Ren'Py - Melatonin Magiks [Ch.4 v1.0 Public] [LaCokaGaming]

An exceptionally well made game.
No grinding at all.
The girls are very cute and each has a unique style

Each scene has 3 dialog variations depending on what you want the girl to call you. There is a default generic one. Then there is one for if you want her to call you master. And finally there is daddy. although 2 girls have son instead of daddy for a different kind of roleplay. A nice touch, also this works regardless of capitalization so "daddy" and "Daddy" have the same dialog just with the capitalization preference of your choice.

Dev calls it a "one penis game", we need a tag for this because this is wonderful
There is no sharing of your girls with other men, there is no "your character is a pathetic loser who masturbates while watching a real man fuck a woman".

High quality game: girls are cute, dialogues are very lewd, you can choose how the girls call you with special dialogues if you write “Daddy” or “Master” (and that should be the new standard), the countless sex scenes are very well-made, highly erotic and various; in summary, all the adult-content is top-notch!

The only thing I don’t like is the story: I don’t get it. Demons, dreamworld, armors, fights, aliens, spaceships…An infamous mix, without a doubt results of feverish dreams of a drug addict violently in need.

Still, five stars because every time I started the game, I planned for a two hours gaming session but ended up with my pants down my knees after 10 minutes…that’s saying something!

lovely game! feel like the updates were longer in the past, with more events per girl, but hopefully that changes when the creator gets more subs. girls are nice to look at, a lot of lewd content. I liked the scenes with Pyrka and Ona the most, hope Pyrka comes back again! my fave part is probably the nickname system. wonder if there'll be more girls introduced in the future? also, hope that the navigation UI changes, it's not super fun to use lol

The chapters develop off each other and flow perfectly remembering choices and differing some dialog depending on what you do. I enjoy the choices as well as the indepth character development given to each character as you progress each part of their story and personal moments. I made this comment in the thread, but in the deeper moments learning about the characters I honestly forgot this was a h game with how well its written and I have ready many books and stories and dropped them for that reason. I honestly look forward to the updates. Keep up the good work!

This dev has mastered pacing.
This is a game that wastes no time in delivering high quality porn. There is no grind. Every interaction leads to a unique sex scene. It never feels repetitive. Sometimes it will lead into it with an action scene that mixes things up without getting in the way.
The game avoids exposition dumps and delivers its setting naturally as you go along.

Also the music is great. I definitely recommend playing this one with the sound on.

A really fun game, lots of girls and lots of dirty talk. Really like the way the game allows you to choose how certain girls address you and talk during sex. Models are varied and pretty nice looking. I had some issues with animations hanging and stuff early on but i think the dev has fixed those problems. The plot is out there, like way out there but that's kinda the point. If you can let go and have fun with a wacky plot that has some humor, sweetness and lots of dirty talking sluts then this game is highly recommended

You, sir, have greatly surpassed my expectations in just chapter one! As I currently download Chapter 2, I would just like to say that the monstrosity you have created is of high quality and I can see that you have put a lot of work and love into it. This game has everything. Humor, animation, androids, goth chicks, a willful MC, breeding fetishs, a kickass plot and storyline, NO NTR and above all (and most important), CATGIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to play Chapter 2 and to see what else you have in store for this game. Good work sir.

This game is a quality of life improvement away from being great.
It's light heart, don't take any of this too seriously type of game. This game does however need to fix it's UI and make the transition between shots smoother. You can still see for a split second the previous still image before the animations plays. The navigation UI when going outside could be better. Rather then clicking on map icon and then click again on the go outside option, just let me make one click and show me the options for where to go.

Visually is very very good, deformations are good, girls still look like girls bending over and stuff. Thre are girls for every taste (or close enough i guess). This part being what it is, it is outstanding, and for me it deserves the rating i give.
The bad part is that there is no character arcss whatsssoever and scenes are just so free and easy, thye are like short porn clips. If the specific stuff in the game is what floats your boat, you will be blessed, if its not, go watch cosplay porn, its the same thing, just better.

I'm still in chapter 1, but i already love the characters, humour, story (it's a bit confusing and random at first tho) and art/scenes.

The only major flaw i can think of is how chaotic is the beggining, but other than that no major complains, if I played it before i would also mention the size - 6GB for chapter 1, what a joke - but it was already fixed for chapter 2, while chapter 1 have compressed version so it's fine i guess.

As for minor issues, it's a bit annoying that i have to reload and select other options to see different scenes in some events, not sure if it got changed in chapter 2, if so i will update that part of the review later.

Overall 9/10, really good game that i could recommend anyone.

This game is very good quality, the visuals are fantastic and there is a soundtrack so it gives the game more personality; the songs that are used are quite catchy. I experienced a little bit of lag on animations but I'm assuming that's because I'm playing on a laptop which isn't really designed for games, other than that I've found no issues. It has quite a lot of fun features too and there are a lot of different girls to choose from, and it's been a good experience so far.

kinda crazy that it took all this time for someone to realize that the key to a successful erotic visual novel is to have a bunch of cute anime girls call you "daddy" during lewd scenes ; absolutely love this VN, if/when the CPU usage issues get sorted out, this game is gonna absolutely take off (I had some issues while running WINE on my mac with CH1, but switching to the MacOS version of the game for Ch2 gave me zero issues)

while the story may not be "A Tale of Two Cities 2", it doesn't have to be, you know what you're here for... and Cokane0 absolutely delivers on the lewd content; characters will have different dialogue depending on the lewd nickname you want them to call you, a wide and diverse cast of characters and fetishes (hopefully more in the future), and a pretty loose, comedic atmosphere is present throughout

excited to see future development of this game and to see what happens from here on out! I highly recommend that @Cokane0 considers changing the summary of the game (think the large amount of "Woah"s are gonna turn away some would-be players) and the banner (probably to the classic "5 girls from a VN standing next to each other" that's so popular nowadays), I think they'll get way more eyeballs on the game and patrons in the sub box (also, maybe get a subscribestar?)

Final thoughts: Ona is best girl and I will literally fight you if you disagree

@Cokane0

About MC:
~>Ggwp but I'm confuse of the story atm didn't explain how the MC got his super power.

~>Story is surprisingly unexpected interesting but how the F did the MC become chick magnet cause majority of the hot waifu has no resistance at all?

~>There are a lot of unanswered question how the F did the MC become OP and unexperienced in the art of war?

~>It possible the ending the MC will become the new king or over throw the king?


Ah yes about the Waifu materials:

~>The Waifu are so hot and sexy perfect breed it feels like I'm drinking my cup of coffee every day.

~>Some personality is unexpected unique for my taste.

~>It would be hilarious to create to blue ball the MC sometimes.


About sex/music/Gameplay/Dialogue:

~>Lack of variety of sex option "where to penetrate however you wish"

~>Music can't feel any horny and but some dialogue does it job.

~>Lack of teasing/Blue ball the players.

~>Free roam a good choice where to proceed.


Remarks About the Game:
~>Hell yeah feel free to DL and play the game it is worth it.

~>Surprisingly a lot of sex scene and story is solid as a rock but where does the power comes from?

~>The developer need a solid foundation building to create awesome story! It means needs a lot of attention/support/funds.

~>The game feels like a present box with full unexpected events.

~>I rarely give 5 star but you deserve it not only your WAIFU is unique and also how the story progress. There are a lot of loop hole needs to be fix/refurnish/improvement but then again trial and error to make the best game to produce.

For a new Game Developer to drop a 6gb content at 1 go. It is rare. The erotic scenes are great too. The music is chill, but you know what is the most interesting? The Dialogues, the imagination of the writer is out of this world, literally.

I really wanted to like this game, maybe because of the Bill and Ted vibe of the overview, maybe because the dev seems like a nice guy who engages with the thread here...
I just can't bring myself to liking it though, and I can't fathom under the effects of what sort of drugs some of the other reviews were written ...

the music is very loud, but that can be adjusted.
It doesn't really add anything to the game.

the plot is.. I can't tell what the plot is, it's so random. (actually that does smell of Bill and Ted, a bit.). I can't honestly understand the high praise the plot is getting..because it's barely there, and barely acts as a go between for sex scenes that don't have a reason to be in any particular order other than for the fact that one character tells you that to get it on with her you need to talk to another, as far as I can tell unrelated, character.

I am not a fan of the anime style, and if I were, I would probably still say this isn't super high quality.
Animations are rather basic.


On the plus side, there is a lot of content, but it sort of blends together with very little variation.

There are games where I skip the dialogue to get to the amazing sex scenes and great renderings..other games I focus on the dialogues and the plot, and I will forgive (and even skip) less than good scenes if the plot engages me. this time, I didn't know what not to skip, after a while. After having quite a hard time downloading it (it's hefty, but the issues were on my end, not a fault of the dev), I really was hoping for a better game.
2 stars because of the sheer volume, but that doesn't say much.

Version 1.0

This looks to be a very promising game. The dialog writing in this game is outstanding. I don't think I have ever seen a more skilled dev when it comes to dialog writing. I really like the content of the scenes in animations they really look like they have been very thoughtfully chosen as far as I can see. I really love the game in general and would highly recommend it to others. Even though there are some elements that are rough around the edges, the positives in this game far overshadow any minor flaws, especially considering that this is a first release. This is a great game and I am looking forward to seeing it develop further.

Time of this review is with game version 1.0 ( first release )

Pro:
- Fun to play through
- Okish length for a first release ( took me maybe 10 hours or so to play through it but im a slow reader so probably shorter for most people )
- Nice graphics

Cons:
- The sex scenes feel way to packed together with not enough story in between them. it feels like almost every event you do results in some kind of scene happening ( maybe that's just me a complaint )
- Only seems to cover a few fetishes and stuff ( maybe just me again but the more the better because then there is something for everyone )
- A bit buggy with some of the menu stuff when u click something and it like clicks on something behind where u clicked or something. Main example would be in the about girls screen ( or what ever it is ) when u are in the about for one girl if u click somewhere else where another girls thing was to go to the about to them it will switch to them like its just a pop up over the screen and u can still interact with the stuff behind it

thats all i can think of for now i will update the review if i think of other stuff or as newer releases come out if i have mroe to add or take away from the review

I have no idea what the fuck I stumbled upon, but its a masterpiece in the making. Its like Adonis and Aphrodite devolving into a mass of sweat and meat in front of you; you aren't quite sure why its happening, but damn is it still sexy.
Example, I'm currently the dom daddy to a vampire and an elf, and a petite goth-ish demigod is swapping places with me once I've thoroughly staked that ass. This is after I was in space, killing hostile insect predators with a runeblade while wearing a lion helmet. Also I think I soul raped someone into a higher state of being. Personal theory, all of this is possible because I relentlessly fuck my sexbot and cat-girl surprise roommates (don't tell me if I'm wrong, let me dream).
So yeah, its a hell of a trip, I don't think shrooms could put together a better ride.

Excellent game.

Animations 5/5
Story, so far 5/5
Dialog 5/5
Characters 5/5

The story so far is very relaxing, and I haven't felt the need to skip any of the dialog. The music choices fit the game, but are a bit high on the volume. The H-scenes are very good, smooth, have nice angles and no crazy camera movements; good job. Noting that the game waste no time getting to that H-content, and that it's well written . Also noting that this game is almost 6 Gigs for it's initial release. I've only played about 30 mins, but rate this game an easy 5-star.

Worth a playthough. Keep it up!

Version reviewed: 1.0 (first release)

I'd like to preface this review by stating that I believe only perfect or near perfect works deserve a full star review. On a scale of 1-100 I'd give Melatonin Magiks a 92ish.

Playtime: 6-8 hours. This is a somewhat rough estimate, I spent the better part of a day on it but not in a single sitting.

Story: In the first ten minutes you may ask yourself "What the fuck did I download?". However it quickly manages to sweep you along with it.

Dialogue:
+All of the many main and side characters have three different flavors based off of what you have them call you. There might be more than three, I didn't check for any secret names.
+Each character's personality is properly portrayed through their words (and actions).
*Text emojis are present. This may be a non-issue for many, I just personally dislike it.
*Asterisks are somewhat common to show actions through text and also around laughing. Probably another personal hangup of mine, but as a heavy reader they had me checking below for footnotes/translator's notes like an idiot several times.

Visuals/interface:
+There are a ton of animations.
+Holy shit is there a lot of animations.
*Adding a "Realms" button instead of nesting realms inside the "Outside" interface would be a significant QoL change.
-Animations loop in the sense that they repeat, but they do not loop to the beginning of the animation. It is very strange to see a prim and proper lady cross her legs, then go back in time and do it again.
-Backgrounds often clash with the Koikatsu models.
-The interface could really use a facelift.

Smut:
+There is a lot of it.
+++Dirty talk of breeding and impregnation is common.
---I'm not going to be able to blow my gasket if MC doesn't actually put buns in the ovens.
*Scenes are rather short, since they're everywhere that's probably a good thing as that allows you to get back to the next section of a girl's story sooner. Most will be edging rather than nutting though.
-Scenes feel too common. Put the pitchforks away.

Overall I'm glad that I picked this up, I need MOAR.