Yeah, this is turning into a joke. Each new scene appears 5 new and useless characters that clearly have no relevance within the story.
toooooooo much nonsense dialogs and no action
Yuka 0.6 it's not clear
It'is because the scene where she is spanked is not visible
That's what I feared, because of all the bla bla , the 0.6 suddenly ends up forgetting Umi.
So much bla bla, it's good especially in Japan / Manga type games but to the detriment of the content behind.
It'is because the scene where she is spanked is not visible
That's what I feared, because of all the bla bla , the 0.6 suddenly ends up forgetting Umi.
So much bla bla, it's good especially in Japan / Manga type games but to the detriment of the content behind.
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I agree that the rush of new characters was very jarring, although I definitely like some of the new girls model wise much more than the og girls. Seems like maybe the Dev has a bit of an internalized bias against the tig ol bitty club, cause the majority of those girls seem to be set up in a seeming adversarial role, while the girls that are friendly from the get go are almost all (not Mia not Ivy) in the Itty bitty titty club.
I also liked most of the new characters, the problem is the excess.
The dev will need to draw a line of who the central characters are, what is the current story arc, which characters are relevant to the current story arc and if the rest of the characters (who are not the main ones and are not in relevance in the current arc) will still be relevant in the future.
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Just started this and while I like the look of the female characters so far, the script needs serious proofreading. Pretty bad syntax and contextual errors. No real spelling issues and not too many pronoun issues, so far(just got to the first scene at the track with both Dorothy and Beatrice), but the sentence structure is pretty tough to follow and there are many unnecessary lines of dialogue(redundant lines, saying the exact same thing but in different wording).
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theres been enough side characters to make a spin off or sequel lol, i've lost track of some characters at this point but still enjoy the ride, maybe a in game chart or something can connect everything together at some point?
interesting project, but I can't play it because of the color of the text, white is confused with the light backgrounds 
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Definitely think all harem games with more than like 4 LIs should have a character chart ala Grandma's House or My New Memories (or a few others of which the names currently escape me) especially when we consider the often months in between either updates to the game, or scenes with said LI, as a refresher/general info.
So Astrid turn down other schools wanting her to join (not her first pick school her sister goes too)... But now she wants to get revenge on those schools... By showing she can play.... wat? But then the current principle did the same as them (wanted her for her school), but apparently shes ok ? Then we have the MC going along with it and praising her like a dumbass.
Common sense out the window!.
Not really getting why the tea ceremony club is suppose to be this ultimate club for prestige rich familes and just cause someone is leadership, they are someone special?... its just making tea! at school! What stops commoners from being good at making tea to earn leadership positions. Im assuming their competition would be like the cooking club. reality cooking shows you see on TV.
Also, how does a school newspaper club compete against schools ? If clubs a centered around competing. Its redunant, But the MC had much praise for them. It could be useful yes (informing the school whats going on in the competitions). but no way important and certainly not for competition which seems to be the focus. What about teamed events such as waterpolo, soccer, bastketball, vollyball type clubs.. Im guessing they dont exsist when clubs are limited to 2 people ? Sporting clubs based on teamwork. (teamed sports are always well participated in school competitions)
I get the idea of clubs versing other schools as the main focus, but cant help feel its missing something.
Not far into it, on Astrids date. but thats my observations up to this point. In small detail. Just felt I had to say something by now with how smug the MC seems to get.
Common sense out the window!.
Not really getting why the tea ceremony club is suppose to be this ultimate club for prestige rich familes and just cause someone is leadership, they are someone special?... its just making tea! at school! What stops commoners from being good at making tea to earn leadership positions. Im assuming their competition would be like the cooking club. reality cooking shows you see on TV.
Also, how does a school newspaper club compete against schools ? If clubs a centered around competing. Its redunant, But the MC had much praise for them. It could be useful yes (informing the school whats going on in the competitions). but no way important and certainly not for competition which seems to be the focus. What about teamed events such as waterpolo, soccer, bastketball, vollyball type clubs.. Im guessing they dont exsist when clubs are limited to 2 people ? Sporting clubs based on teamwork. (teamed sports are always well participated in school competitions)
I get the idea of clubs versing other schools as the main focus, but cant help feel its missing something.
Not far into it, on Astrids date. but thats my observations up to this point. In small detail. Just felt I had to say something by now with how smug the MC seems to get.
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So after finishing the current content. I can say I liked the game.
While my previous post is outlining what I thought of the clubs. There were some qualties about the MC I didnt particularly like, but there was other qualities I did like. I am a little keen on learning his true background. Is he really a sleeping tiger?. It hints he has people in the background working for him every so often when he makes phone calls. Kinda mysterious I guess.
I think tying some slice of life stuff club stuff, in with some sinster gang wars behind the scenes actually makes it quite interesting. So I guess I like the direction that has gone for it. Is his sister going to show up ? Is she a bro con!
As for the ecchi part of the game. Iquite fond the the eye candy that is display constantly throught the game, such as panty shots, or leg shots. It jsut keeps things interesting and fun. some of the more hentai scenes were fun as well. I certainly enjoyed what Britney had coming. My favourit scene was with Yuka. Mostly cause I do enjoy some urination Voyeurism. Tho I understand it is a little dirty and not enjoyed by others, but its perverted fun (an no, I dont like scat). Her getting caught (with both scenes) hopes it leads to more of her perverted awakening with similar scenes Tho it seems odd we missed her spanking?
Feels like a few scenes get forgotten about, such like, was when Lucia was racing Student 1? Who won that race lol. it jumped to the next scene as soon as they dived in? or did I click to fast or something.
Seemed like a good cast of characters. But I dont want to speak much about them yet, as it be more to write. But like always, the camera scoop journalist girl always seems ot be the most annoying in games like these <.< But that reflects RL too.
I do want to say that I feel at times the characters dribble on way to much. I can understand the idea behind it (trying to get much development into the characters) , but at times I feel like just skipping parts as I dont care about all the nitty gritty bits. I'd post examples s, but i could save it for another time.
I give it a Seems like it could be really interesting, and ecchi.
While my previous post is outlining what I thought of the clubs. There were some qualties about the MC I didnt particularly like, but there was other qualities I did like. I am a little keen on learning his true background. Is he really a sleeping tiger?. It hints he has people in the background working for him every so often when he makes phone calls. Kinda mysterious I guess.
I think tying some slice of life stuff club stuff, in with some sinster gang wars behind the scenes actually makes it quite interesting. So I guess I like the direction that has gone for it. Is his sister going to show up ? Is she a bro con!
As for the ecchi part of the game. Iquite fond the the eye candy that is display constantly throught the game, such as panty shots, or leg shots. It jsut keeps things interesting and fun. some of the more hentai scenes were fun as well. I certainly enjoyed what Britney had coming. My favourit scene was with Yuka. Mostly cause I do enjoy some urination Voyeurism. Tho I understand it is a little dirty and not enjoyed by others, but its perverted fun (an no, I dont like scat). Her getting caught (with both scenes) hopes it leads to more of her perverted awakening with similar scenes
Tho it seems odd we missed her spanking?Feels like a few scenes get forgotten about, such like, was when Lucia was racing Student 1? Who won that race lol. it jumped to the next scene as soon as they dived in? or did I click to fast or something.
Seemed like a good cast of characters. But I dont want to speak much about them yet, as it be more to write. But like always, the camera scoop journalist girl always seems ot be the most annoying in games like these <.< But that reflects RL too.
I do want to say that I feel at times the characters dribble on way to much. I can understand the idea behind it (trying to get much development into the characters) , but at times I feel like just skipping parts as I dont care about all the nitty gritty bits. I'd post examples s, but i could save it for another time.
I give it a
Seems like it could be really interesting, and ecchi.
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So I wrote fairly positive review for the version 0.3, now it's 0.6 and almost everything I mentioned, except for the amount of characters on screen and visuals, has gone for the worst. I honestly don't know why I still read this. I mean, I know, because I really like renders and character design, it probably the best Koikatsu design I have ever seen, but I feel like I just can’t go through this no more. You heard enough criticism, I will try to give some advices.
PLEASE TRIM THE FAT! When you create a scene, think how it moves the story forward, or if it creates a potential for (preferably sexual) interaction with a character, what information should the reader get from it, and how to transmit this information, visually or through character’s words. That’s it, that’s enough, cut. We don’t need to spend so many time in the head of this photographer girl Hoshiko. Do we even need to spend any time in her head? No!
PLEASE FOCUS ON THE MC! Why there is so many scenes, where female character’s just talk to each other and it doesn’t leads to anything and just waste’s out time? Ask yourself, do we even need this scenes? Are you trying to pass some Bechsdel test or write a porn? Don’t introduce character to the reader, introduce character to MC! For example, let’s take a scene with Hoshiko. We can remake it entirely, so it all happen’s from MC POV. MC walks into the school, overhears Yumeni and Eva dialog (not all of it, only the crucial parts, that Yumeni is a gamer and into cosplay, that Eva interested about webcam), and then he sees that Hoshiko pervs on girls and photographs they're asses. And only after MC catches and interrogates her (preferably in some sexual way), she tells him all about her motivations, and dreams, e.t.c. Here, we successfully shorten the scene, didn’t loose any critical plot point and created potential interaction. Isn’t it nice? Talking about things that’s nice…
PLEASE DEVELOP ALREADY EXISTING RELATIONSHIPS! It doesn't mean you shouldn't add more character, I will be the last man to say that. But don’t forget to develop already existing relationships, and only then add more “logs” into the fire (hehehe). Can I please have some porn in my porn game? Update 0.6 and all I got was some lousy blowjob and handjob (I’m not counting dream scenes and someone’s sick imagination, if it didn’t happened in the story, I haven’t seen that, suck it). If you think that girls don’t ready for that (despite the fact some of them walking around leaving puddles), make it happen with a teacher, or create some whorish side character, just anything. You have excellent taste for eroticism, all this ass shots and short skirts, kisses and touches, some boobs here and pussy there, that’s all very cool and creates a lot erotic tension, that’s wonderful, I like it. But this is porn, enough teasing, we should be moving forward, don’t you think?
It is a pain to read your novel now. It’s like a swamp, slog, I wish I could write all this excess text, only so I could trim and cut it later. But there is still chance to change things for the better.
PLEASE TRIM THE FAT! When you create a scene, think how it moves the story forward, or if it creates a potential for (preferably sexual) interaction with a character, what information should the reader get from it, and how to transmit this information, visually or through character’s words. That’s it, that’s enough, cut. We don’t need to spend so many time in the head of this photographer girl Hoshiko. Do we even need to spend any time in her head? No!
PLEASE FOCUS ON THE MC! Why there is so many scenes, where female character’s just talk to each other and it doesn’t leads to anything and just waste’s out time? Ask yourself, do we even need this scenes? Are you trying to pass some Bechsdel test or write a porn? Don’t introduce character to the reader, introduce character to MC! For example, let’s take a scene with Hoshiko. We can remake it entirely, so it all happen’s from MC POV. MC walks into the school, overhears Yumeni and Eva dialog (not all of it, only the crucial parts, that Yumeni is a gamer and into cosplay, that Eva interested about webcam), and then he sees that Hoshiko pervs on girls and photographs they're asses. And only after MC catches and interrogates her (preferably in some sexual way), she tells him all about her motivations, and dreams, e.t.c. Here, we successfully shorten the scene, didn’t loose any critical plot point and created potential interaction. Isn’t it nice? Talking about things that’s nice…
PLEASE DEVELOP ALREADY EXISTING RELATIONSHIPS! It doesn't mean you shouldn't add more character, I will be the last man to say that. But don’t forget to develop already existing relationships, and only then add more “logs” into the fire (hehehe). Can I please have some porn in my porn game? Update 0.6 and all I got was some lousy blowjob and handjob (I’m not counting dream scenes and someone’s sick imagination, if it didn’t happened in the story, I haven’t seen that, suck it). If you think that girls don’t ready for that (despite the fact some of them walking around leaving puddles), make it happen with a teacher, or create some whorish side character, just anything. You have excellent taste for eroticism, all this ass shots and short skirts, kisses and touches, some boobs here and pussy there, that’s all very cool and creates a lot erotic tension, that’s wonderful, I like it. But this is porn, enough teasing, we should be moving forward, don’t you think?
It is a pain to read your novel now. It’s like a swamp, slog, I wish I could write all this excess text, only so I could trim and cut it later. But there is still chance to change things for the better.
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Hey, how's it going guys?
This will probably be the last post before the update that should be coming out in late November or early December.
I don't want to get too much into the reasons for such a big delay in the update....but let's just say it's family and work problems.
Now about the game. I think I did a pretty technically good job and satisfied part of my and your wishes.
Technical part.
What's added:
Section "Clubs" where you will have access to all members in their personal profile with information about them.
Section "Students" where you can find all students who are not in clubs or gangs.
Section "Gallery" where you can quickly replay the scene that interests you.
What will be added in the next updates:
Section "Biography" each student will have this section in their profile where you can learn more about them. What exactly will be inside remains a mystery
Section "Gangs" where each gang will have a personal page with its own list of members and information about them.
Section "Ranking Schools" where will be a list of all schools that participate in the competition. As the game progresses, each school page will be updated.
A personal profile of each student. As club members, other students will also have their own unique profile with their information and biography.
Also some sections will be added later as the story progresses.
Now a little bit about remaking the game.
What was added/changed/removed:
"Added" the main character's backstory about his family and his goals.
"Added" new scenes with side students in the background for full reality from day 1.
"Added" new scenes with the main girls from day 1.
"Added" community in the form of social status for special privileged persons. Section "Communities" will also be added later.
"Added" the old format of the game with a loading screen and a schedule of visiting clubs each day.
"Changed" the game's focus on the main character. Now 80% will be from 1 or 3 person views.
"Changed" from day 9 the game will be played from the side of the main character. The scenes where we were observers have been redone.
"Changed" the rule to limit the number of students in a club. Now anyone who can pass the interview can join the clubs.
"Removed" scenes with unnecessary information.
I would like to clarify that from day 9 the game will be remade under the old game format. Where the story will be told from the side of the main character. Therefore, some scenes that don't relate in any way will be removed or postponed in the draft for the future.
I'm still working on the update at my own pace and don't want to impose any pressure. If I realize that the update won't be ready I'll slightly postpone the release date. But in any way you'll see the update this year.
Who just started playing the game, I recommend waiting for the new version.
P.S. For those who were wondering, it's not possible to subscribe to my patreon page right now due to the fact that I have paused all payments. Until I release an update I don't want to charge any money.
If you have any questions I'm always in touch here or on discord.
BRdsky
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Welcome back, Mentor. It's good to see you here again.
I'm glad to inform you that the game release will be February 15th for public access. I'll post a changelog closer to the release date so you can see what's in this update.
I want to thank every single person who support this project. Thank you all. If you have any questions, feel free to ask in discord.
BRdsky.
