Ren'Py Melodic Dates [v1.6] [Poison Adrian]
- Thread starter Poison_Adrian
- Start date
- Oct 3, 2020
- 2,485
- 3,256
Inminent for patrons, in about a month for public!
- Apr 25, 2019
- 638
- 841
typos that I found while playing (I'll probably update this post if I find more as I play)
Intro meeting your sis and hanging out in the pool
"let me this place" should be left me this place
Meeting aimee
"Awww... You so smart and interesting" You're so smart and interesting
Meeting taylor
"I feel connection between her and me." feel a connection
hanging our with Taylor for the first time
"You really know how to put all together" You really know how to put them all together
First song making with Aimee
"It's been ages since no one hugged me like this" I think the expression is since anyone hugged me like this
"I'm glad to have a smart and good musician as you as a a friend!" I think it would read better as I'm happy to have such a smart and good musician like you as a friend!
Going to work for the first time
"I want to ascend soon and not being a trainee professor..." I want to get a promotion soon and be stuck as a trainee professor forever!
"I've asked him about promoting as a professor and she said I need to ..." I've asked him about getting a promotion
Waking up Aimee from the sleepover
"Hey, I've seen she didn't wake up yet. I'm thinking about seeing what she has in the kitchen and making her some breakfast" ->
Hey, I see she hasn't woken up yet. I think I'll go and see what she has in the kitchen and maker her some breakfast
when about to make a third song with Aimee
"You help me, I help ya" I help you
Black tea in the shop looks like black coffee
Taylor's house third visit? (the one where you talk about students in the opening)
"I have the feeling that her parents just pulled him" that his parents pulled him
"why don't we take a break of this?" why don't we take a break on this?
Taylor convo what is the best place in your house
"You say that to annoy me because you know I hate cooking" You're saying that to annoy me because you know I hate cooking
Aimee's house for the cosplay
"...levelling when she said she was gonna made the cosplay" levelling when she said she was gonna make that cosplay
"...this outfit telling me things like those... wow" this outfit telling me these things... wow
In the idle menu at her place while in her cosplay
"Okay, I wanna get used to talk in this cosplay" Okay, I'm gonna get used to this cosplay and talk.
Wanting to play music with her then finishing
"Seems both of us are inspirated" both of us are inspired!
Her showing you the back of the cosplay
"Come on, you look great on it! Or are you afraid they look at you too much?" Come on, you look great in it! Or are you afraid that they'll stare at you too much?
"Come on, it is attention what you deserve!" Come on, it is attention that you deserve!
Third? or Fourth? hangout with Lauren her in a grey shirt with you both on a bed
"What I do know is that you're starring at them all time" staring at them all the time
"Before that we... you know" Before we... you know
Sat 6 in the calendar talking with Laurie in the morning
"I tell you because, since it's weekend and you don't have to work today, maybe you need a guidance through town, after all this time"
"I'm asking because, since it's the weekend and you don't have to work today, maybe you need someone to guide you through town after all this time."
"which will be hardly ever giving that " which will be hardly ever given that
Visiting Freddie for the first time on the weekend
"giving that the" given that the
"that they all are devoted themselves to art" that they all devoted themselves to the art
Meeting Delilah
"Thought you was friends with her parents, my boy" Thought you were friends with his parents, my boy (I'm guessing that the my boy was her being hip? so in that case it should be my guy for all instances otherwise it's weird to call him a boy but later she says she thought he was friends with the parents implying they are the same age)
"Why, I been here..." Why, I've been here...
"You know, I be doing" You know, I've been doing
Taking a walk on the weekend on the street
"I didn't even remember how I enjoy coming to the station and watch the trains go by..." I didn't even remember how I used to enjoy coming to the station and watched trains as they went by...
"believe you me!" believe me!
Seeing Aimee after she says she likes you or after she wears cosplay
"I'm sure she'll look cool on it!" I'm sure she'll look cool in it!
"You already look good on that what you're wearing!" You already look good in what you're wearing!
Sister's tutorial of note playing in order of it flashing minigame
"requerements" requirements
Playing the sequence memorizing game and playing a song to amee in the kitchen
"wait me in the living" wait for me in the living room
"And there she comes..." And here she comes
Getting a bj from Aimee
"I didn't imagine it so big and strong" I didn't imagine it to be so big and strong
"Damn... I knew you are something special" Damn... I knew you were something special
Deepthroating her
"I'm happy you didn't feel this weird" I'm happy you didn't feel this was weird
After deep throat
"Maybe I should go clean myself before I got the outfit stained" Maybe I should go clean myself before I get the outfit stained
Sunday sis telling you about the sex shop opening
"I was thinking about going check it after breakfast" I was thinking about going to check it after breakfast
yoga with Aimee
"This really is a suffering" This really is suffering
Talking with Aimee in yoga' after talking
"I love your talking..." I love talking with you... I think sounds bettter
Talk with Lauren and she asks what you remember about her job
"I love teaching how to sport" I love teaching how to do sports
"give me conversation before going upstairs" Give me a conversation before going upstairs
Giving Aimee a rabbit vibe
"you naughty ya..." you naughty you...
Talking with Aimee
"What ya wanna do know, hon" What ya wanna do now, hon?
Talking with Linda for the first time with her visiting at the faculty
"...and it ain't sound as good now..." and it ain't sounding as good now...
"... I don't have any phone right now..." I don't have a phone right now...
Asking linda about her job
"I... don't do anything else apart from studing music!" studying music!
Meeting linda again first time at her place
"used to organized myself when I was a session musician" used to organize myself when I was a session musician
Writing music with her at her place
"compossing" composing
Visiting Aimee's apartment
"You're in?" You in?
Going to Linda's house after the first time
"I just came into Linda's home and the first time I saw is her receiving me in bra and pants" first thing I saw is her in her bra and panties
"I just bought few clothes" just brought a few clothes
First time visiting Marley
"Most of days," On most days,
"I wanna cover all the place with graphic prints" I wanna cover the whole place with graphic prints
After writing a song for Marley
"I'm glad that we both saw each other works" I'm glad we saw each other's works
I'm able to get a promotion with clef even before going to work and learning about the promotion. If I pay with clef before going to work and learning about the promotion I only get $40 after paying with clef and the notification that I can get promoted still keeps happening. I also tried paying the promotion with clef after the first working day then got $60 but after that I go back to getting $40
"You have promoted at your job" You have been promoted at your job
Getting Aimee's second heart and succeeding
"You're on a genius at this" You're a genius on this
"reward myself with this as much as ya" reward myself with this as much as you
Aimee laying/prone sex
"So you're about to do to me, baby" I don't even know what the intention is for this sentence but I think it should be
You're about to do the same for me, baby... ( saying that you are also about to cum because she gave you a good fuck)
"It was a reflex action" It was a reflex
"Something tells me that you fantasized a few times with this moment" Something tells me that you fantasized a few times about this moment
Going to the skate park and talking to the skater girl (Eleanor)
"but it seems that skating girl from the other girl noticed me. She's coming this way" other day
Writing a song with Eleanor
"periodt" period
"I'm all the time by the campus with the fam" I'm at the campus all the time with the fam
Aimee lunch at your place
"stay for lunk" stay for lunch
"It was so nice to have a company like hers" It was so nice to have her company!
Aimee gettin frisky at your place after playing a song for her
"Wait, Aimee. My sister's left, right?" Wait, Aimee. My sister left right?
"Keep going you too, please..." Keep going...
"Is it because you're afraid that your sister shows up?" Is it because you're afraid your sister will show up?
Aimee's studio cosplaying in a sailor uniform
"matched panties" matching panties
"matched bra" matching bra
"yoou have the best pussy" You have the best pussy
"Haha! You are the best one..." You are the best too
Your sis telling you about the new app feature
"It has now a new feature" It now has a new feature
"you will see now" you will now see
Another date at home with Aimee
"I like being making" I like making
Another lunch date with Aimee at home
"Today, Aimee came have lunch with me again. Since Sis went have lunch" Today, Aimee came to have lunch with me again. Since sis went to have lunch
Christmas Eve night
"Well, time to go dinner with family! That's one of the best part of Christmas" Well, time to go have dinner with family! That's one of the best parts of Christmas
Visting Aimee with choice of playing or writing a song
"I was seeing this one coming" I saw that one coming
Aime as the present
"A present for you and I" A present for you and me
"Feels great to have a cosplayer as your date in Christmas" on Christmas
Laruen BJ
"You're making me feel in heaven, Lauren" You're making me feel like I'm in heaven
and stopping there for now at least
Intro meeting your sis and hanging out in the pool
"let me this place" should be left me this place
Meeting aimee
"Awww... You so smart and interesting" You're so smart and interesting
Meeting taylor
"I feel connection between her and me." feel a connection
hanging our with Taylor for the first time
"You really know how to put all together" You really know how to put them all together
First song making with Aimee
"It's been ages since no one hugged me like this" I think the expression is since anyone hugged me like this
"I'm glad to have a smart and good musician as you as a a friend!" I think it would read better as I'm happy to have such a smart and good musician like you as a friend!
Going to work for the first time
"I want to ascend soon and not being a trainee professor..." I want to get a promotion soon and be stuck as a trainee professor forever!
"I've asked him about promoting as a professor and she said I need to ..." I've asked him about getting a promotion
Waking up Aimee from the sleepover
"Hey, I've seen she didn't wake up yet. I'm thinking about seeing what she has in the kitchen and making her some breakfast" ->
Hey, I see she hasn't woken up yet. I think I'll go and see what she has in the kitchen and maker her some breakfast
when about to make a third song with Aimee
"You help me, I help ya" I help you
Black tea in the shop looks like black coffee
Taylor's house third visit? (the one where you talk about students in the opening)
"I have the feeling that her parents just pulled him" that his parents pulled him
"why don't we take a break of this?" why don't we take a break on this?
Taylor convo what is the best place in your house
"You say that to annoy me because you know I hate cooking" You're saying that to annoy me because you know I hate cooking
Aimee's house for the cosplay
"...levelling when she said she was gonna made the cosplay" levelling when she said she was gonna make that cosplay
"...this outfit telling me things like those... wow" this outfit telling me these things... wow
In the idle menu at her place while in her cosplay
"Okay, I wanna get used to talk in this cosplay" Okay, I'm gonna get used to this cosplay and talk.
Wanting to play music with her then finishing
"Seems both of us are inspirated" both of us are inspired!
Her showing you the back of the cosplay
"Come on, you look great on it! Or are you afraid they look at you too much?" Come on, you look great in it! Or are you afraid that they'll stare at you too much?
"Come on, it is attention what you deserve!" Come on, it is attention that you deserve!
Third? or Fourth? hangout with Lauren her in a grey shirt with you both on a bed
"What I do know is that you're starring at them all time" staring at them all the time
"Before that we... you know" Before we... you know
Sat 6 in the calendar talking with Laurie in the morning
"I tell you because, since it's weekend and you don't have to work today, maybe you need a guidance through town, after all this time"
"I'm asking because, since it's the weekend and you don't have to work today, maybe you need someone to guide you through town after all this time."
"which will be hardly ever giving that " which will be hardly ever given that
Visiting Freddie for the first time on the weekend
"giving that the" given that the
"that they all are devoted themselves to art" that they all devoted themselves to the art
Meeting Delilah
"Thought you was friends with her parents, my boy" Thought you were friends with his parents, my boy (I'm guessing that the my boy was her being hip? so in that case it should be my guy for all instances otherwise it's weird to call him a boy but later she says she thought he was friends with the parents implying they are the same age)
"Why, I been here..." Why, I've been here...
"You know, I be doing" You know, I've been doing
Taking a walk on the weekend on the street
"I didn't even remember how I enjoy coming to the station and watch the trains go by..." I didn't even remember how I used to enjoy coming to the station and watched trains as they went by...
"believe you me!" believe me!
Seeing Aimee after she says she likes you or after she wears cosplay
"I'm sure she'll look cool on it!" I'm sure she'll look cool in it!
"You already look good on that what you're wearing!" You already look good in what you're wearing!
Sister's tutorial of note playing in order of it flashing minigame
"requerements" requirements
Playing the sequence memorizing game and playing a song to amee in the kitchen
"wait me in the living" wait for me in the living room
"And there she comes..." And here she comes
Getting a bj from Aimee
"I didn't imagine it so big and strong" I didn't imagine it to be so big and strong
"Damn... I knew you are something special" Damn... I knew you were something special
Deepthroating her
"I'm happy you didn't feel this weird" I'm happy you didn't feel this was weird
After deep throat
"Maybe I should go clean myself before I got the outfit stained" Maybe I should go clean myself before I get the outfit stained
Sunday sis telling you about the sex shop opening
"I was thinking about going check it after breakfast" I was thinking about going to check it after breakfast
yoga with Aimee
"This really is a suffering" This really is suffering
Talking with Aimee in yoga' after talking
"I love your talking..." I love talking with you... I think sounds bettter
Talk with Lauren and she asks what you remember about her job
"I love teaching how to sport" I love teaching how to do sports
"give me conversation before going upstairs" Give me a conversation before going upstairs
Giving Aimee a rabbit vibe
"you naughty ya..." you naughty you...
Talking with Aimee
"What ya wanna do know, hon" What ya wanna do now, hon?
Talking with Linda for the first time with her visiting at the faculty
"...and it ain't sound as good now..." and it ain't sounding as good now...
"... I don't have any phone right now..." I don't have a phone right now...
Asking linda about her job
"I... don't do anything else apart from studing music!" studying music!
Meeting linda again first time at her place
"used to organized myself when I was a session musician" used to organize myself when I was a session musician
Writing music with her at her place
"compossing" composing
Visiting Aimee's apartment
"You're in?" You in?
Going to Linda's house after the first time
"I just came into Linda's home and the first time I saw is her receiving me in bra and pants" first thing I saw is her in her bra and panties
"I just bought few clothes" just brought a few clothes
First time visiting Marley
"Most of days," On most days,
"I wanna cover all the place with graphic prints" I wanna cover the whole place with graphic prints
After writing a song for Marley
"I'm glad that we both saw each other works" I'm glad we saw each other's works
I'm able to get a promotion with clef even before going to work and learning about the promotion. If I pay with clef before going to work and learning about the promotion I only get $40 after paying with clef and the notification that I can get promoted still keeps happening. I also tried paying the promotion with clef after the first working day then got $60 but after that I go back to getting $40
"You have promoted at your job" You have been promoted at your job
Getting Aimee's second heart and succeeding
"You're on a genius at this" You're a genius on this
"reward myself with this as much as ya" reward myself with this as much as you
Aimee laying/prone sex
"So you're about to do to me, baby" I don't even know what the intention is for this sentence but I think it should be
You're about to do the same for me, baby... ( saying that you are also about to cum because she gave you a good fuck)
"It was a reflex action" It was a reflex
"Something tells me that you fantasized a few times with this moment" Something tells me that you fantasized a few times about this moment
Going to the skate park and talking to the skater girl (Eleanor)
"but it seems that skating girl from the other girl noticed me. She's coming this way" other day
Writing a song with Eleanor
"periodt" period
"I'm all the time by the campus with the fam" I'm at the campus all the time with the fam
Aimee lunch at your place
"stay for lunk" stay for lunch
"It was so nice to have a company like hers" It was so nice to have her company!
Aimee gettin frisky at your place after playing a song for her
"Wait, Aimee. My sister's left, right?" Wait, Aimee. My sister left right?
"Keep going you too, please..." Keep going...
"Is it because you're afraid that your sister shows up?" Is it because you're afraid your sister will show up?
Aimee's studio cosplaying in a sailor uniform
"matched panties" matching panties
"matched bra" matching bra
"yoou have the best pussy" You have the best pussy
"Haha! You are the best one..." You are the best too
Your sis telling you about the new app feature
"It has now a new feature" It now has a new feature
"you will see now" you will now see
Another date at home with Aimee
"I like being making" I like making
Another lunch date with Aimee at home
"Today, Aimee came have lunch with me again. Since Sis went have lunch" Today, Aimee came to have lunch with me again. Since sis went to have lunch
Christmas Eve night
"Well, time to go dinner with family! That's one of the best part of Christmas" Well, time to go have dinner with family! That's one of the best parts of Christmas
Visting Aimee with choice of playing or writing a song
"I was seeing this one coming" I saw that one coming
Aime as the present
"A present for you and I" A present for you and me
"Feels great to have a cosplayer as your date in Christmas" on Christmas
Laruen BJ
"You're making me feel in heaven, Lauren" You're making me feel like I'm in heaven
and stopping there for now at least
Last edited:
- Apr 25, 2019
- 638
- 841
BTW I just spammed meeting Aimee up to Thu 11 and im at the first heart on her menu. I tried clicking hang out with her but it says I need more details about her but I have already gotten all her info and preferences from talking. How do I progress? cuz hovering over the second heart says that I need 8 details about her, 2 of her fav gifts (I gave her an anime wig and a rabbit dildo) and level 5? IDK what level 5 means
Edit: I got it. I guess I needed to give her 2 non sexual items?
Edit: I got it. I guess I needed to give her 2 non sexual items?
Wow! Thank you so much for your feedback and help! Although many of those are not strictly typos but intentional slang and speaking styles in order to add personality to each character, there are many others that are indeed typos or misspelled words, so thank you for telling me! Keep in mind that, even though I'm quite fluent in English, that's not my native language.
Even though that's not strictly a bug, I think I should include the sexual gift as one of the valid gifts to unlock new levels.
When's the 0.7 release here? It's been over a month since patreon release, which was what was planned for public release.
Alright, Melodic Dates v0.7 has been finally released for everyone! I'm sorry for the huge delay, I have many other hobbies to take care of! I hope you enjoy this one nonetheless!
Got two errors due to missing images:
yan_clue4.png until I bought her lewd item
items\hanoco.png with Monica, which means I can't access her progress screen
Also, at one point Monica says "I'm tinny" which should (probably) be "I'm tiny".
And every time I go to work, it says I can get a promotion in exchange for clef, but nothing happens. That's probably a stuck variable, because it was the same before I updated. Is there a console command I could use to get rid of it?
yan_clue4.png until I bought her lewd item
items\hanoco.png with Monica, which means I can't access her progress screen
Also, at one point Monica says "I'm tinny" which should (probably) be "I'm tiny".
And every time I go to work, it says I can get a promotion in exchange for clef, but nothing happens. That's probably a stuck variable, because it was the same before I updated. Is there a console command I could use to get rid of it?
- Jul 14, 2022
- 225
- 471
- Oct 25, 2018
- 368
- 75
- Nov 2, 2017
- 2,684
- 18,653
Melodic Dates [v0.7] [Poison Adrian] Compressed
PC/MAC (3,71GB/2,02GB)
PC/MAC (3,71GB/2,02GB)
You must be registered to see the links
You must be registered to see the links
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content.
Log in or register now.
Last edited:
- Mar 11, 2017
- 691
- 1,389
Any chance of updating the game description to give a little more detail on the pregnancy content?
Sorry to have to ask, but it is one of the limitations of the ridiculous 'pregnancy' tag used here...
Sticking your dick in a heavily bloated woman about to pop off a kid (gross) is worlds away from knocking girls up (yay!), and 'impregnation' should be it's own tag which has nothing to do with fucking heavily pregnant women, often not even your own kid! (yuck!).
So what sort of 'pregnancy' content do you have here?
Sorry to have to ask, but it is one of the limitations of the ridiculous 'pregnancy' tag used here...
Sticking your dick in a heavily bloated woman about to pop off a kid (gross) is worlds away from knocking girls up (yay!), and 'impregnation' should be it's own tag which has nothing to do with fucking heavily pregnant women, often not even your own kid! (yuck!).
So what sort of 'pregnancy' content do you have here?
- Oct 3, 2020
- 2,485
- 3,256
