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rebirth095

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Saying Mirror isn't a hot story anymore would be an understatement, I wonder if she can garner more excitement for it.
Personally, I think we're at diminishing returns. I think most readers are looking for some closure, and the structure of multiple parts per chapter is starting to hurt the anticipation. There's only so many times we can repeat "you don't know the true story".

I think it had a potential second wind when Joel was feminized. The audience for her stories are here for feminization stories. And also, I think, wanting something original/innovative. With sapphirefoxx, I grew tired because every story (even the ones that weren't magic) are all effectively "magic fox" stories. For JoeSixPack, I grew tired because they played it too safe with explicit content.

With Melissa, there feels like a familiar formula playing out again. I love "slow" transformation stories. But so many of the recent stories follow the exact same progression. I would have loved to see something like: a female alter ego is implanted unknown to the main character, and "she" starts feminizing their "shared" body, to the (initially unknown) horror of the main character. Or maybe play with slow magic, or auto-closets, or bodysuits, etc. Or come up with your own new mechanism. Or at least a new type of character. Or change in relationship?

I think something MILF did better than Mirror is that when the former boss becomes the new daughter (granted I wish this was developed more), there's more interaction in those new roles. You can feel how their relationship was perverted into this new one. Mirror, I've never really felt an actual change in roles. Change in relationship, yes (clearly the relationship is estranged). But I've never felt like Marina now sees Andrew as her aunt, or Elena seeing Marina as a niece. So from a story perspective, it doesn't really register as a relationship transformation to me.

That's where Bestie feels too familiar to me. Is it just a retread of Not so Temporary Roommate? Because I swear, if this ends where after all this work into feminizing him, the girlfriend just ships him off with some other dude, I'll be so frustrated.
 

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Personally, I think we're at diminishing returns. I think most readers are looking for some closure, and the structure of multiple parts per chapter is starting to hurt the anticipation. There's only so many times we can repeat "you don't know the true story".

I think it had a potential second wind when Joel was feminized. The audience for her stories are here for feminization stories. And also, I think, wanting something original/innovative. With sapphirefoxx, I grew tired because every story (even the ones that weren't magic) are all effectively "magic fox" stories. For JoeSixPack, I grew tired because they played it too safe with explicit content.

With Melissa, there feels like a familiar formula playing out again. I love "slow" transformation stories. But so many of the recent stories follow the exact same progression. I would have loved to see something like: a female alter ego is implanted unknown to the main character, and "she" starts feminizing their "shared" body, to the (initially unknown) horror of the main character. Or maybe play with slow magic, or auto-closets, or bodysuits, etc. Or come up with your own new mechanism. Or at least a new type of character. Or change in relationship?

I think something MILF did better than Mirror is that when the former boss becomes the new daughter (granted I wish this was developed more), there's more interaction in those new roles. You can feel how their relationship was perverted into this new one. Mirror, I've never really felt an actual change in roles. Change in relationship, yes (clearly the relationship is estranged). But I've never felt like Marina now sees Andrew as her aunt, or Elena seeing Marina as a niece. So from a story perspective, it doesn't really register as a relationship transformation to me.

That's where Bestie feels too familiar to me. Is it just a retread of Not so Temporary Roommate? Because I swear, if this ends where after all this work into feminizing him, the girlfriend just ships him off with some other dude, I'll be so frustrated.
The frustration from not so temporary roomate still there , you remind me everything now
 

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Personally, I think we're at diminishing returns. I think most readers are looking for some closure, and the structure of multiple parts per chapter is starting to hurt the anticipation. There's only so many times we can repeat "you don't know the true story".

I think it had a potential second wind when Joel was feminized. The audience for her stories are here for feminization stories. And also, I think, wanting something original/innovative. With sapphirefoxx, I grew tired because every story (even the ones that weren't magic) are all effectively "magic fox" stories. For JoeSixPack, I grew tired because they played it too safe with explicit content.

With Melissa, there feels like a familiar formula playing out again. I love "slow" transformation stories. But so many of the recent stories follow the exact same progression. I would have loved to see something like: a female alter ego is implanted unknown to the main character, and "she" starts feminizing their "shared" body, to the (initially unknown) horror of the main character. Or maybe play with slow magic, or auto-closets, or bodysuits, etc. Or come up with your own new mechanism. Or at least a new type of character. Or change in relationship?

I think something MILF did better than Mirror is that when the former boss becomes the new daughter (granted I wish this was developed more), there's more interaction in those new roles. You can feel how their relationship was perverted into this new one. Mirror, I've never really felt an actual change in roles. Change in relationship, yes (clearly the relationship is estranged). But I've never felt like Marina now sees Andrew as her aunt, or Elena seeing Marina as a niece. So from a story perspective, it doesn't really register as a relationship transformation to me.

That's where Bestie feels too familiar to me. Is it just a retread of Not so Temporary Roommate? Because I swear, if this ends where after all this work into feminizing him, the girlfriend just ships him off with some other dude, I'll be so frustrated.
In writing there's the theory there are only seven types of stories to be told. There's also the idea that writers only have a limited number of stories in them to tell. And finally, there's also the question about how much an author should deviate to please their audience, e.g. how much deviations can Star Wars make in their storytelling to still constitute as 'real Star Wars' according to their fanbase? I imagine these are difficult things to juggle for Melissa, as the same could apply to her work as well.

For Mirror specifically, I think a big reason for the cold streak is the occasional long time between updates where nothing of note really happens. In an ideal world Melissa was better off if she had completed the full story in detail before she ever started publishing it so she could publish some parts combined so prevent less interesting 'cliffhangers' to serve as cliffhangers. Having to wait a week or more for yet an other not very interesting update killed a lot of the momentum. I feel some of the convoluted parts of the story feel even more so because of the poorly paced rolled out rolling out of the story.
 

rebirth095

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I imagine these are difficult things to juggle for Melissa, as the same could apply to her work as well.
All that is true. But I think there's an even more fundamental restriction at play, which is there's a limited number of stories that are appropriate for a type of distribution/media. I love captions. But there's fundamental limitations to captions where there's types of stories/story telling that are ill-suited for that type of media. Now, to be clear: I do not prescribe to the belief that the number of stories (not story types) are finite. I believe any author has it in them to write as many stories as they want. Good stories? Different question. But so long as the body is healthy and the mind is willing, I believe a writer can keep writing as long as they wish.

However, any kind of medium has positives and negatives. We've talked about this before, but I think more so than ever, we're seeing the fallout of publishing material immediately as it's finished, and cutting up chapters into parts.

The positives are that it's a regular output, and it supports a patreon model which funds more output.

But the negatives are pretty obvious. Stories benefit from editing, which you really can't do. Not the type of editing that enables you to look at your story as a whole.

And most importantly, it naturally incentivizes each part to end on a mini-cliffhanger to encourage continued subscription. This problem isn't unique to Melissa. Most creators on that space, especially after a year or so on the platform, start falling into this pattern.

And perhaps the biggest negative (at least it would be for me as an author): It means that you're committed to a story even if you realize there are problems that require rework. I think most people assume and understand how patreon creators get burned out. I mean, we all get burned out on our jobs even if we love what we do because it's the same thing, day in day out.

But to me, it's not just that I'd get burned out doing it regularly. It's the problem of not being able to pivot. If there's a story that I started as an idea that interested me, but I got far enough that it satisfied my curiosity: I'd just either finish it quick just to say it's done, or be satisfied enough to leave it as reference and move on to something else. But I have that luxury because I don't publish those works.

I feel some of the convoluted parts of the story feel even more so because of the poorly paced rolled out rolling out of the story.
Or conversely, parts get increasingly poorly paced because of the "need" to address an issue brought on in previous parts that could have been solved by editing if the story allowed for it. But since you can't edit the previous parts, you're stuck with info-dumps to try to clear up where the story is at. You often hear stories about how XYZ movie was in an unwatchable state, only to be saved in editing during post production.
 

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I’d love for Melissa to return to the shorter stories, around 10–30 pages. I’m a bit worn out by the longer ones, especially since so many of them have had unsatisfying endings that feel more like she’s wrapping things up just to move on to the next project.
 

rebirth095

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I’d love for Melissa to return to the shorter stories, around 10–30 pages. I’m a bit worn out by the longer ones, especially since so many of them have had unsatisfying endings that feel more like she’s wrapping things up just to move on to the next project.
You know... I'm starting to realize where a big part of the disconnect comes in for me. A lot of the stories (especially the shorter ones) feel like they should be about a man feminizing another man, given how the end "product" ends up being used by men. I'm not saying I expect deep motivations in my erotica, but they do need to pass the "smell test" for me. Maybe this is just personal bias, but when the end results ends up being some type of "trophy sex-wife", how that "rewards" the feminizer if the feminizer is female leads me to have a bit of a dissatisfaction.

Of course, motivation is part of it. I imagine especially for the shorter stories, the other question that needs answered is the "how is the MC getting convincingly feminized?"
 

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You know... I'm starting to realize where a big part of the disconnect comes in for me. A lot of the stories (especially the shorter ones) feel like they should be about a man feminizing another man, given how the end "product" ends up being used by men. I'm not saying I expect deep motivations in my erotica, but they do need to pass the "smell test" for me. Maybe this is just personal bias, but when the end results ends up being some type of "trophy sex-wife", how that "rewards" the feminizer if the feminizer is female leads me to have a bit of a dissatisfaction.

Of course, motivation is part of it. I imagine especially for the shorter stories, the other question that needs answered is the "how is the MC getting convincingly feminized?"
Responding to your point, this is why I quite like Melissa's 'All he wants for Christmas' story. You get the trophy sex-wife but the feminizer is the wife who still gets the reward of a Lesbian lover. There's no third wheel and it's a simple short story that has a good ending while hitting all the marks for me at least.
 

rebirth095

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Yeah, "All He Wants for Christmas" is a favorite of mine. From the short story side, I have to say, "Money Can't Buy Happiness" is delightfully twisted for me. I enjoy a good corruption story, and I also like that it's a bit of a "monkey's paw" situation. Feminizer got his trophy wife... and it's going to cost him. I find that delightful. My ONLY complaint with that story really is I like the haircut on Page 7 a bit more. It exudes way more "Bitchy Socialite" energy.

I also really enjoyed the motivation and developments in "Dress for Success". That's one of the stories where I could see the premise work as a full length story. Or maybe just the idea of a company feminizing its employees into confident, competent, dominatrix women is hot as hell to me :LOL:

Now that I think of it, maybe that's another route I would have liked for Bestie in the Making. Of course I think it'd be super hot if the girlfriend was feminizing the MC because she prefers being with women, but kind of like in Dress for Success, I would love to see maybe it play out with a little less "protests that don't go anywhere", and instead almost more like riding a high/a corruption story.