VN Ren'Py Abandoned Mesmerized [v0.1] [KreiVN]

3.50 star(s) 2 Votes

UrchinHank

Member
Oct 21, 2017
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The premise and art seems promising, but I do already back the other Mesmerized game so was surprised by the name. I do wish the developer skill, and more importantly luck. I will try this game out at some point.
 

sergesan

Active Member
Aug 3, 2018
604
1,222
opening reads interessting but tooo little content for the start....wish u all best luck and will see u later in time...merry christmas....
 

zeraligator

Well-Known Member
May 25, 2018
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Seems to have a lack of tenses for the verbs.
I.E. banish instead of banished, expect instead of expected, reach instead of reached.
 

Zeph3r

Member
Oct 22, 2020
133
184
Tried it out. Honest criticism: The initial premise of the game is interesting, but there's not really much to work off of from what little is currently available. It would help if the dev gave a more detailed explanation of their plans with the game going forward, such as future tags. I get not wanting to spoil future content, but the genre that the dev seems to be going for is already heavily saturated and there's not much to attract the attention of players as of rn. The fact that there is so little content in the initial release probably actually hurts the game as usually the first update helps us to gauge how much content we're going to get per update. Heck there wasn't even any sexual content and this is being marketed on a porn site. Hope this criticism was of some help and best of luck to the dev, as I said at the start the game's premise is interesting, there's just a lot of work that needs to be done for the game and its marketing in its current state.
 

szx1990

Newbie
Dec 12, 2021
19
190
Great game and interesting story! Can't wait for future updates, especially for the pregnancy contents! :LOL:
 
3.50 star(s) 2 Votes