & it's kinetic novel, so don't expect any choices.
You dont need a incest patch.
It's based on a story in literotica.com, which dev officially admitted it in his dev.notes.

Finally, please try to just have a look at Mom & decide to play this novel. You won't regret it, but definitely will crave for it more & more.

Renders : (5 / 5) - Detailed, well lit and realistic.
Animation : (5 / 5) - Very fluid and realistic.
Character design : (5 / 5) - The women are very hot !
Plot : (5 / 5) - Simple, not very *original* (who cares ?), but it is delivered perfectly.

All in all a very good "game" (Kinetic novel for now, we'll see in the future).
Can't wait for the next chapter

I like this game. Especially milf looks great. It's good that he has incest. The character rendering is great. The feeling of the game is great. It doesn't look like a simple game. There is a lot of potential in this game. I will look forward to updates.

Renders are top notch, but what stands out is animations. These are the most fluid and realistic ones I 've seen so far.
Mom's strict and prudish character gives quite a touch in the whole atmosphere.
I hope this game continues with good release pace.

God damn this is going to be a very nice game to follow !
The animations and the plot are very promising
The mom is really hot. I can't wait to see the story develop and see her dressing and acting kinkier !

Very nice first release. I very much appreciated the detailed modelling and for a pleasant change realistic sizing of the son's dick - especially in the doctor's office. Visuals are of unusual high quality although several scenes do miss supporting renders of blood samples (nurse!), drive and arrival home and I hope some of them will be added later. The author appears to be a native english speaker. Next to the overall quality of modelling and visuals the sophisticated language (it appears some erotica novel was used, but hey, there are Oscars for adapted screenplay too) was my motivation to join as patron. I'm missing the option to customize names though which is important to me for a good game immersion.

This is a very well made project, the graphics is AMAZING , the animation is fantastic,
love the story, can hardly wait to see the upcoming chapters.
keep up the amazing work. considering about being a patron.

Excellent first chapter

Classic porn plot that we all have seen, Mom helps son jack off, though this time doctor prescribed.

The story goes 18 year old Jacob(virgin & chronic masturbater) , who is overprotected and controlled by his newly divorced mom has some pain in his balls, so mom takes him to the doctor, the doctor says to jack off and measure his semen volume daily so she can diagnose the problem .(I had a similar issue with ball pain at the same age, I was told to get a sonogram, not jack off...). Mom, who is characterized as a prude given up on men, is very willing to help her son as much as he needs, typical porn stuff.

The animations were very good though there only 2 of them so far.
The mom is really hot and rendered well.
Dialogue is good though wordy at some points.

Can't wait for chapter 2